jab aankhein khuli to jaana.....

by nikki on September 04, 2005, 03:04:19 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 05, 2005, 05:34:02 PM »
thanx a million Waheed, Talat, Salma, Aryaan n Humtum...

Bahut khoob Humtum n Meena sis...i m speechless
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«Reply #16 on: September 05, 2005, 05:40:33 PM »
bohot achhe nikki sis...nidhi sis...thy n everyone else...
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«Reply #17 on: September 05, 2005, 05:41:37 PM »
thank u Sanya sis......How u doin?Huh?
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«Reply #18 on: September 05, 2005, 05:47:41 PM »
thanx a lot nikki sis,waheed,TaLat,Aryaan,salma and meena sis.

Excellent nikki sis,humtum and meena sis(last line bohat achi hai).

"Nahi yaad mujhe aaj teri koi bhi baat,
      phir kyun tere naam pe hi ruk jaati hai saans,
      yaad karun to kya,teri bewafaai ko?
      mujhse door rehke wafa ki talash na karo."
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«Reply #19 on: September 05, 2005, 05:50:19 PM »
thanx sanya :oops: :oops: online aati raha karo glasses2 !!!!!!
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«Reply #20 on: September 05, 2005, 05:51:11 PM »
u r always welcum sis...very nice again...

mujhe woh har pal guzra hua yaad hai
magar na jaane tu kyun bhool gaya

kiss baat pe tu khafa hua
kis baat ki mili hai mujhe saza

aaj takk issi kashmakash mein hun
woh kya haalat the?
kyun hum juda ho gaye.....
aisi kya majboori thi
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«Reply #21 on: September 05, 2005, 05:57:52 PM »
wow sis,very touching...and thank u Usual Smile .

"Haalaton ke maare pyaar karnewale bichad gaye,
      na jaane kya thha wo,pyaar ke rang hi badal gaye,
      main yaad rakhungi hamesha wo nazron se tera baat karna,
      zindagi chalti jaa rahi hain,par bhoolti nahi main tera bichadna."
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«Reply #22 on: September 05, 2005, 06:57:37 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
thanx sanya :oops: :oops: online aati raha karo glasses2 !!!!!!


haan aati hoon...bas chat nahi kar paati...messenger nahi haina...

"jis pal ka intezaar maine umr bhar khuli aankhon se sapne dekh kar kiya
aaya wo pal, ab beet nahi raha...askhon se mera aanchal tumne jo bhar diya..."
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«Reply #23 on: September 06, 2005, 01:52:11 AM »
very nice Nikki, Nidhi & Sanya...


Iss marhaley ko maut bhi kehtey hain dosto
Ek pal mein toot jaye jahan umr bhar ka sath
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«Reply #24 on: September 06, 2005, 07:36:22 AM »
Thanx Aryaan and very nice Aryaan and sanya Usual Smile ...!!!!
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«Reply #25 on: September 06, 2005, 08:30:19 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
aaj jabb aankhein khuli to jaana...............

woh rishte jinpe hum garoor karte hain
wahi pal mein, hawa ke jhonke ki tarah
hamari bhavnao ko chaknachoor karte hain

jab sachayi ka saamna hota hai
tabb thes lagti hai

woh jinse umeed ki thi khushiyon ki
unhone humein apne dukh ka karan maana
unke muntzir the hum
ya-khuda unhone humein yeh kya samjha, yeh kya jaana

aaj dil ka aangan kuch soona sa hai
gum kis baat ka hai..
kyun humein hamari neki ki saza mili
yeh bhi to pata nahi

aaj halaat ne humein yeh samjhaya hai
woh jo har pal, har kadam....tamaam-umr.. aapke saath chalta hai
woh koi aur nahi, aapka apna saaya hai  


WAH nikki sis bahut he khoob likha apne...!!!  aur nice one by all...!!!  Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: September 06, 2005, 03:17:28 PM »
Thanx a lot Sanya for your appreciaiton...and beautiful words by all............

Ye dard jisse log pyar kehte hai jahan mein,
Issi dard ke sahare hi jiya ab talak humne,
Kehte hai gum khushiyo ka paigam hota hai,
Yahi soch kar bas pyar nibhaya hai humne....
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«Reply #27 on: September 06, 2005, 05:08:31 PM »
thanx a lot Nidhi sis, Sanya sis, Salma sis, Aryaan, n THY...
VERY NICE ALL....

woh jo humne khuli aankhon se dekhe
un khaabon ki tabeer nahi thi
jinhein humne jaan se chaha..
unhein pa lete umr-bhar ke liye
aisi apni takdeer nahi thi
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«Reply #28 on: September 06, 2005, 06:05:37 PM »
thanx sis and bohat khoob Usual Smile .

"Do pal ke saath ke liye taraste rahe umrabhar,
      khamosh baithe yaad karte rahe usko har waqt,
      kaisa sitam ooparwale tune mujhpe dhaaya hai,
      dil mera,aaj mere liye hi paraaya hai................"
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«Reply #29 on: September 07, 2005, 09:47:11 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
thanx sis and bohat khoob Usual Smile .

"Do pal ke saath ke liye taraste rahe umrabhar,
      khamosh baithe yaad karte rahe usko har waqt,
      kaisa sitam ooparwale tune mujhpe dhaaya hai,
      dil mera,aaj mere liye hi paraaya hai................"


hmmmmm  yahan  to  sabhi  ek  se  badhkar  ek  hain.....  Nikki....Aryan....Sanya........Nidhi........Thy.. ......  sabhi  logon  ne  bahot  accha likha.........maza  aa  gaya...  tongue3

koi apna nahi sub hi to paraye hain
dosti kar ke sirf dhokay hi khaye hain
jo bhi milta hai chala jata hai chor kar tanha
hamain nahi khabar apnon ke liye bhi hum paraye hain....................nm
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