ja sakte ho

by saahill on September 01, 2012, 09:10:18 AM
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bin saans jeeyun kaise gar bata sakte ho
to chorh ke sanam tum mujhe ja sakte ho ,,

suraj ko nikalna agar tum bhula sakte ho
karke andhera zindagi mein tum ja sakte ho ,,

chandhan so agar tum khushbu mitaa sakte ho
to lekar mehak chahat ki tum ja sakte ho ,,

agar sagar mein paani ko sukhaa sakte ho
to karke pyasa mujhko tum ja sakte ho
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2012, 10:48:02 AM »
bahut sunder shabdon main dard btan kiya hai ......
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2012, 01:46:28 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  simply wow Saahill ji... ek dum se aapke lekhni me itnaa badlaaw... aapke lekhni me itni zyaadaa khoobsurti dekh bahut bahut achcha lagaa... ek dum zabardassstt.. touchy touchy saa likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2012, 03:33:42 PM »
kapil ji ne bilkul sahi kaha sahl ji kuch samay se lag raha tha aap thoda kam mann se likh rahe hai par yeh lekhni ne sabit kar diya ki aap khass shayar kyun hai bahut hi lajawab bahut hi umda rachna hazaro daad aur mubarakbaad

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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2012, 05:10:31 PM »
thx .gaytri ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2012, 09:29:39 PM »
bahot bahot khoob Saahil ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2012, 12:41:33 AM »
bahut khoob sahill ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2012, 05:10:40 AM »
THX HRIDHAY JI
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2012, 09:38:45 AM »
waah achhee shart lagaai jaane kee
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2012, 12:46:03 PM »
bahut khubsurat peshkash.dhero daad
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2012, 04:21:35 PM »
thx saudagar ji
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