itni padi kharashe ke chehra bigad gaya

by samnoj on July 13, 2005, 08:21:42 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 16, 2005, 06:59:32 PM »
wow samnoj,kya baat hai,bohat hi acha likha hai ,no words 2 explain how good it is Usual Smile ,keep writing such gr8 work.
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«Reply #16 on: August 16, 2005, 07:03:49 PM »
wah wah wah sabna bahut achaa likha hai......................good work u all!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #17 on: August 17, 2005, 02:58:00 PM »
Bohot achcha likha hai...Sam and Waheed...... very very nice work.. !!!!!
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«Reply #18 on: August 20, 2005, 12:48:59 PM »
thanx waheed, nidhi, isha n talat

bahar-e-rafta ko dhoonde kaha kaha yaro
ki ab nigaho me yaadon ki hai khiza yaro

bujha bujha sa hai mahtab aarzuo ka
dhuwa dhuwa hai murado ki kahkasha yaro

ufaq pe doobte suraj ki khoon ki laali hai
tahar gaye hai khayalo ke kaarwaan yaro

ye zindagi to bahar-o-khiza ka sangam hai
khushi na aayegi ghum bhi na jayega yaro

ghum ki raat sitare to so gaye the magar
saher ko phoot ke roya tha aasmaan yaro
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«Reply #19 on: August 20, 2005, 03:44:10 PM »
very very nice Samnoj, Thy n Waheed ................................................. .....

ghum ki raat sitare to so gaye the magar
saher ko phoot ke roya tha aasmaan yaro
 
Beautifull n touching lines hain Samnoj ji..............................
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«Reply #20 on: August 25, 2005, 01:04:50 PM »
thanx nikki
apne hisse Ki zindaghi to jee chuKe
bus dharkano ka lihaz karte hain
kia kahen in dunya walon ko jo
aakhri saans per bhi aitraz karte hai
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«Reply #21 on: August 25, 2005, 03:47:14 PM »
Thanx  Alot   Talat.........Nikki..........Nidhi...Sam.....   once   again vewry  nice Sam.........tongue3

kuch bhi  na mila mujhe  jindagi mein ghum ke siwa
doob raha hoon apne  ghum mein koi  mujhe ab dua na de
is shaher mein koi aisa nahi hai jo mujhen hausla de
jal   chuka  mera jism  ab mujhe koi ridayen  na de....


Rida........  chadar........
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«Reply #22 on: August 26, 2005, 09:32:49 AM »
thanx n bahut khoob

kuch bikhre sapno se aankho me nami hai
ek chota sa aasman aur umeedo ki zami hai
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«Reply #23 on: August 26, 2005, 06:07:07 PM »
ur  welcome  Sam..............nice   one  again...... tongue3

Dua bahaar ki maangi to itney phool khiley
Kahin jagah na mili mere aashiyaane ko ........
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«Reply #24 on: August 27, 2005, 01:59:22 PM »
Nice work alll..... !!!
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«Reply #25 on: August 27, 2005, 04:35:35 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Nice work alll..... !!!


ur  welcome  Talat...........  yahan  humhare  aur  Sam  ke  elawa  bhi koi  hai  kya Puzzled !......... isne all  kyon   likha Huh??   Puzzled !
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«Reply #26 on: August 29, 2005, 07:38:49 AM »
thanx talat n waheed
good one waheed

kuch is trah chalti rahi halaat ki aandhi
ban ban ke bigadte rahe khawaabo ke gharonde
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«Reply #27 on: August 29, 2005, 07:42:27 AM »
very nice samnoj.

"bigadte hi to rahe hain gharonde yahan pyaar ke,
  kismat pe kyun dilwale ilzaam lagaate hain."
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«Reply #28 on: August 29, 2005, 07:50:24 AM »
thanx n bahut ache nidhi

Woh sitam pe sitam kiye jaate hain.....
hum har sitam ka maja liye jaate hain......
kabhi to pighlega dil mere pehlu mein aake.....
isi intezaar mein jeeye jaate hain......
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«Reply #29 on: August 29, 2005, 10:25:53 AM »
bohat khoob sam..... gud work all Usual Smile
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