iss barsaat mein

by lajo on February 26, 2009, 06:25:38 PM
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lajo
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tapish thi wo reth mein
pyaasa ho jaise kan kan iss barsaat mein
badliyaan aakar guzar gayin aakash mein
chakor pyaasa hi reh gaya iss barsaat mein
chali aandhiya bhi bahaut iss mausam mein
reth ne dhak liya pyaas ko iss barsaat mein
raat ko chandani khilati hai baadlo mein
pyaas ko fir ek aas milati hai iss barsaat mein
baad barso ke aaj barsi badariya registaan mein
pyaasi reth pe gir ke boondein jhulas gayin iss barsaat mein
nishaan bhi baaqi raha na koi inn haalaat mein
saundhi hawa mein reh gayi hai mehak unki iss barsaat mein
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2009, 07:00:27 PM »
Geetanjali Ji,

Bohot hi khoobsurat peshkash hai...Bohot Khoob...!
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2009, 07:02:54 PM »
wow bahoot khoob Geetanjali ji.. apka yoindia main sawagat hai!!
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pankshivam
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2009, 08:24:17 PM »
Very Nice Gita ji
YoIndia me aapka Swagat hai
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lajo
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2009, 05:47:05 AM »
aap sabhi longo ka bahut bahut dhanyawaad aur ummeed hai ki aage bhi yun hi hauslaafzahi milati rahegi.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2009, 11:53:45 AM »
Wonderful presentation Geeta Ji
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lajo
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«Reply #6 on: March 01, 2009, 04:08:07 PM »
thankx a lot rajesh ji
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2009, 04:56:51 PM »
tapish thi wo reth mein
pyaasa ho jaise kan kan iss barsaat mein
badliyaan aakar guzar gayin aakash mein
chakor pyaasa hi reh gaya iss barsaat mein
chali aandhiya bhi bahaut iss mausam mein
reth ne dhak liya pyaas ko iss barsaat mein
raat ko chandani khilati hai baadlo mein
pyaas ko fir ek aas milati hai iss barsaat mein
baad barso ke aaj barsi badariya registaan mein
pyaasi reth pe gir ke boondein jhulas gayin iss barsaat mein
nishaan bhi baaqi raha na koi inn haalaat mein
saundhi hawa mein reh gayi hai mehak unki iss barsaat mein


Bahut khoob Geetanjali sis  Applause
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lajo
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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2009, 10:04:25 AM »
thank u Roja sis
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