-----/// Jaane kya kya lautaana chaahti hai /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 23, 2012, 03:11:19 PM
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wo mujhe aaj meri duniyaa lautaana chaahti hai,
guzre huye wo lamhe jeewan ke lautaana chaahti hai,
jaana hai thaam ke kisi ka haath use aaj, isliye
wo mere likhe huye saare khat lautaana chaahti hai,

mere pyaar ki har ek nishani lautaana chaahti hai,
mere jeewan ki wo kahaani lautaana chaahti hai,
jaana hai use mujhse duur bahut duur, isliye
wo mujhe aaj meri jawaani lautaana chaahti hai,

mujhe meri khoi hui pehchaan lautaana chaahti hai,
mujhse li hui meri jaan lautaana chaahti hai,
loot ke le jaa rahi meri saanse mujhse wo, par
jaane kya kya wo naadaan lautaana chaahti hai....


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«Reply #1 on: April 23, 2012, 04:04:42 PM »
bahut hee khoob
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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2012, 06:18:01 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2012, 04:29:29 AM »
waah Hriday ji waah--
baht bht aur baht khoob likha h aapne kalaam ko--
last aashaar to bas rula hi de mohabbt krnewalon ko--

shukr h mera dil patthar h--:)

dili daad aur bht saari duayen
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2012, 05:41:41 AM »
Naadaan hai jaane kya kya lautana chahti hai.....
Uss ka bhi tou kuchh saamaan hai woh tum bhi lauta do KAPIL.... Winking

Mera kuch saamaan tumhare paas pada hai
o o o ! saavan ke kuch bheege bheege din rakhe hain
aur mere ik khat main lipti raat padi hai
vo raat bhulaa do, mera vo saamaan lauta do
mera kuch saamaan tumhaare paas pada hai

patjhad hai kcuh ... hai na ?
o ! patjhas main kuch patton ke girne kee aahat
kaanon main ek baar pahan ke laut aai thee
patajhad kee vo saakh abhi tak kaanp rahi hai
vo saakh gira do, mera vo saamaan lauta do

ek akeli chhataree main jab aadhe aadhe bheeg rahe the
aadhe sookhe aadhe geele, sukha to main le aaye thee
geela man shayad bistar ke paas pada ho
vo bhijwa do, mera vo saamaan lauta do

ek so sola chaand ki ratain ek tumhare kaandhe ka til
geeli mahendi ki khushbu, jhoot mooth ke shikwe kuch
jhooth mooth ke wade sab yaad karaa do
sab bhijwa do, mera vo saamaan lauta do
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 23, 2012, 03:11:19 PM
wo mujhe aaj meri duniyaa lautaana chaahti hai,
guzre huye wo lamhe jeewan ke lautaana chaahti hai,
jaana hai thaam ke kisi ka haath use aaj, isliye
wo mere likhe huye saare khat lautaana chaahti hai,

mere pyaar ki har ek nishani lautaana chaahti hai,
mere jeewan ki wo kahaani lautaana chaahti hai,
jaana hai use mujhse duur bahut duur, isliye
wo mujhe aaj meri jawaani lautaana chaahti hai,

mujhe meri khoi hui pehchaan lautaana chaahti hai,
mujhse li hui meri jaan lautaana chaahti hai,
loot ke le jaa rahi meri saanse mujhse wo, par
jaane kya kya wo naadaan lautaana chaahti hai....


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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2012, 06:14:12 AM »
Khoob kaha Hriday Ji, dili mubaarkbaad
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2012, 07:21:15 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2012, 11:19:35 AM »
bahut khoob hridayjii..bahut hi sunder....:clapp:
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«Reply #8 on: April 25, 2012, 08:51:11 AM »
Brother aapka kalam bhut khoob h par.
Jitni achchi intiha or ebtida ki gayi beech me pahunchkar wo kanhi nahi milti.
Agar beech ka hissa bhi aesa hi hoota to ye wakai me gajab dha deti.
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2012, 12:09:03 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2012, 08:30:34 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Hasan ji...!!!

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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2012, 03:08:07 AM »
bohut acha likha hai hridhay ji realy good
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«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2012, 12:29:37 PM »
bahut bahut bahut bahut shukriyaa Sarfira ji.... aapke comments padh ke dil khush ho jaata hai.... aapka dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon... !!!

Quote from: sarfira on April 24, 2012, 04:29:29 AM
waah Hriday ji waah--
baht bht aur baht khoob likha h aapne kalaam ko--
last aashaar to bas rula hi de mohabbt krnewalon ko--

shukr h mera dil patthar h--:)

dili daad aur bht saari duayen
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #13 on: May 02, 2012, 06:10:26 PM »
bahut bahut khoob Anaam ji...!!!

Quote from: ANAAM on April 24, 2012, 05:41:41 AM
Naadaan hai jaane kya kya lautana chahti hai.....
Uss ka bhi tou kuchh saamaan hai woh tum bhi lauta do KAPIL.... Winking

Mera kuch saamaan tumhare paas pada hai
o o o ! saavan ke kuch bheege bheege din rakhe hain
aur mere ik khat main lipti raat padi hai
vo raat bhulaa do, mera vo saamaan lauta do
mera kuch saamaan tumhaare paas pada hai

patjhad hai kcuh ... hai na ?
o ! patjhas main kuch patton ke girne kee aahat
kaanon main ek baar pahan ke laut aai thee
patajhad kee vo saakh abhi tak kaanp rahi hai
vo saakh gira do, mera vo saamaan lauta do

ek akeli chhataree main jab aadhe aadhe bheeg rahe the
aadhe sookhe aadhe geele, sukha to main le aaye thee
geela man shayad bistar ke paas pada ho
vo bhijwa do, mera vo saamaan lauta do

ek so sola chaand ki ratain ek tumhare kaandhe ka til
geeli mahendi ki khushbu, jhoot mooth ke shikwe kuch
jhooth mooth ke wade sab yaad karaa do
sab bhijwa do, mera vo saamaan lauta do
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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2012, 04:17:41 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Amit ji....!!!

Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on April 24, 2012, 06:14:12 AM
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