Imtihaan___________________Baadal:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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aaj na jaane kis wajeh se maine ye likha or kyu likha pata nahi aap sab ko ye pasand bhi aayega ya nahi, agar mujh se koi galti ho gaye ho to shama kijiyega

Dukhte dil ko nochne kai insaan aa jaate hai,
Na chah.te hue bhi ye imtihaan jindgi mai aa jaate hai,

Koshish to bahut hoti hai iss raah se bach ke chalne ki,
Fir bhi na jaane aise mode kanha se jindgi mai aa jaate hai,

Rehna nahi chahta hai koi bhi naqaabo ke sehar mai,
Ye dhokebaaj fir bhi kyu jindgi mai aa jaate hai,

Nahi maayne hai wafa or ibadat ke jin ke liye,
Wo insaan kyo kisi ki jindgi mai aa jaate hai,

Karta hai jo sachai se pyar ki har kimat ada,
Fir kyo unhe tabah karne saitaan unki jindgi mai aa jaate hai,

Kabhi na khatam hone wali jo kahani hum likhte hai,
Us ka imtehaan lene nasukr insaan kyu jindgi mai aa jaate hai

Baadal


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madhuwesh

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Re: Imtihaan___________________Baadal

«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2010, 10:47:41 AM »

Wah Baadal ji.very touching and great creation,bahut acha likha aapne.excellent


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Asha2089

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Re: Imtihaan___________________Baadal

«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2010, 12:46:17 PM »

hamien aapki koshish bahoot pasand aayi, har alfaaz mein wo dard nazar aa raha.
daad hazir hai baadal jee.
yuhi mehfil mein ujala karte rahiye.


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riyaz106

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Re: Imtihaan___________________Baadal

«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2010, 01:04:38 PM »

Bahot achhi koshish hai. Nice creation.


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: Imtihaan___________________Baadal

«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2010, 01:39:20 PM »

BAhut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Badal Ji Aapne
Applause


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deepika_divya

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Re: Imtihaan___________________Baadal

«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2010, 03:06:56 PM »

bahoot Bahoot Khoob Baadal !


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Imtihaan___________________Baadal

«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2010, 09:17:50 PM »

Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Baadal Ji


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baadal102

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Re: Imtihaan___________________Baadal

«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2010, 07:04:25 AM »

baadal aap sabhi ka tahe dil se sukria ada karta hai jo aap ne hume padha notworthy


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baadal102

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Re: Imtihaan___________________Baadal

«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2010, 05:50:43 AM »

Chahat to phoolo ki hoti hai hamesha,
Fir ye kaante jindgi mai kyu aa jaate hai,

Poojna to hamesha pyar ko chahiye,
Fir ye patther kyo poojae jaate hai......

Baadal


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guhar

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Re: Imtihaan___________________Baadal

«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2010, 06:47:50 AM »

Quote from: baadal102 on January 06, 2010, 05:50:43 AM

Chahat to phoolo ki hoti hai hamesha,
Fir ye kaante jindgi mai kyu aa jaate hai,

Poojna to hamesha pyar ko chahiye,
Fir ye patther kyo poojae jaate hai......

Baadal

bahot khoob badal ji!
bahot khoob kaha,

wo kabeer ji bhi kehte hein-
pathar pooje hari mile,
to me poojon pahaad.
taase to chakki bhali,
pees khaaye sansaat.

paashaan parasti kaafi puraani,
khuda ki jagah tumhare heeya me hai,
ye baat bahot kam ne jaani hai.


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