Jab bhi qareeb aata hoon batanay k liye

by timy on February 12, 2008, 05:35:53 PM
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timy
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Jab bhi qareeb aata hoon batanay k liye
Zindagi door rakhti hai satanay k liye

MehfilOn ki shaan na samajhna mujhay
Main to hansta hoOn gham chupanay k liye

In faaslOn ko na samjho meri be-Wafayi
Main door hoon tumse, paas aanay k liye

Mat jano haqeeqat mere in AansuOn ko
Main to roota hoon tumhein rulanay k liye

Koi gila nahi hai mujhay apni barbadi ka
Main to khaila tha aag se jal janay k liye

Ab duniya kuch bhi kahay, mujhay parwa nahi
Main to jeeta tha zindagi, mar janay k liye
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2008, 05:38:37 PM »
wah Timy ji kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob!! yah lines bahoot hi achi likhi hai apne..

Mat jano haqeeqat mere in AansuOn ko
Main to roota hoon tumhein rulanay k liye

magar yah kavita Khumar-e-ishaq section ki nahi hai so moving in Shayri-e-dard!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2008, 05:39:58 PM »
bahut khoob TIMY...bahut hi khoob likha hai....
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2008, 06:04:46 PM »
bahut khub

dur jitna rahoge nazdikiyan badengi
bahaane duriyon ke dhundh lena kabhi.
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2008, 04:48:16 AM »
itne kareeb aa k b
na jane kisliye
kuch ajnabi se aap hai
kuch ajnabi se hum.


timy bahut accha likha h aapne aour poojaji aapne b jwab accha diya hai.



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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2013, 05:36:12 AM »
Bahut Khoob.
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