JAANE BHI DO NA..........masoom:Shayri-E-Dard

masoom shahjada

Guest

Jane bhi do na...
Mujhe ab pasand na karo.
Apni wafa pe itna bhi ghamand na karo.
Ye paglo si chahte mujhko nahi bhaati.
Mujhko wafa ke wasto se tang na karo.
.....
Jaane bhi do , na rasta roko mera.
M bewafa hu , na btao mujhe gunaah mera.
Chalo bhol jao saari bato ko.
Mere badal jaane ka gam na karo.
.......
Jaane bhi do , na ab aazmaye jao.
Bigri huyi tasveer na sajaye jao.
Main pyar nahi karta tumse.
Ro ro ke yu.n sitam naa karo.
.......
Jaane bhi do na tumhe bhi kha pyar karna aata hain.
Har lamha naye sak ka izhaar karna aata hain.
Khair chahti ho to bhol jao mujhe.
Meri aadato ko janne ka man na karo.
.....
Mujhe tumhara Jism chahiye tha jo mil gaya.
Ab tumhare paas bachaa hi kya hain.
Pyarr Viyaar kuch nahi hota.
Bhaane bna bnake mujhe rookne ka jatan na karo.
........


	Logged

Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
	woh masoom............ by salil2002 in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq « 1 2 All »
	Bhut masoom thi wo ........masoom by masoom shahjada in Miscellaneous Shayri
	Khuda jaane.......masoom by masoom shahjada in Share:Miscellaneous Shayari « 1 2 All »
	LOOG KYAA JAANE...........masoom by Masoom Shahzada in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
	Aaj Mar Jaane Kii Baat Kar....masoom by Masoom Shahzada in Ghazals « 1 2 All »

sksaini4

Ustaad ae Shayari

Rau: 853

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011

Re: JAANE BHI DO NA..........masoom

«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2012, 03:11:28 PM »

bahut khoob


	Logged

jasbirsingh

Guest

Re: JAANE BHI DO NA..........masoom

«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2012, 05:39:52 PM »

yaar am confused, ki kaise react karu is poem koh ...

jaha tak, sirf poem ki baat hai ... bahut hi khoob likha hai par jiss topic par likha hai aur jaisey end kia hai ... comment karne ka mann hi nahi karta .... i really don;t want to encourage this type of thinking and this type of subject to comment on .....

jasbir singh


	Logged

soudagar

Guest

Re: JAANE BHI DO NA..........masoom

«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2012, 02:38:16 AM »

bahut khub... bahut hi badhiya ........last 4 lines sahi nahi lagi bhai....baki puri poem lajawab hai..... khair last 4 lines chhod puri poem par dhero daad... Clapping Smiley


	Logged

sarfira

Guest

Re: JAANE BHI DO NA..........masoom

«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2012, 05:08:04 PM »

sach kahun to last ke 4 lines ko delete karne ka mann hua mera--
lekin kuch karano se nahi kia--
aapse reqst hai ki kuch baato ko alfaaz dene se khud ko rokie--

sukriya


	Logged

BANSI DHAMEJA

Guest

Re: JAANE BHI DO NA..........masoom

«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2012, 05:34:30 PM »

aaj kal discuss ho raha tha ki jo ham sochte hain wo comments den.
is cheez ko made nazar rakhte huye kain kahina chahta hoon ki akhri char llino ne sara message badal diya hai .SIRAF JISM PANE KE LIYE KUCHH KIYA JAYE AUR USKE MILNE KE BAAD CHHORH DIYA JAYE YE JAMTA NAHIN MUJHE. HO SAKTA HAI MAIN GALAT HOON.


	Logged

masoom shahjada

Guest

Re: JAANE BHI DO NA..........masoom

«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2012, 08:17:30 PM »

Mene es poem me reality sajoone ki kosis ki thi. Kyoki mene dekha h log aaj kal apne partner ke liye pyar nahi hawas rakhte h. So mene aesa likha.
...
Sayad mera lafjo ka combination theek nahi tha ya kahne ka dhang.
Khair jo bhi ho ...
M aapse sorry kahta hu...
Par aap sab ak lamhe ko gaur kare kya aesa reality me nahi ho raha h.
Agar ha ye sab reality me nahi ho raha h to m bahut galat hu or m aap sab se sorry bolta hu.
Or ha agar aesa ho raha h to plz aap sabse meri request h ki aap sab me se koi aesa na kare.
Bye...


	Logged

saahill

Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 86

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
147 days, 19 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 18617
Member Since: Jun 2009

Re: JAANE BHI DO NA..........masoom

«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2012, 12:54:50 AM »

kya khub kaha shahzada bhai wah


	Logged

BANSI DHAMEJA

Guest

Re: JAANE BHI DO NA..........masoom

«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2012, 04:24:28 AM »

Masoom ji ur apne sab sathiyon se kahina chahoonga ki likhn walon ka aur media ka bahut barha role hota hai samaj ke liye kuchh karne ka.
Ham gar history ko dekhen to bahut se shayron ne aur writers ne samaj ko badlne men bahut barha role adaa kiya hai.
Usko made nazar rakhte huye mujhe lagta hai ham likhte samaya is cheez ka khiyal rakhen. MEDIA TO GALAT CHEEZON KI BAHUT HI PUBLICITY KAR RAHA HAI AUR SHAYAD IS LIYE CRIME BHI BARH RAHA HAI.
Mere is mashware pe gaur pharmaye please.
apka dost
bansi


	Logged

Pages: [1]

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: JAANE BHI DO NA..........masoom