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Raat ko nikli main ghar se aur dekha maine chand jaane kyun...
dekhkar chand ko mujhe aayi uski yaad jaane kyun...
yaad aane par uski bhar aayi meri aankh jaane kyun...
choda tha jab usne saath to toota tha mera dil jaane kyun...
pata tha mujhe ki woh jaane wala hai,
phir bhi usse na keh paayi main dil ki baat jaane kyun.....................
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2005, 05:20:53 AM » |
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Raat ko nikli main ghar se aur dekha maine chand jaane kyun...
dekhkar chand ko mujhe aayi uski yaad jaane kyun...
yaad aane par uski bhar aayi meri aankh jaane kyun...
choda tha jab usne saath to toota tha mera dil jaane kyun...
pata tha mujhe ki woh jaane wala hai,
phir bhi usse na keh paayi main dil ki baat jaane kyun..................... bahut accha likha hai aapne vitasta ji keep writing |
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2005, 05:28:04 AM » |
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wah!!!!!!!!! bahot khoob...............vitasta.........very nice ........
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2005, 05:48:21 AM » |
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Very Nice vitasta ........... Keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2005, 02:00:47 PM » |
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thanks all waise yeh maine nahin meri ek friend ne likha hai....................
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2005, 02:02:21 PM » |
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thanks ki koi jruurat nhi hai janab !!! hum to yha aap ka avtar dekh ke aaye hain... hmarey fav. lenardo ko aapney apna bna rakha ha i :wink:
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2005, 02:17:55 PM » |
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to phir humtum ji kya aap bhi leo ka avatar chahenge?  mere paas ek aur hai.......... |
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2005, 02:18:48 PM » |
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to phir humtum ji kya aap bhi leo ka avatar chahenge? mere paas ek aur hai.......... nhi yaar humey apna hi theek hai .. but thanks anyway :wink: |
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2005, 08:47:57 PM » |
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vitasta... bohat achaa lagaa apkaa sher...
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2005, 10:34:53 AM » |
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«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2005, 10:38:15 AM » |
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Raat ko nikli main ghar se aur dekha maine chand jaane kyun...
dekhkar chand ko mujhe aayi uski yaad jaane kyun...
yaad aane par uski bhar aayi meri aankh jaane kyun...
choda tha jab usne saath to toota tha mera dil jaane kyun...
pata tha mujhe ki woh jaane wala hai,
phir bhi usse na keh paayi main dil ki baat jaane kyun..................... very nice Vitasta................bahut acha laga............ |
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2005, 09:48:51 AM » |
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thanks a lot nikki..............................  :D :lol: |
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2005, 04:01:45 PM » |
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Raat ko nikli main ghar se aur dekha maine chand jaane kyun...
dekhkar chand ko mujhe aayi uski yaad jaane kyun...
yaad aane par uski bhar aayi meri aankh jaane kyun...
choda tha jab usne saath to toota tha mera dil jaane kyun...
pata tha mujhe ki woh jaane wala hai,
phir bhi usse na keh paayi main dil ki baat jaane kyun..................... very nice Vitasta................bahut acha laga............ wow..........wonderful...........vitasta  |
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2005, 09:36:14 AM » |
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thanks waheed.............................. :D :D |
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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2005, 10:44:31 AM » |
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very good vitasta.
jane kyon baar baar pardhne ka man karta hai isko jaane kyon
jaane kyon..................
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