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«Reply #15 on: September 13, 2009, 05:07:33 AM » |
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sophi
har dard ko bahut bakhoobi se tumne byaan kiya hai
kisi ki atmaa rode, pyaar khushi kam aor dard jayada deta hai.
khush raho
nira di
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«Reply #16 on: September 13, 2009, 05:08:04 AM » |
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wah sophi ji wah.. bahut hi khoob
jasbir singh
Thank You so much Jas ji |
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«Reply #17 on: September 13, 2009, 05:09:05 AM » |
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Divya jee:
namaste!
dard meN Doobii hu'ii aapki yeh peShkaSh bahot Khuub rahiiN! yuuNhi liKhate rahiYe aage bhee bazm ki raunaq afzA'ii karte raheN! daad !
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath jaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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«Reply #18 on: September 13, 2009, 05:09:45 AM » |
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Thank You so so much Madhu Ji |
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«Reply #19 on: September 13, 2009, 05:10:42 AM » |
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Wah wah... dard bara yeh kalam dil ko hilakar rakh diya divya.
Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #20 on: October 14, 2009, 07:12:18 PM » |
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Teri es dard bhari najm ko bhulana itna aasaan na tha
Chup rahu aur kuchh na likhu ye bhi itna aasaan na tha
Jamaane k julmo ko jhelna mere liye bhi itna aasaan n tha
Karu main kisi se shikayat mere liye wo itna aasaan n tha
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«Reply #21 on: January 28, 2010, 10:45:36 AM » |
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Teri es dard bhari najm ko bhulana itna aasaan na tha
Chup rahu aur kuchh na likhu ye bhi itna aasaan na tha
Jamaane k julmo ko jhelna mere liye bhi itna aasaan n tha
Karu main kisi se shikayat mere liye wo itna aasaan n tha
Shukriya Shukriyaa.. Bahoot Khoob lina hai aapne bhi ! |
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«Reply #22 on: January 29, 2010, 04:00:37 PM » |
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Bahut dard se likha hai tumne divya. Bahut khoob likha. dard ka ehsaas hua her ek lafz mein. Keep it up.
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«Reply #23 on: January 29, 2010, 04:02:02 PM » |
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Bahut dard se likha hai tumne divya. Bahut khoob likha. dard ka ehsaas hua her ek lafz mein. Keep it up.
Thank you so so Much Roja ! |
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«Reply #24 on: January 30, 2010, 11:23:40 AM » |
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Sophi Ji Ek Behtareen Kalaam Nazar Kiya Hai Aapne
Bahut Achhey Se Jazbaaton Ko Lafzon Men Piroya Hai
Bas Kuch Purani Yaaden Taza Ho Gayi Parhke Bahut Khoob Ji
Mafi Chahta Hun Deri Se Dekhen K Liye....
Khush Rahe......
Shiha
Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Shihab.. Abhi jab maine isse dobara pada tho bahoot si galtiyaan nazar aa rahi hai.. But thanks for liking it ! |
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«Reply #25 on: January 30, 2010, 11:33:06 AM » |
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Thank you so much Shihab !:)
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«Reply #28 on: February 05, 2010, 03:31:23 PM » |
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Khwaish ji aapke Reply pad kar Fir likhne ka Mann Hua... Tho kuch Arz kar rahi hun....
Bebasi ko Apni hum Dil Mea Chupaye the
Gaavo pe khudke Marham lagana Asaan Na tha
Rulaya itna Iss Jahan ke Logo ne Hume
Khud ki Mohabaat ki chita jalana Asaan Na Tha
Divya !!
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«Reply #29 on: February 05, 2010, 03:48:15 PM » |
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bahut bahut Khoob sophi.. 
Lafzo Se Keh dete To Dil ko sukoon Mil Jaata
Khamoshiyon Mein Khud Ko tadpana Asaan Na Tha..
Chalte-Chalte, Girte-Sambhalhte Safar taye To Kar Lete!!!
Par beech Raah Par Peeche Mud kar Vaapas Jaana Asaan Na Tha...
"Khwaish" keh deta Dil Mein Jo hai uske!!!
Par Kisi Ke Dil ko Thes Pahunchkar Khud Ki Baat Ko Keh Jaana Asaan na Tha...
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