------jaan si jaati hai ab-----

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koi dawa btao yaaro usse bhulaane ki
     ke jaan si jaati hai ab
har pal jaise uski
     aahat si aati hai ab
yaadon me aakar tadpa jaata hai
     khabon me bhi sataa jaata hai
dhadkano se hokar sanso tak
     sama jaata hai
koi tarkeeb sujhao yaaron usse bhulane ki
     jaan si jaati hai ab
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mere seene ka dil bhi kabhi dhaka krta tha
        iss qadar bezaan kar gaya koi
ki ab sirf yaadon me dhadakta hai
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uski beqadri ko ab naam kya du
    yun sare aam ilzaam kya du
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2010, 08:19:33 PM »
Good Job Killbill Ji, Bohat Achcha Likha Hai,.
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2010, 10:39:57 PM »
kya baat hai KB ji


tarkeeb tujhe main kya bataata KB use bhulaane ki
koyi raaste hote bhoolne ke to main khud hi aazmaa leta... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2010, 04:12:38 AM »
sukriya Azeem ji
sukriya Intezaar.
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tarkeeben to bahut hai usse bhulane ki lekin
      kaam koi aata nahi
issliye ab to sirf dard sahte hai chuppchap or
     tarkeeben aazmaata nahi
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sukriya
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2010, 05:10:03 AM »
mast mast likha he kb ji......padne me bht maja aya ........like ur way of poetry...lage raho...
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2010, 05:23:23 AM »
ooo bhai Matrix--
ye galt baat hiya--
kuch andaze bayan aapki alg honi chahiye ..
aise hi tarka doge to kaise chalega ji--
bot sukriya ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2010, 07:08:55 AM »
kya baat ha Kb.......mastam ji mast.....

kaise bhula dun main us deewane ko ee dost
jiski yaadon se mujhe jeene ki wajah milti hai.......
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2010, 09:36:39 AM »
Bahhut Khub Kb JI
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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2010, 09:39:52 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai kilbil ji...
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«Reply #9 on: May 04, 2011, 09:42:54 AM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 29, 2010, 07:08:55 AM
kya baat ha Kb.......mastam ji mast.....

kaise bhula dun main us deewane ko ee dost
jiski yaadon se mujhe jeene ki wajah milti hai.......
thanx kasakkk
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«Reply #10 on: May 04, 2011, 09:54:10 AM »
Ek Alag Andaaz!!!

Bahut Khooob Killbillji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2011, 10:02:41 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on May 04, 2011, 09:54:10 AM
Ek Alag Andaaz!!!

Bahut Khooob Killbillji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sukriya ji
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