~~Intezaar Ki Ghadi~~

by honeyrose on October 16, 2008, 02:59:48 PM
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Intezaar ki ghadi beet gaye aab kya lene aaye
Muhabbat ki raat dal chuki aab kya dene aaye

Qadam qadam pe ghaao khaye aab kya dekhne aaye
Bikar gaye hai meri duniya aab kya farmaane aaye

Fikar nahi ki tumne meri muhabbat aab kya lene aaye 
Muskhilon ka samna kar lenge aab kya dekhne aaye

Intezaar karte karte maut aagaye aab kya poochne aaye

Dil ko chhan tukdon mein bikar kar chale gaye aab kyun milne aaye
tearyeyed

^^**honeyrose**^^
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2008, 10:19:43 PM »
Bohot umda!
Bohot dard bhara kalam he honeyrose sahiba, zndagi ki kadwahat nazar aarahi he, dil ko choolene wala kalam he.  Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2008, 10:21:06 PM »
good one honey
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2008, 10:24:24 PM »
Very Nice Honey sis
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k.shael
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2008, 05:39:22 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB HONEY DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL

KYA LENE KYA DENE CHALE AATE HO,
AANKHOON SE HO DOOR PHIR KYUN KHAWABO
ME CHALE AATE HO,

GAM SE AANCHAL BHI BHAR GAYA HAI PHIR
TUM KYUN NAYE AUR KAANTE LAATE HO,

THEHAR JAO THAM JAO BAHUT HUI YE GAMO
KI KHREED-FROQAT,MOHABBAT KI HAI GUNAAH
NAHI JO HAR BAAR SAJA DE JAATE HO...
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Muhammed
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2008, 05:51:31 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on October 16, 2008, 02:59:48 PM
Intezaar ki ghadi beet gaye aab kya lene aaye
Muhabbat ki raat dal chuki aab kya dene aaye

Qadam qadam pe ghaao khaye aab kya dekhne aaye
Bikar gaye hai meri duniya aab kya farmaane aaye

Fikar nahi ki tumne meri muhabbat aab kya lene aaye 
Muskhilon ka samna kar lenge aab kya dekhne aaye

Intezaar karte karte maut aagaye aab kya poochne aaye

Dil ko chhan tukdon mein bikar kar chale gaye aab kyun milne aaye
tearyeyed

^^**honeyrose**^^

Honeycare !!!

aaj To waqt Par aap k Kalaam k Roo b roo chale aaye...
aur hum se pahele achhe kafi hazaar chale aaye...

badhiya likha hai aapne dard aur ahesaas k saath.
Likhte Raho..aise hi badhiya.

aapka kalaam bhi aapki Tarha Hota hai..Saccha..saaf..
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baadal102
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2008, 06:35:15 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut khoob honey ji
bahut hi aacha likha hai




Baadal
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diya786
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2008, 06:58:59 AM »
bahut accha likha hai jaya di
bahut emotional hai dard hi dard hai Applause Applause


shally sis aapne bhi kamaal ka likha hai  Applause Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2008, 07:15:58 AM »
SHUKRIYA DIYA SIS...
BY. K.SHAEL
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2008, 07:32:34 AM »
bohat khoob honey ji , bohat dard likha hai aapne isme...........
Applause Applause Applause
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #10 on: October 17, 2008, 09:46:03 AM »
good creation honey ji  Applause
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honeyrose
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«Reply #11 on: October 17, 2008, 10:38:12 AM »
Shukriya Sayyid ji... notworthy

Shukriya Celmira sis.. notworthy

Thanks Pooja.. notworthy

Thanks Shally dear.
Wonderful lines bye you  Thumbs UP..
notworthy

Sukriya Razaa ... notworthy

Thanks Baadal ji... notworthy

Thanks Diya dear... notworthy

Shukriya Saurabh ji.. notworthy

Thanks Bhawna dear... notworthy
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«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2008, 12:02:19 PM »
Bahoot Achchi Hai Sis,.
Har baar Ki Tarah,.
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«Reply #13 on: October 18, 2008, 02:55:36 PM »
Shukriya bhai... notworthy
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2008, 10:58:19 AM »
U Are welcome Sis,.
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