Is patthar ki ......

by Just_Hate_Love on January 24, 2005, 06:09:54 AM
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Is patthar ki duniya me,
Aksar dil tut jaya karte hai,
Aakhen bhi sambhalkar bandh karna,
Palko ke beech bhi sapne tut jaya karte hai...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2005, 06:13:39 AM »
Naam likhne betha unka to nazam ban gayi,
Ashq sahi, Aakhen kalam ban gayi,
Woh alfaz kuchh aise bikhre fizaaon me,
Ki zindagi ek dard bhari gazal ban gayi...
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thycreator
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2005, 02:17:45 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Is patthar ki duniya me,
Aksar dil tut jaya karte hai,
Aakhen bhi sambhalkar bandh karna,
Palko ke beech bhi sapne tut jaya karte hai...


Wah JHL ji,

Iss patthar ki duniya mein, yu patthar na bano aye dost,
Patthar chot pahuchate hai, par wo puje bhi jate hai...
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2005, 02:32:09 PM »
bilkul sahi kaha apne

jo pathar pooje jate hain woh bhagwan ka roop kehlate hain
aise mahaan pathar mandiron mein paye jate hain
jo pathar chot pahonchate hain... woh har rah mein paye jate hain
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thycreator
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2005, 02:49:43 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
bilkul sahi kaha apne

jo pathar pooje jate hain woh bhagwan ka roop kehlate hain
aise mahaan pathar mandiron mein paye jate hain
jo pathar chot pahonchate hain... woh har rah mein paye jate hain


Thanx Nikki ji...sahi kaha apne, ek bar maine pehle bhi likhi hai ye line par aaj phir likh raha hu,

Thokar kha ke bhi na sambhle rahgir toh kya,
patthar toh apna farz ada karte hai.....
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«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2005, 02:53:25 PM »
well written nikki.....really apt  4 our times
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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2005, 04:55:41 PM »
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww great great everyone!!!!!!!

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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2005, 05:35:13 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Naam likhne betha unka to nazam ban gayi,
Ashq sahi, Aakhen kalam ban gayi,
Woh alfaz kuchh aise bikhre fizaaon me,
Ki zindagi ek dard bhari gazal ban gayi...


Bahoot hi shaandaar!!! Bahoot khoob JHL ji!!

Dard ki kitaab mai, jakhamo ke lafaz hai
yaandon ki kahaniyion mai,
bas tanhaayion ke kuch arth hai!!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2005, 08:19:16 PM »
wao too good Pooja
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2005, 06:03:48 AM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Is patthar ki duniya me,
Aksar dil tut jaya karte hai,
Aakhen bhi sambhalkar bandh karna,
Palko ke beech bhi sapne tut jaya karte hai...


Wah JHL ji,

Iss patthar ki duniya mein, yu patthar na bano aye dost,
Patthar chot pahuchate hai, par wo puje bhi jate hai...


It was nice one Creator...

Log patthar ko pujte hai phir bhi masum reh gaye,
Humne ek phool ko chaha to gunegar ban gaye.
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2005, 06:12:11 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Naam likhne betha unka to nazam ban gayi,
Ashq sahi, Aakhen kalam ban gayi,
Woh alfaz kuchh aise bikhre fizaaon me,
Ki zindagi ek dard bhari gazal ban gayi...


Bahoot hi shaandaar!!! Bahoot khoob JHL ji!!

Dard ki kitaab mai, jakhamo ke lafaz hai
yaandon ki kahaniyion mai,
bas tanhaayion ke kuch arth hai!!!!


Thank very much Poojaji...
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sandhaya
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2005, 06:36:57 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Is patthar ki duniya me,
Aksar dil tut jaya karte hai,
Aakhen bhi sambhalkar bandh karna,
Palko ke beech bhi sapne tut jaya karte hai...


wah bahut ache janab JHL
baaki sabne bhi ache answers diye hain

mana ki duniya pathar dilon ki hai
par insaan bhi yahin hai
mana ki duniya mein bewaffai hai
par pyaar bhi yahin hai
jiyon magar haqiqat mein
kyun dekhte ho sapne tum
tutna hai sapno ko akhir
unka tuh anth hi yahi hai
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nikki
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2005, 09:50:17 AM »
hmmm bahut ache Sandhaya !!!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #13 on: January 25, 2005, 10:57:09 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
hmmm bahut ache Sandhaya !!!


thank u nikki
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #14 on: January 25, 2005, 11:09:34 AM »
mana ki duniya pathar dilon ki hai
par insaan bhi yahin hai
mana ki duniya mein bewaffai hai
par pyaar bhi yahin hai
jiyon magar haqiqat mein
kyun dekhte ho sapne tum
tutna hai sapno ko akhir
unka tuh anth hi yahi hai[/quote]

bohut khoob sandhya ji
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