Jab dil toot-te hain...:Shayri-E-Dard

Ravi_Dave

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Jab dil toot-te hain to aawaaz bhi nahi aati,
kaisi yeh kash-makashi uski yaad bhi nahi jaati,

Kaisi yeh berukhi woh dil ke raaz bhi nahi khol paati,
meri hi yeh bad-naseebi woh mujhe barbaad bhi nahi kar paati,
kaisi yeh kash-makashi uski yaad bhi nahi jaati,

Uski bhi yehi kamzori ke woh pyaar ka aaghaz nahi kar paati,
mere bhi yeh majboori ke uski dil ke saad meri dhadkan samaj nahi paati,
kaisi yeh kash-makashi uski yaad bhi nahi jaati,

Muje uski naaraazgi ki kya khabar (2), woh naaraaz nazar bhi to nahi aati,
yeh kaisi be-matlabsi laachaari, uski yaad ke baad kisi aur ki yaad hi nahi aati,
ke kaisi yeh kash-makashi uski yaad bhi nahi jaati!


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Sahiba Zehra

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Jab dil toot-te hain...

«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2007, 04:13:08 PM »

Gud work Ravinder G


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Talat

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Jab dil toot-te hain...

«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2007, 12:34:17 PM »

Beautiful work Ravi, Hope to see you here soon Usual Smile


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Shikha12

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Jab dil toot-te hain...

«Reply #3 on: August 14, 2007, 01:11:59 PM »

Nice Creation... =D>


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Pooja

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Jab dil toot-te hain...

«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2007, 02:04:37 PM »

wah kaya baat hai... kaisi yeh kash-makashi uski yaad bhi nahi jaati, ... bahoot khoob Ravi ji...

Bahoot dino baad apko pada hai.... bahoot hi acha likha hai...

Dil tootne ka dard bayan nahi hota
Insaan us waqat jameen –asmaan ka nahi hota
Bhool kar khud ko, is kadar usmain kho jaata hai
Waqat uska nahi aor wo kisi ka nahi hota!!!


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Ravi_Dave

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Jab dil toot-te hain...

«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2007, 01:01:00 PM »

Shukriya Zehra, Talat, Shikha and Pooja!

Ji bohat dinon baad isliye kyunki, main abhi chootiyon pe tha university se to ghar par internet nahi tha...ab aa gaya hoon apni bazm mein.

Wah Wah kya baat hain Pooja...bohat sahi baat hain...amazing.

Thank You once more.


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SHONA

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Jab dil toot-te hain...

«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2007, 05:36:33 PM »

Too Good...beautiful one ravi g


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