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«Reply #30 on: October 09, 2013, 11:57:27 AM »
Quote from: Iqtedar on October 06, 2013, 10:10:14 PM
hamesha ki tarha bahot bahot bahot khooooob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aapke saath aur hauslafzaayee ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon Iqtedaar ji
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«Reply #31 on: October 09, 2013, 05:03:48 PM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on October 06, 2013, 10:41:55 PM

verrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice


Thanks KA ji
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«Reply #32 on: October 09, 2013, 05:19:57 PM »
bhai jaan ek rau aur dheroN daad qubool farmaayeN aap is khubsurat ghazal pe, dil khush ho gaya padh kar...

Khaas taur ye sher jo khoob naazuki liye hue hai... mujhe haasil-e-ghazal laga...

jee to kartaa hai is ko maan leiN sach
ye jo teraa meraa fasaanaa hai
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«Reply #33 on: October 09, 2013, 06:35:55 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 07, 2013, 01:46:13 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Hriday ji
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«Reply #34 on: October 09, 2013, 10:04:55 PM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 07, 2013, 02:17:42 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

                                 Bahut Khoob.!!


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Ravindera ji. Apne jis anokhe innovative style mein daad di bahaut khushi huwee dekh kar ... Thanks again !!!!
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«Reply #35 on: October 10, 2013, 02:27:21 PM »
Quote from: Miraj. on October 07, 2013, 08:27:32 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank you Usual Smile
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«Reply #36 on: October 10, 2013, 05:42:26 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on October 07, 2013, 01:41:47 PM
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Waaaaaaaaah.. behtareen peshkash zarra ji...mujhe aapki yeh ghazal bahut pasand aayi.. tareef ke alfaaz nahi... hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega..

mat rihaa kar aseer zulf-e-daraaz
zabt kitnaa ab aazmaanaa hai

raaz-e-dil kab ayaaN kiya “zarraa”
ye sukhan-goyee bas bahaanaa hai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aqsh ji .... apne jis tarah se tawajjo di aur hauslafzaayee ataa farmaayee uske liye tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon
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«Reply #37 on: October 10, 2013, 09:36:30 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on October 07, 2013, 07:20:42 PM
waah waah beheeen ghzal hai sab ashaa.r bohat ache our pur asar hain zarra ji ,.............bohat bohat c daad,..........

Pasand karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Laaiba ji
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«Reply #38 on: October 10, 2013, 10:56:35 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on October 07, 2013, 08:02:45 PM
bahut khoob

Shukriya Nandbahu ji
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«Reply #39 on: October 10, 2013, 11:12:41 PM »
keh rahee hai sabaa bhi ab ke baras
fasl-e-gul ka naheeN thikaanaa hai

kuchh to rehmat bhi ho chalee dushwaar
kuchh jafaaoN ka ye zamaanaa hai

mat rihaa kar aseer zulf-e-daraaz
zabt kitnaa ab aazmaanaa hai


best of the ghazal.... these aashar are gem simple gem.. woowwwwww i dont have words to express.... classic ghazal sir.. salutes to you...

sidra
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«Reply #40 on: October 11, 2013, 11:28:22 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 07, 2013, 08:09:06 PM

Zarra Sahaab Aadaab...!


Kia kahne janab bada hi umdaa andaaz hai aapka, khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz de jaate haiN...

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab... Is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


Janaab Parwaaz saahab aadaab ... jis apnepan pyar rehmat se aap daad ataa karte hain, bas dil ko jar tarah se jeet leti hai .... aap ke saath se bahaut hausla aur sahaara milta hai ... tah e dil se shukriya ada karta hoon sahab aap ka
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«Reply #41 on: October 11, 2013, 02:05:45 PM »
Quote from: Taish on October 09, 2013, 05:19:57 PM
bhai jaan ek rau aur dheroN daad qubool farmaayeN aap is khubsurat ghazal pe, dil khush ho gaya padh kar...

Khaas taur ye sher jo khoob naazuki liye hue hai... mujhe haasil-e-ghazal laga...

jee to kartaa hai is ko maan leiN sach
ye jo teraa meraa fasaanaa hai

Taish bhai ... aap ko bazm mein dekhkar bahaut khushi huwee ... behad shukrguzaar hoon aapne jis mohabbat se daad (aur rau) ataa farmaayee .... aapka likha parhna bahaut achchha lagta hai ... duaon ke saath .... Zarraa
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«Reply #42 on: October 11, 2013, 06:17:56 PM »
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«Reply #43 on: October 11, 2013, 10:44:56 PM »
Quote from: sidra04 on October 10, 2013, 11:12:41 PM
keh rahee hai sabaa bhi ab ke baras
fasl-e-gul ka naheeN thikaanaa hai

kuchh to rehmat bhi ho chalee dushwaar
kuchh jafaaoN ka ye zamaanaa hai

mat rihaa kar aseer zulf-e-daraaz
zabt kitnaa ab aazmaanaa hai


best of the ghazal.... these aashar are gem simple gem.. woowwwwww i dont have words to express.... classic ghazal sir.. salutes to you...

sidra



Sidra ji ... Thank you for these very kind words ... I am indeed grateful for your appreciation. Thanks !
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«Reply #44 on: October 12, 2013, 01:12:16 PM »
Quote from: vb on October 11, 2013, 06:17:56 PM
Applause

Thank you VB ji
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