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«Reply #120 on: June 22, 2005, 11:10:53 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "hina_chandni"
Ek mudat se meri zaat k ander tu hai
Ek mudat se meri soch ka mehver tu hai
mein tere pyar k sahil pe khadi hoon tanha
meri chahat ka samandar tu hai
wow,lovely hina Usual Smile

"Pyar ke saahilon pe aaj tumhe bhi paaya hai,
  ek muddat se sata raha mujhe ek saaya hai,
  kashti sambhale khadi hoon,doob na jaaye ,
  itna bada samandar seene se lagaaya hai."


very  nice.........nidhi.........hina.........saba..... ..........naveed,,,,,,,,,,sabhi logon  ne bahot accha  likha...........

nidhi  tumhara  jawaab  nahi .........kya  baat  kah  gayee ho ...kitna  deep ................................................. P

mazboor  kar  diya waqt  mujhe  is kadar
ab  to  har  roj  sholon  mein jalne ki aadat ho gayee
le  ja  rahi jindagi ki  kasti mujhe  saath
dekhte  hain  mujhe mauj  apne aagosh mein leti  hai kis kadar.........
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«Reply #121 on: June 22, 2005, 12:44:48 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "hina_chandni"
Ek mudat se meri zaat k ander tu hai
Ek mudat se meri soch ka mehver tu hai
mein tere pyar k sahil pe khadi hoon tanha
meri chahat ka samandar tu hai
wow,lovely hina Usual Smile

"Pyar ke saahilon pe aaj tumhe bhi paaya hai,
  ek muddat se sata raha mujhe ek saaya hai,
  kashti sambhale khadi hoon,doob na jaaye ,
  itna bada samandar seene se lagaaya hai."


very  nice.........nidhi.........hina.........saba..... ..........naveed,,,,,,,,,,sabhi logon  ne bahot accha  likha...........

nidhi  tumhara  jawaab  nahi .........kya  baat  kah  gayee ho ...kitna  deep ................................................. P

mazboor  kar  diya waqt  mujhe  is kadar
ab  to  har  roj  sholon  mein jalne ki aadat ho gayee
le  ja  rahi jindagi ki  kasti mujhe  saath
dekhte  hain  mujhe mauj  apne aagosh mein leti  hai kis kadar.........


Waheed........ Excellent .........

All r very good.... Nidhi aur Hina jawab nahi
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«Reply #122 on: June 22, 2005, 06:40:28 PM »
Woh ruthey is kadar ki manaya na gaya,
Dur itne huye ki paas bulaya na gaya,
Dil to dil tha,samundar ki ret nahin,
Likh diya jo unka naam to phir mitaaya na gaya.
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«Reply #123 on: June 23, 2005, 12:12:36 PM »
Quote from: "Saba_Saba"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "hina_chandni"
Ek mudat se meri zaat k ander tu hai
Ek mudat se meri soch ka mehver tu hai
mein tere pyar k sahil pe khadi hoon tanha
meri chahat ka samandar tu hai
wow,lovely hina Usual Smile

"Pyar ke saahilon pe aaj tumhe bhi paaya hai,
  ek muddat se sata raha mujhe ek saaya hai,
  kashti sambhale khadi hoon,doob na jaaye ,
  itna bada samandar seene se lagaaya hai."


very  nice.........nidhi.........hina.........saba..... ..........naveed,,,,,,,,,,sabhi logon  ne bahot accha  likha...........

nidhi  tumhara  jawaab  nahi .........kya  baat  kah  gayee ho ...kitna  deep ................................................. P

mazboor  kar  diya waqt  mujhe  is kadar
ab  to  har  roj  sholon  mein jalne ki aadat ho gayee
le  ja  rahi jindagi ki  kasti mujhe  saath
dekhte  hain  mujhe mauj  apne aagosh mein leti  hai kis kadar.........


Waheed........ Excellent .........

All r very good.... Nidhi aur Hina jawab nahi


thanku  thanku  saba.............. tongue3  very  nice naveed........tongue3
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«Reply #124 on: June 23, 2005, 04:59:30 PM »
wah waheed,bohat badhiya :D  thanx sabaa and waheed Usual Smile
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«Reply #125 on: June 24, 2005, 02:11:15 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
wah waheed,bohat badhiya :D  thanx sabaa and waheed Usual Smile


thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx  nidhi....................tongue3.....very  nice  naveed........
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«Reply #126 on: June 24, 2005, 07:15:05 PM »
Woh Aaj Na Jane Kis Sahil pe Khri Hai Naveed
Tu Kiun Us K Liye Samundr Mein Doob Rha hai
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«Reply #127 on: June 24, 2005, 07:23:47 PM »
nice lines naveed...............n...............waheed...... ...keep it up"
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«Reply #128 on: June 24, 2005, 07:35:02 PM »
Quote from: "hina_chandni"
nice lines naveed...............n...............waheed...... ...keep it up"
Thanx


Jab Ayi Yaad Un ki tu dil mera Muskra Diya
Tuney Meri Jaan Aisa Mujh Pe Kia Jadoo kr Diya
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«Reply #129 on: June 24, 2005, 07:40:11 PM »
yaad aa rahi hai aaj wo raat
jab hum tum jaagay thai saath
tumein yaad ho ya na ho
aaj phir ek raat hai or hum tanha hain
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«Reply #130 on: June 24, 2005, 07:42:33 PM »
Quote from: "hina_chandni"
yaad aa rahi hai aaj wo raat
jab hum tum jaagay thai saath
tumein yaad ho ya na ho
aaj phir ek raat hai or hum tanha hain
nice

Aap Ki Is Tanhai mein Hum Bhi Aap K saath hain
Gar Samjho Hum Ko Dost Tu hUm Bhi Saath Hain
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hina_chandni
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«Reply #131 on: June 24, 2005, 07:50:29 PM »
BEWAFAII KI YEH INTEHA HOGAYEE
ke tujhse juda hokar bhi jeeney ki aadat hogayee
tum laut ke aaogey humsey milney
roz dil ko behlaney ki aadat hogayee
terey waadey pe kiya bharosa kya humney
keh raat bhar tera intezaar karney ki aadat hogayee
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #132 on: June 24, 2005, 07:50:32 PM »
Quote from: "hina_chandni"
yaad aa rahi hai aaj wo raat
jab hum tum jaagay thai saath
tumein yaad ho ya na ho
aaj phir ek raat hai or hum tanha hain


thanx  alot  hina..............excellent  written  Hina.,.............  bahot khoob aap  ne likha.....
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hina_chandni
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«Reply #133 on: June 24, 2005, 07:54:07 PM »
.........................thanx waheed ji.............................
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«Reply #134 on: June 24, 2005, 07:56:36 PM »
Quote from: "hina_chandni"
BEWAFAII KI YEH INTEHA HOGAYEE
ke tujhse juda hokar bhi jeeney ki aadat hogayee
tum laut ke aaogey humsey milney
roz dil ko behlaney ki aadat hogayee
terey waadey pe kiya bharosa kya humney
keh raat bhar tera intezaar karney ki aadat hogayee

Tera Yeh Intezar Krna Unko yad krna "Hina"
Aik Roz Usay Zror Wapis le kr aye ga
Tu Na Ho preshan Mere Dost
Woh khusiaon s Daman Tera BHr Laye ga
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