jaanti hun main......................

by ranjana on May 16, 2006, 01:01:41 AM
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ranjana
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janti hoon main teri manzil nahi hoon,
janti hoon ki main tera rasta bhi nahi hoon,
per kuch der toh saath chale they hum,
kuch der toh ek dusre ke sukh- dukh ke saathi they hum,
ek bar peeche mud ke toh dekh mere kuch der ke hamrahi,
jo sapane, jo dharkane ,jo jeene ki umang,
tum de gaye ho...........
mein unhe apne saath samete aaj bhi,
usi dorahe per khari hoon,
yeh jante hue bhi ki.... main tera rasta nahi hoon,

main teri manjil bhi nahi hoon..
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mrkotians
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2006, 05:02:09 AM »
hmmmmmmmm... ranjana... pratibhanjana....

meri jaan ho tum aur
is jeevan ke chiraag...
teri aankhon mein aansu
kaise dekh paaon main...
bhagwan ke kasam...

murjha hua pushp jaisi ho kyon
teri aashaon ki nayan ban jaaoon main
aur hamesha muskurate ban ke tere hoton..

kisika shaap hoga ya kisika kop...
har pal tumhe dekhte reh jaaoon
chinta mein mat aaon jaani main hoon na...

meri jaan ho tum...
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2006, 06:47:49 AM »
shukriya MK JI..........nice lines........sundar likha aapne...............
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mrkotians
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2006, 11:41:35 PM »
dhanyawad ranjana...

apna yahan koi bhi nahin
kisi ko bhi koi bhi nahin
preet aur vaatsalya ko arth hi nahin

asmaan ko anth hi nahin
aashaon ko mithi hi nahin
mamatha aur moh ko arth hi nahin

khilne se pehle pushp latha ki apni
khilne ke baad auron ki apni
jeevan aisa shok ka jeevan chakra...


Quote from: "ranjana"
shukriya MK JI..........nice lines........sundar likha aapne...............
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2006, 11:47:41 PM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
janti hoon main teri manzil nahi hoon,
janti hoon ki main tera rasta bhi nahi hoon,
per kuch der toh saath chale they hum,
kuch der toh ek dusre ke sukh- dukh ke saathi they hum,
ek bar peeche mud ke toh dekh mere kuch der ke hamrahi,
jo sapane, jo dharkane ,jo jeene ki umang,
tum de gaye ho...........
mein unhe apne saath samete aaj bhi,
usi dorahe per khari hoon,
yeh jante hue bhi ki.... main tera rasta nahi hoon,

main teri manjil bhi nahi hoon..


wah kaya baat hai!! bahoot khoob Ranju!!!

manjil pata nahi, rasta bhatak gai hu
chalati ja rahi hu, zindagi ki sudh bhool gai hu
kuch yaandein, kuch parchaiya hai sath mere
kaha se karu shuruwaat, iska jawab bhool gai hu
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2006, 02:26:12 AM »
Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
Quote from: "ranjana"
janti hoon main teri manzil nahi hoon,
janti hoon ki main tera rasta bhi nahi hoon,
per kuch der toh saath chale they hum,
kuch der toh ek dusre ke sukh- dukh ke saathi they hum,
ek bar peeche mud ke toh dekh mere kuch der ke hamrahi,
jo sapane, jo dharkane ,jo jeene ki umang,
tum de gaye ho...........
mein unhe apne saath samete aaj bhi,
usi dorahe per khari hoon,
yeh jante hue bhi ki.... main tera rasta nahi hoon,

main teri manjil bhi nahi hoon..


wah kaya baat hai!! bahoot khoob Ranju!!!

manjil pata nahi, rasta bhatak gai hu
chalati ja rahi hu, zindagi ki sudh bhool gai hu
kuch yaandein, kuch parchaiya hai sath mere
kaha se karu shuruwaat, iska jawab bhool gai hu



shukriya Pankhuari............bahut khub likhti ho tum..............very beautiful.........

aanewale din anjaane
jaanewale chale gaye
batala kar bhi kya hoga bhale gaye ya bure gaye
samaye kisi ke haath n aaaye
kabhi hansaye kabhi rulaaye
pata nahi ham kitna roye
hansane ki tayaari mein

ubal raha sabke ander
koi ek udas samuander
jaane kab mashaal jalagi
rakh dabi changaari mein..n/m
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2006, 05:08:02 AM »
thanks Ranju, apki kavita mai waqat ke jakham najar atty hai..

jaanti hu sabkuch, bas manati nahi
chalati jaati hu, haar sawikarti nahi
beety dino ke jakham, bahoot dardile hai
phir bhi kadam apne rokati nahi
jaanti hu sabkuch, bas manati nahi..........

apne he degy dhoka yah haqiqat hai
phir bhi sabko apna banaye jaati hu
karati hu sukh ka soda gumo ke sath
aor khamoshi se jiye jaati hu
jaanti hu sabkuch, bas manati nahi.......
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phoenix
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2006, 07:22:44 AM »
Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
thanks Ranju, apki kavita mai waqat ke jakham najar atty hai..

jaanti hu sabkuch, bas manati nahi
chalati jaati hu, haar sawikarti nahi
beety dino ke jakham, bahoot dardile hai
phir bhi kadam apne rokati nahi
jaanti hu sabkuch, bas manati nahi..........

apne he degy dhoka yah haqiqat hai
phir bhi sabko apna banaye jaati hu
karati hu sukh ka soda gumo ke sath
aor khamoshi se jiye jaati hu
jaanti hu sabkuch, bas manati nahi.......


gud going ranju and pankhuri ji
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2006, 07:34:55 AM »
thanks Phoenix
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ranjana
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2006, 11:31:46 AM »
its beautiful .............

apne he degy dhoka yah haqiqat hai
phir bhi sabko apna banaye jaati hu
karati hu sukh ka soda gumo ke sath
aor khamoshi se jiye jaati hu
jaanti hu sabkuch, bas manati nahi.......

very beautiful..............Pankhuari
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