<<<<JAB AAYEE YAAD UNKI>>>>>> -Panna 17:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #240 on: December 13, 2005, 04:19:27 PM »

Everyone done very well...........................

saaqi teri mehfil mein ek mehmaan abhi baki hai....,
teri may ka, tere roop ka kadardaan abhi baki hai....;
is tarah kaise uTh jaaoo'n, kahani adhoori chhoD kar aise...,
tune rukh se naqaab uThaaya hai mera imtehaan abhi baki hai..!!! (nm)


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«Reply #241 on: December 13, 2005, 04:57:54 PM »

kya kahoon nirbhay ji badi saadgi se saari baat keh gaye...bahoot khoob....


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«Reply #242 on: December 13, 2005, 05:00:10 PM »

Saba ji..aisa na kahiye .....jo hai wahi likha jata hai...bahoot se oomda our majboot pakad waale shayar yahaan is site par mojood hain....unki rai bhi shayad is rai se mukrtalif nahi hogi....

ab aap isko kya kahenge jo aapne nazer kiya...itna sunder Muktak aapne pesh kar diya...

"paas hoker bhi door tha.....our woh gamo se choor tha"

Is muktak main mujhe toh koi kami nazer nahi aayee..poori tarah chhand badhh kiya gaya hai.....

mujhe toh tere chahne waale bhi achhay lagne lage
Jab se woh tera naam leker mujhko bhi thhagne lage.
Raat ke har pehar main unki ik-ik baat ka matlab
yuin hi soch soch ker ham tasawwur main bhi hasne lage.


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«Reply #243 on: December 13, 2005, 06:21:31 PM »

Hmmmmmmmm

Jab bhi diya hum bujhate hai
Khayalo.n me woh chale aate hai
Apni shakhshiyat ke saare rang
Humare paas chhor jaate hai


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«Reply #244 on: December 14, 2005, 05:49:00 AM »

Waah..........

Aap aati hain,
our phir chali jaati hain....
hazoor..!!
Aapse toh aapki yaad hi achhi,
jo aati hai..
phir jaati hi nahi.


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«Reply #245 on: December 14, 2005, 01:16:12 PM »

Quote from: "harashmahajan"

waah waahid ji...wah..kya marvelous gehrayee di hai aapne apne lafzon ko......

Bikharte hue Jazbaaton ko samet lo apne aanchal main
na do ise naam rooh ka, kahain ye tera daman na chhod de.
lamha-lamha hai mere dost, us mout ko pegaam
uthhalo un bikhre hue ahsaason ko kahin wo teri saanse na rok de.

waahid ji bahoot achha lagta hai aapki shayari ka andaaz padker...our bahoot afsos hota hai jab aisi ashar per jab comments kutchh is tarah ke aatein hain ki..."Bahoot achha likha hai sabne"...toh koft hoti hai...aisa likhne ka matlab hai ki..us shaks ne us ashar ko shayad samjha hi nahi..ya nazer andaaz ker diya...apna likhne ki chaah main woh achhi achhi cheezon ko padna bhi ganwaara nahi samjha....is tarah lafzon ko anzaam dene main, kaafi dikkat mehsoos hoti hai...shayar ke dil-o-deemaag, jab charam seema paar kerta hai..toh shayad,is tarah ka koi oomda ashar Zehen se nikalta hai....chhoo jata hai dil ki Gehraayion ko....Rahi aapki baat...bahoot achhi shayari kerte hain aap...so padne main sakoon sa milta hai....hamare likhne ka matlab kisi ko dukh pahoochaane ka katayee nahi hai...phir bhi agar kisi bhi shaks ko dukh pahooncha ho toh main tahe dil se muafi choonga...khuda aap sab ke zehen main tandrusti de......God bless you all..always

harsh[/b]

Thanxxxxxx alot Harsh Bhai..........aap ne bahot jyada hi tareef kar diya....Harsh bhai yahan sabhi log bahot accha likhte hain...mujhse bhi accha.....mujhe sabhi logon ki acchi lagti hai....aap ki bhi...sirf fark itna hai ki mere paas itna time nahi milta ki har ek ko main reply kar paon...jo old members hain jinke saath maine bahot likha unko hi main poora time nahi de paata hoon......Yoindia per sabhi logon ka andaaz niraala hai.........

excellent work ..............Harsh......Saba........Nirbhay..... ...Badnaam shayar......Sonu........& all...........


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«Reply #246 on: December 14, 2005, 01:38:52 PM »

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Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

Thanxxxxxx Saba........Tushu..............vey nice Saba.......Tushu......Nikss.........wonderful reply....

bus itni see kahani hai, iske siwa kuch bhi nahi
woh bichad gaya, aur main bikhar gaya.......

Waheed marvellous

Kaha chhupa chhupa kar rakhte ho ... inte pur asar ashar

Reply nahi kar sakti :oops: lafz nahi mil rahe

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx alot Saba..................


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«Reply #247 on: December 14, 2005, 04:17:17 PM »

Harash Bohat KhuuB :oops:

Waheed u r right.... sab ko waqt dena bohat mushkil hai lekin
namumkin to nahi na tongue3


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«Reply #248 on: December 15, 2005, 05:36:35 AM »

Shukriya Waheed and Saba ji.........


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«Reply #249 on: December 15, 2005, 09:04:03 AM »

Yaadein........

Hayat ka sarmaya
Jeene ki chah
aur kabhi aansu
kitne roop leti hai yeh yaadein
mushkil to tab hoti hai
jab yeh yaadein us ki ho
jo humare paas na ho
Aur hume bohat azeez ho


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«Reply #250 on: December 15, 2005, 02:21:04 PM »

ik intzaar tha, ab nazar mein vo bhi nahi
safar mein marne ki furst thi, ghar mein vo bhi nahi,

zaraa malaal kii zulmat ko talne ke liye
kaii khyaal the, ab to asar mein vo bhi nahi,
(malaal=sorrow/anguish: zulmat= darkness)

Jo sang-o-khaar the meri hi gardishon tak the
main rah guzar mein nahi, rah guzar mein vo bhi nahi,
(sang=stone: khaar= thorn)


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«Reply #251 on: December 15, 2005, 04:08:06 PM »

gr8 all of u......

"khud hi ko khud ba khud tabaha kiya hai maine,
aur tabahi pe apni wah wah kiya hai maine.

chaha tha viran zindagi mein apni range ishq bharu,
jahan ka bas yahi ek gunaha kiya hai maine.

maut meri manzil hai badh raha uski taraf,
zindagi teri kab parwah ki hai maine.

teri surat, teri tasvir, teri aankho se tadapkar,
bar bar aaha kiyahai maine."

nm...


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«Reply #252 on: December 15, 2005, 05:13:36 PM »

Chain se beete the kutchh din ab toh ye hona hi tha,
Zurm Hansne ka kiya tha Ek din Rona hi tha.

Aajmana chahta tha woh hamare Zarf ko
Hum diya banker jale, usko saba hona hi tha.

Mushkilein hamko milien sab nemtein uski huin,
Hum hue insaan toh use khuda hona hi tha.


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«Reply #253 on: December 15, 2005, 06:50:09 PM »

Quote from: "Saba_Saba"

Harash Bohat KhuuB :oops:

Waheed you r right.... sab ko waqt dena bohat mushkil hai lekin
namumkin to nahi na tongue3

haan Saba namumkin to kuch bhi nahi ............:oops:
excellent work aall friends.................keep it up........

main har gum mein hansta raha aankh kabhi num na hue
main saath chala duniya ke magar duniya shareeke ghum na hue .....


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«Reply #254 on: December 16, 2005, 06:12:27 AM »

gr8 ... good onw waheed bhai........


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