Jaate Jaate {S}:Shayri-E-Dard

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Kar Gayi Tanha, Ek Aur Raat Jaate Jaate,.
Wo Din Puraane Hi Hote Ke Tum Aate Jaate,.

De Gaya Waqt Bhi Dhoka Aakhri Daur Mein,.
Jeete Agar, To Rishte Yunhi Banaate Jaate,.

Jab Jaan Gaya Uski Mohabbat Ka Rang "Azeem,.
Kahaan Tak Hum Bhi, Pyaar Nibhaate Jaate,.

Dega Wo Dhoka Is Baat Ka Kabhi Ilm Na Tha,.
Hum To Mohabbat Ke Khisse Sabko Sunaate Jaate,.

Ab Tanha Hoon To Har Baat Puraani Yaad Aai,.
Kaise Hum Ek Duje Ki Ghazlein Sajaate Jaate,.

Un Hone Hi Rone Pe Majboor Kardiya Aaj "Logon..
Jo Har Waqt Hume Ghamon Se Bachaate Jaate,.

-Azeem-

Missing You Badly,..


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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2010, 10:39:56 PM »

Mere paas lavz nahin hai tariff kay..
Apki har kalam main sachayi hai dost..
Badi shidat se mohobat karne wala hi aisa likh sakta hai..
Aur yeh baad koi mohobat karne wala hi samaj sakta hai..
Dil ki gehrayion se daad..
Duaein apkay liye..dher sari..
Khush rahiye..
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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2010, 10:40:50 PM »

Wohi mere dard ka sabab bangaya Rahim,
Jo meri muskurahat ki duaein mangta tha..


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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2010, 10:47:26 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on December 27, 2010, 10:40:50 PM

Wohi mere dard ka sabab bangaya Rahim,
Jo meri muskurahat ki duaein mangta tha..

Waah,.

Mere Dard Ki Tasweer Hai Tujhme "Rahim,.
Jo Tere Dil Se Nikalti Hai Wo Aah Mujhme Hain,.


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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2010, 03:52:19 AM »

wah wah kya mast hai jee--
ek baat btau aapko Azeem sir--maine aapke uss feel ko feel kiya jo aapko ise likhte samay hua hoga--ye lajawab peshkash hai hi aisa. Aapko dil se Dua.
""kuch arz krta hu apki tarah nai likh skta fir bhi choti si kosis----
' itni bhi bewafai na kar
kuch to kasar baaki rakh
aur bhi honge deewane tere !!!


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2010, 04:05:54 AM »

Bahut Khoob


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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2010, 08:34:39 AM »

Azeem jee!aap kee ye sanjeedaa gazal paRh kar lagtaa hai aansuoN kee siyaahee me palkoN kee kalam dubo kar dard ke tamaam dstkhat ek saath kar diye gaye hoN....dard kaa ye taanaa baanaa dekh kar dil udaas ho gayaa!khush raheN...jeene kaa koi nayaa bahaanaa aap ko jald hee haasil ho ....meri or se daad hee nahee dher saaree duaayeN...


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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2010, 08:43:35 AM »

bahut badhiya azeem bhai..

dher saari daad~


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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2010, 12:13:14 PM »

bahut badhia... azeemji...

bahu bahu daad aapko.


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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2010, 01:29:54 PM »

Bahut Khub Azeem Bhai Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Aur Dard Bhara Bhi Applause


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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2010, 01:39:07 PM »

Bahut khub bhaijaan dil ko chhuliya aapne...


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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2010, 04:19:59 PM »

Quote from: nirala on December 28, 2010, 03:52:19 AM

Shukriya Nirala Ji, Jo Aapne Mere Kalaam Ke Saath Mere Dard Ko Jaana,.

Bas Duaa Hai ke Rab Sab Ka Bhala Kare, Aur Jo Bichrde Hain Wo Yaar Sab Mil Jaaye,.

Aameen.


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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2010, 06:13:48 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 28, 2010, 04:05:54 AM

Bahut Khoob

Shukrya Rajesh bhai


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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2010, 06:18:24 PM »

Quote from: Azeem on December 27, 2010, 10:24:00 PM

Azeem bhai....kisi ne kaha tha ki aah pe waah kaise kahen magar shayri ki mehfil ka dastoor hai ki dil ke taaron ko koi shabd choo jaye to dard me bhi aah nahi waah hi niklti hai...bahoot khoob likha bhai..asha bhosle ji ka gaya ek nagma yaad aa gaya

bahut der se dar pe aankhein lagi theen
huzuur aate-aate bahut der kar di

maseeha mere toone beemaar-e-gam ki
dava laate-laate bahut der kar di

muhabbat ke do bol sunane na paaye
vafaaon ke do phool chunane na paaye

tujhe bhi hamaari tamanna thi zaalim
bataate-bataate bahut der kar di
huzuur aate-aate ...

koi pal mein dam tod dengi muraaden
bikhar jaayengi meri kvaabon ki yaaden

sada sunate-sunate kabar lete-lete
pata paate-paate bahut der kar di
huzuur aate-aate ...


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Re: Jaate Jaate {S}

«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2010, 06:22:34 PM »

Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 28, 2010, 08:34:39 AM

Shukriya Mamta Ji, Hausla Afzaai Aur Humdardi Ke Liye, Bas Aap Sab Se Duaa Ki Darkhwaast Hai, Hamaari Kamyaabi Ke Liye Duaa Karein,.

Rab Khair Kare,.


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