Jaate jaate......

by Just_Hate_Love on January 11, 2005, 07:49:39 AM
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Jaate jaate woh hame achchhi nishani de gaye,
Umar bhar na bhulenge aisi kahani de gaye,
Ek hame hi pyasa chhodkar auron ko meherbani de gaye,
Chalo yeh bhi achchha hai,
Woh hamari palkon ki kataron ko do boond paani de gaye.
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2005, 02:17:02 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Jaate jaate woh hame achchhi nishani de gaye,
Umar bhar na bhulenge aisi kahani de gaye,
Ek hame hi pyasa chhodkar auron ko meherbani de gaye,
Chalo yeh bhi achchha hai,
Woh hamari palkon ki kataron ko do boond paani de gaye.


Wah JHL......

Unke diye hue aansoon bhi humko hai kubul,
Ashk e yaar toh humpe khuda ki nemat hai..
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2005, 07:08:40 PM »
waahhh

aur nahin kuch to ansson de gaye woh,
bahar na sahi virana de gaye woh!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2005, 07:51:01 PM »
Nice wordings, waise is gajhal ki her ek line bahoot achi hai.
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thycreator
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2005, 08:00:29 AM »
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waahhh

aur nahin kuch to ansson de gaye woh,
bahar na sahi virana de gaye woh!


Veerane se na daro tum aye mere humdum,
Baharein kaise aayengi agar patjhad nahi hoga..
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2005, 03:49:45 PM »
wah............very nice Amit.
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2005, 03:58:23 PM »
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waahhh

aur nahin kuch to ansson de gaye woh,
bahar na sahi virana de gaye woh!


Veerane se na daro tum aye mere humdum,
Baharein kaise aayengi agar patjhad nahi hoga..


niceeeeeeeeee!!!!

patjad hi mile hume tofe me,
jaise khali bottle dikhi mehekhane me!
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2005, 04:43:00 PM »
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wah............very nice Amit.



Thanx Nidhi ji!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2005, 04:49:50 PM »
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waahhh

marvellous....meenaji...
fulon se na sahi kaato se hi apne zindagi saza lenge,
unke yadon ke sahare zindagi bita denge.
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2005, 05:00:24 PM »
thanx pandit ji!  :D

gud one too!

unki yaadon me hoti agar wafa ki mehek,
hum unke jane ka bhi gum na karte!
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2005, 05:48:21 PM »
wah..............pandit.........meena....!!!

unki yaadon me hoti agar wafa ki mehek,
hum unke jane ka bhi gum na karte!

GOLDEN WORDS MEENA!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2005, 05:51:26 PM »
shukriya ji shukriya!

 :D
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2005, 06:00:46 PM »
u r welcome..........Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2005, 06:54:33 PM »
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thanx pandit ji!  :D

gud one too!

unki yaadon me hoti agar wafa ki mehek,
hum unke jane ka bhi gum na karte!


Wah ji

Aise zamane ke aage humko bewafa na kaho,
Hamari wafa ki hai bat zamana karta..... :wink:
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«Reply #14 on: January 13, 2005, 06:57:35 PM »
lol

teri tareef to pura zamana karta hai,
aur bewafai ke afsane saath me gata hai!  :wink:
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