Jaan Baki Hai!

by salma786 on March 17, 2009, 05:17:26 AM
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Khamosh zubaan pe,
Tera naam ab bhi baki hai,

Bhige palkon me,
Tere khwaab ab bhi baki hai,

Kaise mitaye teri yaad ko,
Sine me mere dhadkan ab bhi baki hai,

Jalana teri fitrat thi to kya,
Par Jalne ki hasrat ab bhi baki hai,

Kya jodte hum toote dil ko,
Toot kar bikharna ab bhi baki hai,

Mit jate hum bhi haste haste,
Par Jism me Jaan ab bhi baki hai!!
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«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2009, 05:43:19 AM »
 Applause Applause

Beautifull lines bohat khoob salma sis...
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2009, 06:08:31 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on March 17, 2009, 05:43:19 AM
Applause Applause

Beautifull lines bohat khoob salma sis...

Shukriya jaya sis Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2009, 06:16:05 AM »
Quote from: salma786 on March 17, 2009, 05:17:26 AM
Khamosh zubaan pe,
Tera naam ab bhi baki hai,

Bhige palkon me,
Tere khwaab ab bhi baki hai,

Kaise mitaye teri yaad ko,
Sine me mere dhadkan ab bhi baki hai,

Jalana teri fitrat thi to kya,
Par Jalne ki hasrat ab bhi baki hai,

Kya jodte hum toote dil ko,
Toot kar bikharna ab bhi baki hai,

Mit jate hum bhi haste haste,
Par Jism me Jaan ab bhi baki hai!!






its really a nice experience reading ur poems........the way u express them is simple and sweet
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«Reply #4 on: March 17, 2009, 06:19:48 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on March 17, 2009, 06:16:05 AM
its really a nice experience reading ur poems........the way u express them is simple and sweet
M honoured Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2009, 07:11:44 AM »
Quote from: salma786 on March 17, 2009, 05:17:26 AM
Khamosh zubaan pe,
Tera naam ab bhi baki hai,

Bhige palkon me,
Tere khwaab ab bhi baki hai,

Kaise mitaye teri yaad ko,
Sine me mere dhadkan ab bhi baki hai,

Jalana teri fitrat thi to kya,
Par Jalne ki hasrat ab bhi baki hai,

Kya jodte hum toote dil ko,
Toot kar bikharna ab bhi baki hai,

Mit jate hum bhi haste haste,
Par Jism me Jaan ab bhi baki hai!!



Bahut Bahut Khoob Salma!!Sadhaaran aksharo mein aapne Gehri Baatein ki hai..bahut ache Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2009, 08:19:16 AM »
Bohat khoob Salma....Too good.
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2009, 09:43:18 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 17, 2009, 07:11:44 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Salma!!Sadhaaran aksharo mein aapne Gehri Baatein ki hai..bahut ache Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Khwaish ji apne mere thread ko waqt diya! Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2009, 09:44:28 AM »
Thanks lot sajid ji !
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2009, 09:47:26 AM »
Bohat Achche Salma, Nice One,.
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2009, 10:11:58 AM »
Shukriya Azeem ji!
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2009, 10:43:42 AM »
Nice One Salmaji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: March 17, 2009, 11:02:00 AM »
Quote from: pankshivam on March 17, 2009, 10:43:42 AM
Nice One Salmaji  Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Pank ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2009, 11:07:44 AM »
Quote from: salma786 on March 17, 2009, 11:02:00 AM
Shukriya Pank ji Usual Smile
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