Ishq Ki Kahaani..

by redwhitegang on April 23, 2010, 09:07:20 AM
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Veeran jindagi mein wo aayi sawan ki paani ban ke..
Bhula na sake koi ishq ki aisi kahaani ban ke,

Unke daman ko tham do kadam hi chale the mohabbat ki rah par!
Na jane kyun bich rah par mili judai pareshani ban ke!

Ek duje se khafa rahe aur tanhai mein yaadein chubti rahi..
Ankho se behti rahi askh judai ki nisaani ban ke..

Unke aane ki intezaar mein lamho ko ginte rahein..
Par wo hame khud se juda ki jaise koi yaad puraani ban ke,

Unki ummido par hum khare na utar pay shayd!,
Warna wo kyun aise chali gayi hamare mohabbat se anjaani ban ke!..
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«Reply #1 on: April 23, 2010, 04:23:42 PM »
bahut khoob likha hai aapne... aapke is nazm k ek ek shabd me mohabbat aur dard bhara hua hai... bahut pasand aayi humko aapki ye kavita...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2010, 05:38:46 PM »
Bahut khoob RWG
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2010, 12:00:45 AM »
Arey wah RWG ji.bahut khoob,very touching and lovely creation.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2010, 02:07:00 PM »
Ap sab ki bohot shukriya hosla afzayi k liye..
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2010, 12:12:00 PM »
very nice creation  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2010, 11:24:11 AM »
Shukriya Usual Smile
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