Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel ):Shayri-E-Dard

Sajid_Ghayel

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Zulm humne na saha humne kataiee gardan
Woh bhi zinda hai kaha jisne bachaiee gardan

Usme gairat hi nahi woh bhi kisi ka kya ho
Jisne har baat pe apni hai jhukaiee gardan

Koi beta hai kaha pohche us bulandi tak
Jaise khaleel* ko bête* ne thamaiee gardan

Sabse pyaara hai munafa yeh dar_e_rehmat me
Sabse behtar hai shahido ki kamaiee gardan

Tere mehfooz rahe udte kabootar SAJID
Humne sarhad pe hawa.O me udaiee garden

Sajid Ghayel

*PBUH


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manjum

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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2011, 06:45:39 AM »

bahut badiya sajidji...

Applause


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nirala

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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2011, 08:01:02 AM »

Sajid Sahab-
aapne hila ke rakh dia aaj.
behtareen nagma ji-
isse behtar ho hi nahi skta kuch.
bemishal .
"
gardan ki ahmiyat wo kya jaane janaab
har dar pe jo jhukate hain jo Gardan
"
thanx
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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2011, 08:02:56 AM »

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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2011, 09:45:15 AM »

sajid bhai,
is lajawab pesh-kash ke liye aapko dil ke har kone se badhai..jitna aapko padhte hain aur padhne ki ichcha hoti hai..
bahoot behtreen,
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ParwaaZ

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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2011, 10:11:39 AM »

Janab Sajid Sahab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janaab kafi alag hai aapka andaz e bayaaN
Achche ahsaas O khayaal aur khub ashaar kahe hai aapne

Daad kabool kijiye....

Chaliye aapki kalaam par aate hai..

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on January 17, 2011, 06:33:07 AM

Zulm humne na saha humne kataiee gardan
Woh bhi zinda hai kaha jisne bachaiee gardan

Kia matla kahaa hai janab Behad khoob ..
Daad hazir hai...
Haan janab "kaha" nahi kahaaN aise kahiyeNga.. talaffuz sahiN lageNga..

Usme gairat hi nahi woh bhi kisi ka kya ho
Jisne har baat pe apni hai jhukaiee gardan

Masha Allah kia haq baat kahi hai aapne..
Daad hazir hai janab...

Koi beta hai kaha pohche us bulandi tak
Jaise khaleel* ko bête* ne thamaiee gardan

Hmmm is ashaar tak pahuNch nahi sake ..

Sabse pyaara hai munafa yeh dar_e_rehmat me
Sabse behtar hai shahido ki kamaiee gardan

Waah jee kia kahne ...

Tere mehfooz rahe udte kabootar SAJID
Humne sarhad pe hawa.O me udaiee garden

Kia baat hai... Behad khoob daad..

Jalaa kar gar padosi ka sochta huN
FeleNgi aag bhi to kisi aur janeeb

Sajid Ghayel

*PBUH

Janab behad khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Aur kafi hadh tak bher band kiya hai aapne is kalaam ko..
Mubarak ho janab...

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez....


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dead heart

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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2011, 12:44:10 PM »

Bahaut khoob Sajid jee..
Daad hazir hai..

Parwaaz jee,
Bahaut acha shaer..

Clapping Smiley

Khush rahiye..!


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tamanna.pt

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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2011, 02:10:18 PM »

Waah Waah Sajid ji , bahut khoob bahut achha likha hai aapne, 1st , 2nd and 5th sher to bahut acche lage mujhe.


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sbechain

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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2011, 06:09:43 PM »

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on January 17, 2011, 06:33:07 AM

*PBUH

BEHTREEN TEHREER SAJID SAHAB HAZRAT IBRAHIM AUR HAZRAT ISMAIL RAZI ALLAH TALA KI BADAAI KITNE SULHE HUE ANDAAZ MEIN 3RD ASHAR MEIN KIYA HAI .BAHUT KHOOB


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2011, 05:20:23 PM »

Bahut Khub Sajid Ji


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2011, 11:04:56 AM »

Quote from: manjum on January 17, 2011, 06:45:39 AM

bahut badiya sajidji...

Applause

Nawazish Karam Manjum Jee..... Usual Smile


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: Humne Kataiee Gardan.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2011, 12:31:54 AM »

wah ji wah ghayal ji.
last two lines r very very nice.


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