Jab dhoop mein darakht ka saaya nahi mila

by betukh_ bakbaki on February 13, 2012, 05:21:36 PM
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All the three couplets are separate and unrelated.


Darasal main patthar chaba raha tha
Doston ko laga ki muskura raha tha



Phir raaste ki thakan hi chhatri samajh ke khol li
Jab dhoop mein darakht ka saaya nahi mila





Aankhein bundh karke yeh mumkin hai ghar pahunch jaaoge
Gaur se raasta dhoondhoge toh bhatak jaaoge
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2012, 05:46:03 PM »
Applause Applause sambhalna hoga muqaddar to sambhal jaoge, ~aatish~ jalte rahoge to khak me mil jaoge.
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2012, 06:56:59 PM »
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Quote from: betukh_ bakbaki on February 13, 2012, 05:21:36 PM
All the three couplets are separate and unrelated.


Darasal main patthar chaba raha tha
Doston ko laga ki muskura raha tha



Phir raaste ki thakan hi chhatri samajh ke khol li
Jab dhoop mein darakht ka saaya nahi mila





Aankhein bundh karke yeh mumkin hai ghar pahunch jaaoge
Gaur se raasta dhoondhoge toh bhatak jaaoge
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2012, 07:08:52 PM »
manoj bhai aur aatish ji ko shukriya.main is forum mein bilkul naya hoon,aapki hausla afzaee aur islaah ka khwaishmand hoon.
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2012, 03:23:00 AM »
khub... betukhji...
dusara bahut acha hai..
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2012, 03:37:52 AM »
boht ache sahib
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2012, 03:59:40 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2012, 09:48:53 AM »
Darasal main patthar chaba raha tha
Doston ko laga ki muskura raha tha

mujhe ye sher samajh mein nahin aayi
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«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2012, 10:12:09 AM »
tammana ji yakeen maniye main khud ise samajhne ki kosis mein laga hoon.gar aap matlab dhuund paaye toh jarur bata dijiyega
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2012, 08:34:57 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob..

teeno Sher ek se badhkar ek hai..

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