-----/// Jaane kya kya lautaana chaahti hai /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 23, 2012, 03:11:19 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 06, 2012, 07:51:30 PM »
sab kuch lauta kar bhi vo
kuch naa lautaa payegi
jo bhi kuch paya hai apne
saath hi le jayegi

aapne dilke ehsaason ko ache lafazon
mein byaan kiya hai
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«Reply #16 on: May 07, 2012, 11:47:03 AM »
Thank you soooooo much Aatish ji....!!!

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«Reply #17 on: May 10, 2012, 12:14:13 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Dolly ji....!!!

bahut khoob hridayjii..bahut hi sunder....:clapp:
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«Reply #18 on: May 10, 2012, 06:37:32 PM »
thanks bhai....!!!

Brother aapka kalam bhut khoob h par.
Jitni achchi intiha or ebtida ki gayi beech me pahunchkar wo kanhi nahi milti.
Agar beech ka hissa bhi aesa hi hoota to ye wakai me gajab dha deti.
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«Reply #19 on: May 10, 2012, 06:38:17 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Saahill ji...!!!

bohut acha likha hai hridhay ji realy good
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«Reply #20 on: May 10, 2012, 06:39:18 PM »
main tahe dil se aapka shukriyaa adaa karta hoon Nira ji... bahut bahut shukriyaa....!!!

sab kuch lauta kar bhi vo
kuch naa lautaa payegi
jo bhi kuch paya hai apne
saath hi le jayegi

aapne dilke ehsaason ko ache lafazon
mein byaan kiya hai

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