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Aryaan
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Itna hi yaad rakh mujhe
Jaise kisi kitaab mein
Beetey dinon ke dost ka
Khat ik para huwa miley
Lafz mitey mitey se hon
Rang uraa uraa sahi
Lekin woh ajnabi na ho
Uth kar tere galey lage
Bhoole huwe tamaam dukh
Guzrey huwe tamaam sukh
Beetey dinon ki kathaa
Tujh se kahe aur ro pare
Itna hi yaad rakh mujhe
Beetey dinon ke dost ka
Jaise koi khat hoon main
Rakha huwa kitaab mein
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2005, 06:40:57 AM » |
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bohat khoob realy nice poetry aryna thx for sharing
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sandhaya
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2005, 08:13:44 AM » |
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very nice Aryaan ........very nice as usuall
Itna sa meri mahobaat ka mujhpe karam rakhna
apne dil main mera naam amar rakhna
main jinda rahun ya mar jaun teri mahobaat main
meri mayiyat pe aake zinda mera barahm rakhna
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«Reply #3 on: August 01, 2005, 12:19:25 PM » |
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Khayaloon ki gehri aur ishq ki shiddat.....hai aapne kalaam pe....
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2005, 12:39:01 PM » |
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Itna hi yaad rakh mujhe
Jaise kisi kitaab mein
Beetey dinon ke dost ka
Khat ik para huwa miley
Lafz mitey mitey se hon
Rang uraa uraa sahi
Lekin woh ajnabi na ho
Uth kar tere galey lage
Bhoole huwe tamaam dukh
Guzrey huwe tamaam sukh
Beetey dinon ki kathaa
Tujh se kahe aur ro pare
Itna hi yaad rakh mujhe
Beetey dinon ke dost ka
Jaise koi khat hoon main
Rakha huwa kitaab mein its wonderfull Aryaan ji ...zazbaton ki gehrayi aur pyaar ...gud combination |
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2005, 02:01:23 PM » |
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Thanks a lot Masoom, Sandhaya, Aman & Nikki.....& Very Nice Reply Sandhaya as usual....
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«Reply #6 on: August 01, 2005, 04:10:57 PM » |
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Bohot khoob Aryaan ........... just wonderful..as always ..... !!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 01, 2005, 04:28:56 PM » |
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Bohot khoob Aryaan ........... just wonderful..as always ..... !!!!! Bohat shukriya Talat....... |
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«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2005, 06:53:30 PM » |
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NICE work Aryaan.........very good comparison b/w khat and dukh......good imagination!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 01, 2005, 07:44:30 PM » |
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NICE work Aryaan.........very good comparison b/w khat and dukh......good imagination!!!!!!!! Thanks a lot Isha..... |
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«Reply #10 on: August 02, 2005, 12:57:17 PM » |
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Itna hi yaad rakh mujhe
Jaise kisi kitaab mein
Beetey dinon ke dost ka
Khat ik para huwa miley
Lafz mitey mitey se hon
Rang uraa uraa sahi
Lekin woh ajnabi na ho
Uth kar tere galey lage
Bhoole huwe tamaam dukh
Guzrey huwe tamaam sukh
Beetey dinon ki kathaa
Tujh se kahe aur ro pare
Itna hi yaad rakh mujhe
Beetey dinon ke dost ka
Jaise koi khat hoon main
Rakha huwa kitaab mein bahut bahut achhe Aryaanji.........kya likha hai.bahut khoob...... nice others also..... |
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«Reply #11 on: August 02, 2005, 04:18:09 PM » |
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wowow...bhawnaao ko shabdo ka roop dena apko bahoot khoob atta hai.......bahoot acha likha hai apne.........
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«Reply #12 on: August 02, 2005, 04:25:34 PM » |
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Bohat bohat shukriya Dolly & Pooja...........
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«Reply #13 on: August 03, 2005, 12:53:11 AM » |
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Itna hi yaad rakh mujhe
Jaise kisi kitaab mein
Beetey dinon ke dost ka
Khat ik para huwa miley
Lafz mitey mitey se hon
Rang uraa uraa sahi
Lekin woh ajnabi na ho
Uth kar tere galey lage
Bhoole huwe tamaam dukh
Guzrey huwe tamaam sukh
Beetey dinon ki kathaa
Tujh se kahe aur ro pare
Itna hi yaad rakh mujhe
Beetey dinon ke dost ka
Jaise koi khat hoon main
Rakha huwa kitaab mein Awww Aryaan..... Bohut zabardast.... keep writing... |
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«Reply #14 on: August 03, 2005, 02:30:38 PM » |
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Awww Aryaan..... Bohut zabardast.... keep writing...
Bohat shukriya Jalpari.... |
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