jaate jaate

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«Reply #45 on: June 15, 2005, 04:16:52 AM »
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good one samnoj..........bond and nidhi........................
Thank u Pooja ji,bohat khoob samnoj and pyarikudi.
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«Reply #46 on: June 15, 2005, 04:30:34 AM »
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good one NIDHI Usual Smile

tum jo roye they akele mein
to aansuu yahan bhi barse they
kaise batayein hum tum bin
tumhaare liye kitne tarse they

BOND
Thanx bond and very nice.

"Ehsaas hai mujhe tujhe pyar bohat hai mujhse,
  kis tarah ham ek dooje ki saanso me hain base,
  ek dooje ka dard mehsoos yun karte hain ham,
  phir kyon hain ye dooriyan,ae mere sanam."


wah!!!!!!   bahot  khoob....nidhi...........bond........sam......... .pyarkikudi...

usay chaha usay pooja, yahee toqdeer hai apni
humain gumrah mat samjo ibadat kab badalti hai...............
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«Reply #47 on: June 15, 2005, 10:25:26 AM »
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GOOD ONE........

aaj fir yu woh mujhey tasalli de gaya
mere pass se mera thoda gum le gaya
woh bhi hai musafir dard ki rahoon ka
isliye shayad mere dard ko apna keh gaya

BOND


veryyyyy nice .....................bond..........
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«Reply #48 on: June 15, 2005, 12:09:32 PM »
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bahut khoob DEEP.....

tanhai ki wadiyon mein basa gaon mera hai
dard hai , aansuu hain aur bas andhera hai
tu aayi thi kabhi suraj ki pehli kiran bankar
tere jaane ke baad aab fir wahi haal mera hai

BOND


bohat khoob...

Jo hum se bichhad gaye hai
rukh zindagi ka humara aise  mod kar
kya khabar hai unko ke yadon mein unki raat bhar
rote he kis tarah hum, palkon ko odh kar.
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«Reply #49 on: June 15, 2005, 05:25:17 PM »
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Quote from: "bond"
bahut khoob DEEP.....

tanhai ki wadiyon mein basa gaon mera hai
dard hai , aansuu hain aur bas andhera hai
tu aayi thi kabhi suraj ki pehli kiran bankar
tere jaane ke baad aab fir wahi haal mera hai

BOND


bohat khoob...

Jo hum se bichhad gaye hai
rukh zindagi ka humara aise  mod kar
kya khabar hai unko ke yadon mein unki raat bhar
rote he kis tarah hum, palkon ko odh kar.
Thanx waheed,bohat khoob waheed and nishi......!!!!!
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«Reply #50 on: June 16, 2005, 05:38:00 PM »
wah bahut achhe......waheed miyan pooja , nidhi , nishi
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«Reply #51 on: June 16, 2005, 06:30:45 PM »
Yaad aaaj phir us ki mujhay rula rhi hai
woh kiun mere itne qareeb arhi hai
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«Reply #52 on: June 16, 2005, 06:39:01 PM »
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bahut khoob DEEP.....

tanhai ki wadiyon mein basa gaon mera hai
dard hai , aansuu hain aur bas andhera hai
tu aayi thi kabhi suraj ki pehli kiran bankar
tere jaane ke baad aab fir wahi haal mera hai

BOND


bohat khoob...

Jo hum se bichhad gaye hai
rukh zindagi ka humara aise  mod kar
kya khabar hai unko ke yadon mein unki raat bhar
rote he kis tarah hum, palkon ko odh kar.


humne unse door hona kabhi na chaha tha
shayad unko hi hamaara saath na bhaya tha
achanak hi badal gaye mere yaar ke tevar...
kya meri nadaniyon ne unko iss kadar sataya tha?Huh?Huh???

BOND
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«Reply #53 on: June 16, 2005, 06:40:34 PM »
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Kaise doon main tera saath aye dost.......
ke aadat hai hume akele chalne ki.........

dukhon ki barsaat me to log sahara talash karte hai....

par hume to aadat us sawan me bighne ki............!{Copied one}


BAHUT ACHHA HAI PYAARIKUDI
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«Reply #54 on: June 17, 2005, 06:15:37 AM »
good work all

teri khaber milti rahe
mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye
mera kya hai charcha mera
zamana sada karta rahega

khush raho jahan bhi raho
tumhe hanste rahna chahiye
mera kya hai hansi me mera
sara ghum chupta rahega

khawaahish hai jo teri
wo puri honi chahiye
mera kya hai khawaab koi
sapno me palta rahega

jiske liye hai tu ruka
wo tujhe milna chahiye
mera kya hai, intezaar koi
meri aankho me tahra rahega
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«Reply #55 on: June 17, 2005, 02:14:09 PM »
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Quote from: "bond"
bahut khoob DEEP.....

tanhai ki wadiyon mein basa gaon mera hai
dard hai , aansuu hain aur bas andhera hai
tu aayi thi kabhi suraj ki pehli kiran bankar
tere jaane ke baad aab fir wahi haal mera hai

BOND


bohat khoob...

Jo hum se bichhad gaye hai
rukh zindagi ka humara aise  mod kar
kya khabar hai unko ke yadon mein unki raat bhar
rote he kis tarah hum, palkon ko odh kar.
Thanx waheed,bohat khoob waheed and nishi......!!!!!


thanks nidhi.... Usual Smile.... goood work bond
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«Reply #56 on: June 17, 2005, 02:14:29 PM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
good work all

teri khaber milti rahe
mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye
mera kya hai charcha mera
zamana sada karta rahega

khush raho jahan bhi raho
tumhe hanste rahna chahiye
mera kya hai hansi me mera
sara ghum chupta rahega

khawaahish hai jo teri
wo puri honi chahiye
mera kya hai khawaab koi
sapno me palta rahega

jiske liye hai tu ruka
wo tujhe milna chahiye
mera kya hai, intezaar koi
meri aankho me tahra rahega


waah sam miyaa.. dil khush kar ditta
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«Reply #57 on: June 17, 2005, 08:31:34 PM »
THANX NISHI ..N NICE SAMMY


aaknh mein khwaab bankar rehtey  ho tum
aankh se aansoo bankar barastey  ho tum
dur rehkar mujh se milne ko tarastey  ho tum
karta hu intazaar kab se, kyun nahi miLte ho tum
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«Reply #58 on: June 18, 2005, 12:24:01 PM »
thanx nishi n raj
bahut ache raj

taraste hai pahli si fursat ke liye
tadapte hai tumhari kurbat ke liye
ek baar pyaar se muskura ker dekho
hum muntazir hai usi chahat ke liye
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«Reply #59 on: June 22, 2005, 11:16:52 AM »
bahut khoob mirza sam......

dard-e-dil mein kamii na ho jaaye
dostii dushmanii na ho jaaye


tum meri dosti kaa dam na bharo
aasmaan muddayii na ho jaaye

apane Khuu-e-vafaa se Darataa huun
aashiqii bandagii na ho jaaye

NM
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