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"kabhi ye lamha, ye pal tumko bhi yaad aayega,
in aankhon mein jo aaj aansu de kar gayi ho.
meri yaad mein palkein tumhari bhi bheeg jayengi,
mera pyar to tum bhi apne dil mein le kar gayi ho.

nahin milega kabhi koi mujhsa pyar karne wala,
chahne wale to yun hazaar mil jayenge tumko.
kabhi jo ek pal tum tanhaai mein baithogi,
mere sang guzaare ye pal yaad aayenge tumko.

shayad thoda hi sahi, ye mera pyaar hi tha,
ke laakh chah kar bhi hum tumse door ja na saka.
tumhari yaad mein har pal bita diya maine,
bas gham rahega tumko seene se laga na saka.

haan sach hai tumhari mohabbat ektarfa hi rahi,
main samajh nahin paaya, tum samjhaa nahin paayi.
badnaseebi thi meri, na jaan paaya tumhari chahat,
kareeb aa nahin paaya, tumne to laakh awaaz lagayi.

maine jab bhi tumse door ho jaana chaha tha,
tumne thama tha haath, bani thi meri hamdam.
humari jindagi ki raahein hone lagin thi juda,
sambhala tha tumne, jab ladkhadaye the ye kadam.

shayad meri ye jindagi tum bin guzar nahin paayegi,
dard gar hadh se badh jaaye to nayi raah dikha jaana tum,
hai kasam mujhe, ek baar bhi awaaz nahin dunga tumko,
bas jaane se pehle apne bina jeena sikha jaana "tum".


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nikki

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:: jaane se pehle ::

«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2005, 07:49:17 PM »

very touching n serious one Hearty .....very very nice


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isha_verma7

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:: jaane se pehle ::

«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2005, 12:27:10 AM »

Nice "Heart"...........good one!!!!!!!!!!!1


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Aryaan

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:: jaane se pehle ::

«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2005, 12:48:30 AM »

Bohat khoob...


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bond

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:: jaane se pehle ::

«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2005, 10:40:21 AM »

awesome ......................bahut bahut hi khoob ....amit bhai


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Meena

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:: jaane se pehle ::

«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2005, 02:26:48 PM »

wonderful hearty!!! :D


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myheart_ursonly

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:: jaane se pehle ::

«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2005, 05:08:55 PM »

Thanks Meena Sis, Nikki Sis.

Thanks bond brother, Aryaan and Isha Verma...


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:: jaane se pehle ::

«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2005, 05:22:47 PM »

Bohat acha likha hai Amit...har alfaaz me dard hi dard hai....loved it sooo much. Usual Smile


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myheart_ursonly

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:: jaane se pehle ::

«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2005, 05:28:49 PM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Bohat acha likha hai Amit...har alfaaz me dard hi dard hai....loved it sooo much. Usual Smile

wow! i feel like if i'm in heaven, lol.

such a great poet commented on my poem :oops:

thanks nidhi:)

btw, i was wondering ye meri poem itni right side mein kyun khisak gayi, lol. then i saw ye isha ne itna bada avatar lagaya hai Puzzled !

achcha hai waise, very very cute glasses2


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