Iss Baar___________________Baadal

by baadal102 on October 13, 2010, 03:48:10 AM
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*******HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME*******

Aaj fir wo din aa gaya jis din humara janam hua tha
or ye hum kaise bhool sakte hai ki har baar ki tareh
hume ye din sab se jayada dukh pahunchata hai.......

Umeed hai aap ko hamari ye lines pasand aayengi.....




Iss baar to koi bahana tu mujhe de de,
Ae KHUDA abb to tu mujhe maut de de,

Na jannat or na hi sabr-e-ruh chahiye,
Bas apni aaogosh mai panaah tu mujhe de de,

Nazren karam ker mujh pe apni ae Aulia,
Saja aab mare gunaho ki mujhe tu de de,

Din raat jo jal rahi hai tukdo mai jindgi,
Iss sulagte sarir ko koi chanya tu de de,

Nahi manga kabhi tujh se kuch iss ke siwa,
Bas mari iss murad ki bhik mujhe de de,

ya to baksh de tu mujhe mera KHUDA,
Nahi to ae KHUDA abb to tu mujhe maut de de,

Nahi to ae KHUDA abb to tu mujhe maut de de.......





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«Reply #1 on: October 13, 2010, 05:01:36 AM »
uffffffff badal ji ye kya ...
aaj k din koi iss tarah ki dua mangta hai kya...
Khuda ko bhi mushkil me daal diya hai aapne..
aapki mangi muraad puri karen to khud se galat ho jate ahin k
apne bachche k janam din par use iss atarh ki saz a...
nahin ji... aaj usse apne liye sukunn mangiye...
wo zaruur ataa karenge...


lamhe ye tere khush din k iss tarah aaye hain
leke dher sara gum ye sath apne laaye hain

lekin kuch pyarae dooston ki duaein bhi sath hain
jinhe inn hothon pe muskurahut dejhne ki aas hai

kar dua ye k har pal kisike kaam aaye tu
jo zindagi tujhe kuch na de saki usse kisika dil behlaye tu

mile hon laakhon dard tujhe iss zamane se
lekin koshish kar kisi ka to dard kum kar paaye tu

khudko kosne se achhca hai k zindagi jine ka andaaz badal
rote rehna se bahtar hai kisike hothon ki muskaan ban

har lamha dard seh agar ye naseeb me likha hai usne
lekin kisi aur k ghar ko roshan karne wala chirag ban....

janam din bht bht mubarak ho aapko baadal ji...
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kuch zyada keh diya ho to gussa kar lena mujhpar..lekin aaj k din plzzzzzzz khush khush rehna...
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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2010, 06:27:49 AM »
BAHUT HI DARDILA  LIKHA HAI    BADAL JI....


DUKH DARD DAKE SADMO KI TAQDEER LIYE JANMA HUN MAIN
NAHIN JEE SAKHTA HUN MERE KHUDA YEH ZINDAGI MAIN
MERE MALLIK YA TOH MERI KISMAT BADAL DE
YA "ISS BAAR" MERE JANAM DIN PAR HI MUJHE MAUT DE.....


KASAK JI NE SAHI KAHA HAI AAPNE  AISA SAWAL KIYA HAI
KHUDA JI KO HI MUSHKIL MEIN DAL DIYA HAI............
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«Reply #3 on: October 13, 2010, 03:40:12 PM »
Baadal jee,

Sabse pehle apko Happy b'day.! bahaut bahaut mubarak..
Apki yeh nazm main kya kahun..bahaut dard mehsoos hua iss nazm main..Dost apke liye dil se dua karta hoon kay Allah apki tamam mushkilat asan kar de..Uss Khuda se positive duaein mange..Insh'Allah zaroor khushian milengi..
Bahaut sara pyaar aur duaein mere dost..!
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2010, 03:41:38 PM »
uffffffff badal ji ye kya ...
aaj k din koi iss tarah ki dua mangta hai kya...
Khuda ko bhi mushkil me daal diya hai aapne..
aapki mangi muraad puri karen to khud se galat ho jate ahin k
apne bachche k janam din par use iss atarh ki saz a...
nahin ji... aaj usse apne liye sukunn mangiye...
wo zaruur ataa karenge...


lamhe ye tere khush din k iss tarah aaye hain
leke dher sara gum ye sath apne laaye hain

lekin kuch pyarae dooston ki duaein bhi sath hain
jinhe inn hothon pe muskurahut dejhne ki aas hai

kar dua ye k har pal kisike kaam aaye tu
jo zindagi tujhe kuch na de saki usse kisika dil behlaye tu

mile hon laakhon dard tujhe iss zamane se
lekin koshish kar kisi ka to dard kum kar paaye tu

khudko kosne se achhca hai k zindagi jine ka andaaz badal
rote rehna se bahtar hai kisike hothon ki muskaan ban

har lamha dard seh agar ye naseeb me likha hai usne
lekin kisi aur k ghar ko roshan karne wala chirag ban....

janam din bht bht mubarak ho aapko baadal ji...
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kuch zyada keh diya ho to gussa kar lena mujhpar..lekin aaj k din plzzzzzzz khush khush rehna...
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Di, apki bahaut sari kavitaein parri hai..This is one of the best if not the best for me atleast..tooooooo good yaar..
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«Reply #5 on: October 13, 2010, 03:42:14 PM »
BAHUT HI DARDILA  LIKHA HAI    BADAL JI....


DUKH DARD DAKE SADMO KI TAQDEER LIYE JANMA HUN MAIN
NAHIN JEE SAKHTA HUN MERE KHUDA YEH ZINDAGI MAIN
MERE MALLIK YA TOH MERI KISMAT BADAL DE
YA "ISS BAAR" MERE JANAM DIN PAR HI MUJHE MAUT DE.....


KASAK JI NE SAHI KAHA HAI AAPNE  AISA SAWAL KIYA HAI
KHUDA JI KO HI MUSHKIL MEIN DAL DIYA HAI............
Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2010, 03:48:22 PM »
Baadal ji janamdin ki bahut bahut badhaiya ji...baadal ji main ye tou nhi janti ki aesi kaun si baat hai jisse aap iss zindgi ko chhodna chahte hai per main sirrf itna kehna chahti hu ki zindgi KHUDA ki bahut badi den hai aur hamein ise yu hi zaya nhi karna chahiye...aap ho sake tou apna dard bhul kar jitna ho sake khushi se iss zindgi ko jiye..main dua karungi ki aapko khuda sukoon bakshe...khayal rakhiye ji..aur muskura dijiye itne saare dosto ko apke janamdin ki khushi hai per apki inn chand pankitiyo se sabhi k dil ko thes pahunchi hai...khush rahiye baadal ji...god bless u..........
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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2010, 04:39:07 AM »
Di, apki bahaut sari kavitaein parri hai..This is one of the best if not the best for me atleast..tooooooo good yaar..
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thnx rahim bhai........tumko itni pasand aai ye poetry ...to ab tum bhi isse kuch samjho..warna ab tumhare liye likhna padega ye sab mujhe...samjhe...
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«Reply #8 on: October 14, 2010, 08:16:18 AM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Badal ji aur Kasak ji ne bhi bahut khoob jawaab diya hai...!!!
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