ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: October 07, 2013, 02:17:42 AM »

Bahut Khoob.!!

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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #16 on: October 07, 2013, 05:28:04 AM »

Quote from: saahill on October 06, 2013, 07:31:24 PM

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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #18 on: October 07, 2013, 01:41:47 PM »

Waaaaaaaaah.. behtareen peshkash zarra ji...mujhe aapki yeh ghazal bahut pasand aayi.. tareef ke alfaaz nahi... hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega..

mat rihaa kar aseer zulf-e-daraaz
zabt kitnaa ab aazmaanaa hai

raaz-e-dil kab ayaaN kiya “zarraa”
ye sukhan-goyee bas bahaanaa hai
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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #19 on: October 07, 2013, 07:07:58 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on October 06, 2013, 07:55:47 PM

waah waah bahut khoob

Shukriya Saini sahab


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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #20 on: October 07, 2013, 07:20:42 PM »

Quote from: zarraa on October 06, 2013, 05:58:30 PM

ab hawaa hai n aab-o-daanaa hai
bas chaman meiN ik aashiyaanaa hai

(aab-o-daanaa = water and food)

keh rahee hai sabaa bhi ab ke baras
fasl-e-gul ka naheeN thikaanaa hai

(sabaa = morning breeze, fasl-e-gul = spring season)

saath khushiyoN ka chand-rozaa hai
gham se rishhtaa barhaa puraanaa hai

(chand-rozaa = temporary)

kuchh to rehmat bhi ho chalee dushwaar
kuchh jafaaoN ka ye zamaanaa hai

(rehmat = mercy, jafaa = opression)

jee to kartaa hai is ko maan leiN sach
ye jo teraa meraa fasaanaa hai

laa-makaaN hum haiN dukh naheeN is ka
dil teraa soonaa aastaanaa hai

(laa-makaaN = homeless, aastaanaa = abode)

mehv-e-deed-khiraam meiN n tha hosh
ke ye aanaa teraa ke jaanaa hai

(mehv-e-deed-khiraam = immersed in watching the graceful walk)

mat rihaa kar aseer zulf-e-daraaz
zabt kitnaa ab aazmaanaa hai

(aseer =one who is imprisoned, zulf-e-daraaz = long hair, zabt = control)

keemtee shai chhupaa rakheee jaaye
teree nekee teraa khazaanaa hai

(shai = thing)

jo n toofaaN meiN bhi bujhee thi lau
ashq-o-aah se use bachaanaa hai

(lau = flame)

raaz-e-dil kab ayaaN kiyaa “zarraa”
ye sukhan-goyee bas bahaanaa hai

(ayaaN = evident, sukhan-goyee = poetry telling)

- ZARRAA

waah waah beheeen ghzal hai sab ashaa.r bohat ache our pur asar hain zarra ji ,.............bohat bohat c daad,..........


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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #21 on: October 07, 2013, 08:02:45 PM »

bahut khoob


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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #22 on: October 07, 2013, 08:09:06 PM »

Zarra Sahaab Aadaab...!

Kia kahne janab bada hi umdaa andaaz hai aapka, khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz de jaate haiN...

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab... Is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #23 on: October 07, 2013, 09:38:56 PM »

Quote from: sahal on October 06, 2013, 07:59:37 PM

ab hawaa hai n aab-o-daanaa hai
bas chaman meiN ik aashiyaanaa hai

mat rihaa kar aseer zulf-e-daraaz
zabt kitnaa ab aazmaanaa hai

raaz-e-dil kab ayaaN kiya “zarraa”
ye sukhan-goyee bas bahaanaa hai

WAAH WAAH BOHUT KHOOB ZARRA JI
UMDA KALAAM THA Applause

Aap ke saath aur qadradaanee ka tah e dil se aabhaaree hoon Sahal ji


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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #24 on: October 07, 2013, 11:56:54 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on October 06, 2013, 08:25:52 PM

dikash,dilfareb,dilnawa, ghazal !

Sheba ji ... Shukriya aapne is ghazal ko tawajjo di aur apne khaas andaaz mein apni daad ki mohar lagaayee Usual Smile

Bahaut bahaut shukriya aap ka !


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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #25 on: October 08, 2013, 01:32:51 AM »

Thank you very much my friend ..... for your kind words and the rau .... take care !

Quote from: soudagar on October 06, 2013, 08:26:14 PM

just ossume and one rau for u zaara sir...........lajwab peshkash behad khubsurat gazal.. hazaron diliiii daad


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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #26 on: October 08, 2013, 10:31:26 AM »

Quote from: ahilya on October 06, 2013, 08:28:45 PM

Bahut...bahut khubsurat kalaam likha hai aapne Usual Smile

Ahilya ji .... Tawajjo dene ka shukriya aur daad ke liye aapka aabhaaree


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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #27 on: October 09, 2013, 12:41:27 AM »

Quote from: nashwani on October 06, 2013, 09:08:37 PM

waah zarra jee..maza aa gaya padh kar..

Behad dilkash kalaam rahi..

Dhero daad..

Nashwani ji .... Apne jis qadar dil se pasand kiya uska tah e dil semshukrguzaar hoon


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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #28 on: October 09, 2013, 02:04:51 AM »

Quote from: mkv on October 06, 2013, 09:46:04 PM

keemtee shai chhupaa rakheee jaaye
teree nekee teraa khazaanaa hai

raaz-e-dil kab ayaaN kiya “zarraa”
ye sukhan-goyee bas bahaanaa hai

Bahut badhiya Zarra saheb

Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Mukesh ji


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Re: ik aashiyaanaa hai ... zarraa

«Reply #29 on: October 09, 2013, 02:56:23 AM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 06, 2013, 09:51:54 PM

ab hawaa hai n aab-o-daanaa hai
bas chaman meiN ik aashiyaanaa hai

saath khushiyoN ka chand-rozaa hai
gham se rishhtaa barhaa puraanaa hai

mehv-e-deed-khiraam meiN n tha hosh
ke ye aanaa teraa ke jaanaa hai

raaz-e-dil kab ayaaN kiya “zarraa”
ye sukhan-goyee bas bahaanaa hai

bahut achhi ghazal inayat ki hai zarra saheb . khubsurat ashaar ke liye tahedil se daad.

Inaayat Hasan sahab .... Shukriya is hauslafzaayee ka ... tah e dil se mashkoor o mamnoon hoon


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