jaate Jaate !!!!

by deepika_divya on September 19, 2010, 03:11:53 PM
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #30 on: September 26, 2010, 01:28:09 PM »
Jaate jaate.... aur kuchh nahi tou Abhi tum ek paathshala khol lo...(dhandha tou hai nahi paas tumhare)dekho kitne students tumse coaching lene ko aatur hain.....ab bhaav mat khaao....chalo seekhao... Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #31 on: September 27, 2010, 03:41:15 AM »
Quote from: Mann on September 24, 2010, 12:50:24 PM
Dard Bhari Is Rachna Par Aaj Nazar Padhi Divya Ji.. Aisa Laga jaise wo ek Lamha aapne Alfaazon Me Qaid kar diya Ho.. Aapki Yeh Peshkash Lajawab hai.. jo Seedhe dil pe Asar Kar rahi Hai.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




**~** Mann **~**

Thank you so so so Much Vicky.. tumari uss Ak Nazar ke liye.. Jiski nazar Meri Shayari par bhi Padi... Thanks ... !!! Usual Smile
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #32 on: September 27, 2010, 06:48:07 AM »
Quote from: ANAAMIKA on September 26, 2010, 01:28:09 PM
Jaate jaate.... aur kuchh nahi tou Abhi tum ek paathshala khol lo...(dhandha tou hai nahi paas tumhare)dekho kitne students tumse coaching lene ko aatur hain.....ab bhaav mat khaao....chalo seekhao... Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle.

jii haan madam ji ...apne sahi jana mere pas dhanda nahi he...balki bahut sara kam hee...or sikhane ke liye to me ahamesha taiyar hu bolo kya batau~
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #33 on: September 27, 2010, 02:21:08 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on September 27, 2010, 03:41:15 AM
Thank you so so so Much Vicky.. tumari uss Ak Nazar ke liye.. Jiski nazar Meri Shayari par bhi Padi... Thanks ... !!! Usual Smile

Kamaal karti Ho Divya..  icon_thumleft  Waise Shukriya humaari Nazron ki taareef ke liye.. hahahahaha..


Nazar Bhar Dekha Bhi Na Tha,
Aur Jhuk Gai Nigaah Tumhari.....

Ise Berukhi Kahun Ya Andaaz,
Ya Qatil Si Ek Ada Hai Tumhari....!!!




**~** Mann **~**
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Radhika_2
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«Reply #34 on: September 29, 2010, 08:59:14 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on September 19, 2010, 03:11:53 PM




Maine kaha Unse ji Jaate Waqt Mujhe Saath le Jana
Unhone Kaha Abhi waqt Aaane do fir le  jaunga " Divya "
Maine Unne Roka Nahi , Kahan Jaldi Lout ke Aana
Par Unhone Meri Baaton ko Andekha sa Kar Diya  !!!

Socha Saath Jaatein Waqt Kuch Kehna Nahi Chahte
Iss Ankh mea Anso , lobo hasi le Unko Jaane Diya...
Par saal guzar gaye... Woh Nahi Aaye Laut Kar
Poocha unse tho Kahan Unhone,,,Maine koi Vada nahi kiya !!

Mano Tham si gai thi Meri Saansein.. Unki Is Baat se
Aur Unhone Kuch Kahe begair Mera Phone kaat Diya
Kanjar ki Chuban Leke Main Pal Pal Marti Rahi....
Phone aaya unka kaha Mujhe bhool jana Meri " Divya"

Ankhon Mein Ansoo Aur Labo Pe Hasi chalak Padi
Ansoon ko Tha Jaise Maine Gum mea Mila pee Liya
Hasti rahi Pagalo ki Tarah Kuch pal ke liye iss Tarah
Ke Khambhakt Ne jaate -2 "Meri" keh Seene ko Chali kar diya !!!

~Divya ~





ji bhaut hi komal ehsaas pesh kiya hai aapne....nice thoughts.
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #35 on: September 29, 2010, 04:39:48 PM »
Dear Divya jee:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap? ik arse baad aapki koShiSh ko paRh rahaa huuN... ehsaas dil ko Chhu gaye.n .. aap aage bhee liKhate rahe.n aise hi.. bazm ki raunaq baRhaate rahiye!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #36 on: December 26, 2011, 05:35:15 PM »
Quote from: Mann on September 27, 2010, 02:21:08 PM
Kamaal karti Ho Divya..  icon_thumleft  Waise Shukriya humaari Nazron ki taareef ke liye.. hahahahaha..


Nazar Bhar Dekha Bhi Na Tha,
Aur Jhuk Gai Nigaah Tumhari.....

Ise Berukhi Kahun Ya Andaaz,
Ya Qatil Si Ek Ada Hai Tumhari....!!!




**~** Mann **~**

Thank you so much Vicky !
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #37 on: December 26, 2011, 05:39:34 PM »
Quote from: Radhika_2 on September 29, 2010, 08:59:14 AM
ji bhaut hi komal ehsaas pesh kiya hai aapne....nice thoughts.

Thank you soooooooooo much Radhikha ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #38 on: December 26, 2011, 05:45:18 PM »
Quote from: Dhaval on September 29, 2010, 04:39:48 PM
Dear Divya jee:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap? ik arse baad aapki koShiSh ko paRh rahaa huuN... ehsaas dil ko Chhu gaye.n .. aap aage bhee liKhate rahe.n aise hi.. bazm ki raunaq baRhaate rahiye!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval


Thank you so much Daval ji.. Mujhe bula aap kahan gayab hop gaye ? Missing ur post too !
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