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ishq mein tere jite hai
ishq mein tere mer jayge
hum hai tere senam
tujhy na bhool payge
teri judayi key gum mein
hum beintha aansu behayge
merke bhi tumsay juda na ho payge
tere damen ko churdake jannet mein na ja payge
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2005, 10:59:44 AM » |
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wah kya bat hai ji..............
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2005, 11:13:18 AM » |
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bahut khoob gazal.......
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2005, 11:15:20 AM » |
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Nice job Gazal ...
Keep it up ...
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2005, 06:39:29 PM » |
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hamne tumhare dard ko dil me basa liya
ham perahe hai zaher mazedaar ho na ho
ruksat ke waqt ek jhlak or dekh lu kya
khabar mehsar me tera di-dar ho na ho
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Ghazal
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2005, 04:40:32 AM » |
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ruqset mein mari aaye jo wo
mere aansu na them sekege
uski yaado ki gardi mein
apni arthi mein jaaugi
uskey bin na ji seki hu
na kbhi ji paugi
apne aatho pey uskey naam ki
mehde sejaugi
apni mayet ko uskey derwazy say guzar waugi
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2005, 07:56:15 PM » |
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bahot khub GHAZAL
abhi se kiu chalak aae tumhare aasu
abhi cheda kaha hai dastane jindagani mane
yah dunya hai yaha dil se dil nahi milta
nazar ko justaju-e-shoke ka hasil nahi milta
sajakar apne hangamo ki mahfil chup gaya koi
bhari mahfil hai or wo ronake mahfil nahi milta
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2005, 04:31:49 AM » |
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ajj fir tum yaad aa rhe ho
jane is dil sey tum kitni door ja rhy ho
is dil ko kyu itna dukha rahy ho
kyu mujhy gum mein duba rahe ho
kya gum hai jo mujhsay chupa rahe hoa
ajj fir tum bohot yaad arhe ho
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2005, 07:33:31 PM » |
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ajj fir tum yaad aa rhe ho
jane is dil sey tum kitni door ja rhy ho
is dil ko kyu itna dukha rahy ho
kyu mujhy gum mein duba rahe ho
kya gum hai jo mujhsay chupa rahe hoa
ajj fir tum bohot yaad arhe ho
Tumhe khub surat nazar aarahi hai
Yeh rahe tabahi ke ghar jarahi hai
Sitaro se age jaha or bhi hai
abhi ishk ke imteha or bh hai
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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2005, 01:43:52 PM » |
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wah gazal and ali,what a beatiful piece of poetry...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 11, 2005, 06:47:16 PM » |
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NIDHI_YADEIN sukriya
Safar me sath nahi koi ham safar ki tarha
Zamana phir gaya ham se teri nazar ki tarha
Ab or ke sath hai to kya dukh
Pahle bhi wo hamara kab tha
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2005, 02:30:51 PM » |
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thx a lot app sabka
or ali jii appka bhi
app sabny bhi bohot accha likha hai
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2005, 09:31:14 PM » |
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app sabny bhi bohot accha likha hai
Thx
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2005, 06:04:49 AM » |
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har lamhahatum sey hai
mari hasi mera gum tum sey hai
her taraf tu hai
mera pyaar tum sey hai
kbhi hum na hogy door
ya arma tumsey hai
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«Reply #14 on: September 05, 2005, 07:16:19 AM » |
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very nice Ghazal ......Ali
yahi nahe ki mujhey tod gaya hai koi
usay bhe bahot dair khud ko jodna hoga....
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