jaate jaate:Shayri-E-Dard

bond

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dunno if sumone posted it earliar

jaate jaate vo mujhe achchhii nishaani de gayaa
umr bhar doharaauungaa aisii kahani de gayaa

us se main kuchh paa sakuun aisii kahaan ummeed thi
Gam bhi vo shaayad baraa-e-meharabaanii de gayaa

sab havaayen le gayaa mere samandar kii koi
aur mujh ko ek karatii baadabaanii de gayaa

Khair main pyaasaa rahaa par us ne itanaa to kiyaa
meri palakon ki kataaron ko vo paanii de gayaa

NM


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nikki

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jaate jaate

«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2005, 02:07:17 PM »

its too good , maine suni hai kahin(i think it may be a song or gazal sung by jagjit singh)


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bond

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jaate jaate

«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2005, 02:09:43 PM »

it is written by JAVED AKHTER......

jab bhii do aansuu nikal kar rah gaye
dard ke naam badal kar rah gaye

kitanii fariyaadein laboon par ruk gayin
kitane ashk aahoon mein dhal kar rah gaye

NM


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nikki

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jaate jaate

«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2005, 02:10:48 PM »

superbbbb......................bahut hi ache..........................


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bond

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jaate jaate

«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2005, 02:20:35 PM »

lolzzz...maine nahi likha hai NIKKI.....SAME NAZM/GAZAL JO BHI HAI uske aagey ki 2 -4 lines aur

ruKh badal jaataa merii taqadiir kaa
aap hii tevar badal kar rah gaye

khul ke rone ki tamannaa thi hamein
ek do aansuu nikal kar rah gaye

NM


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nikki

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jaate jaate

«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2005, 02:23:45 PM »

I know ..but i like those lines............................................ .


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bond

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jaate jaate

«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2005, 02:32:41 PM »

achha....but nikki ji......abhi kya mein hi akela yahan dusre shayar logo ke lines post karu.....lolzzz


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nikki

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jaate jaate

«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2005, 02:36:20 PM »

lolzzz....

jaate jaate hum bhi kuch aisa keh jayenge
jise sochenge aap to hamare dard ko samajh payenge
khayi hai aisi chot ke hum abb kabhi na sambhal payenge
kiya tha bharosa dilo jaan se jispar, ki bewafai usne
abb hum kissi par aitbaar na kar payenge


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bond

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jaate jaate

«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2005, 02:43:55 PM »

waah bahut achhe..........

dard wahi hota hai
jahan bharosa hota hai
karta hai dil bharosa
fir ye ta umr roota hai

dard ko tere ayee dost
samjh sakta hu mein
jaane kya tu kitna
dard saha hu mein
pyaar ko mere hassi
ka karan banaya gaya
aaj apni hi halat pe kabhi
hasta kabhi rota hu mein


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tushar_4u_im

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Re: jaate jaate

«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2005, 03:08:33 PM »

Quote from: "bond"

aankh jo teri nam hai meri wajah se,...
us bat ka sanam mujhe bhi gam hai,...
bus kat jane de ye ratt hagi kabhi na kabhi subah humare pyar ki bhi,...
milange hum is zindigani me bhi,...
ruksat hue hai teri aankh me pani deker,...
wada kerte hai leker aayange tere liye khushiya zindigi ki,....


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nikki

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jaate jaate

«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2005, 03:18:46 PM »

Quote from: "bond"

wonderfull ji wonderfull

dard pe tere mujhe rona aaya
hoga koi badnaseeb jisne tere pyaar ko hai thukraya

jo haste the tere pyar par kabhi
rote honge aaj woh yaad karke tujhe


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nikki

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jaate jaate

«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2005, 03:20:39 PM »

nice one Tushar................................

umeed ke diye jalaye hue hun
dil bhuj chuka hai, magar aas lagaye hue hun


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sanya310

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jaate jaate

«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2005, 03:21:57 PM »

nice ones bond and everyone else...good work
keep it going... ..


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nikki

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jaate jaate

«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2005, 03:25:24 PM »

thanx Sanya............................................ .......


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bond

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jaate jaate

«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2005, 03:33:08 PM »

Quote from: "nikki"

Quote from: "bond"

wonderfull ji wonderfull

dard pe tere mujhe rona aaya
hoga koi badnaseeb jisne tere pyaar ko hai thukraya

jo haste the tere pyar par kabhi
rote honge aaj woh yaad karke tujhe

bahut khoob NIKKI N THANKS TUSHAR

uski aaknho ka har aanso
meri aankhein mein aa jaye
bas dua hai rub se itni ke
uasey meri yaad na aaye
gar mein kabhi yaad bhi aao
to usey rana na aaye....
hain juda aab raste hamare
par uske chehre pe muskaan ho
jab bhi usey yaad meri aaye


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