jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

by Arifa on January 02, 2005, 12:13:23 PM

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stalin

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«Reply #15 on: January 06, 2005, 01:56:49 PM »

" tum aaye jindagi mein to barsaat ki tarah
aur chal diye to jaise khuli raat ki tarah
vade rahe adhoore bichhadna pada hume
tha ye bhi ittefaq mulaqat ki tarah"


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Just_Hate_Love

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jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

«Reply #16 on: January 07, 2005, 02:58:02 PM »

It was nice one Stalin. Good job.


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rohit30002

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Re: jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

«Reply #17 on: June 27, 2005, 12:20:49 PM »

Quote from: "Arifa"

aey sanam tujh say mien jab duur chla jaon ga
yaad rekhna kay tujhae yaad bhat aonga

yeh milan or yeh hasinn raat najanay kab ho
aj kay baad mulaqaat na jannnay kab ho
ab teray sher musafir ki trhan aonga

chand kay akss mien suraj ki haseen kirno mien
jheel kay aienay mien bhettay hoa jherno mien
in nzaron mien tujhae mien hi nazer aonga

Nice aarifa


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stalin

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jawab

«Reply #18 on: June 27, 2005, 12:40:21 PM »

Thanx to all.................

" roj chhup chhup ke mujhse yun milne aane wale
tujhpe ilzam laga denge zamane wale
tu bas itna bata de maine tera kya bura kiya
mere ghar ko is tarah sare shham jalane wale"


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Just_Hate_Love

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jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

«Reply #19 on: June 30, 2005, 05:42:56 PM »

It was cool one Stalin ...
Good going ...
Keep it up ...


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stalin

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«Reply #20 on: July 02, 2005, 12:42:10 PM »

.................shukriya janab............

"muddtein gujri teri yaad bhi na aayi hume
aur hum tumhe bhool gaye aisa bhi nahi"


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Just_Hate_Love

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jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

«Reply #21 on: July 03, 2005, 11:44:53 AM »

You are most welcome janaab ...

Teri hi baatein bataane aaye,
Dost bhi dil dukhaane aaye;

Phool khilte hai to hum sochte hai,
Tere aane ke zamaane aaye;

Aisi kucha chup si lagi hai jaise,
Hum unhe haal sunaane aaye;

Ab to rone se bhi dil dukhta hai,
Shayad ab hosh thikaane aaye;

Kya kahi phir koi basti ujri,
Log kyu jashn manaane aaye;

So raha hu maut ke pehlu mein,
Neend kis waqt najaane aaye ...


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nikki

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jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

«Reply #22 on: July 03, 2005, 12:00:59 PM »

its just wonderfull JHL.....................ek koshish main bhi karun........may be pasand aye...

chaliye kuch to aap bhi sunane aye
khushi na sahi, dukh ke nazrane laye

lijiye hum aap ka shukriya kehne aye
ek tere lautne ki umeed baaki thi
magar tum kabhi na lautne ki khabar sunane aye

ek woh waqt hua karta tha
har ghadi tera intzaar kiya karti thi
magar abb yeh kya zamaane aye
tumne hi dard diya tha, abb tum hi dawa churane aye


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Just_Hate_Love

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jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

«Reply #23 on: July 03, 2005, 12:10:41 PM »

Wah ...
Bahut khoob ...
Hame pasand aayi ...
Keep it up ...


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nikki

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jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

«Reply #24 on: July 03, 2005, 12:13:35 PM »

pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya JHL, aap hi ke alfaaz churaye hain :wink:


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Just_Hate_Love

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jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

«Reply #25 on: July 03, 2005, 12:21:47 PM »

Alfaaz to hamare the lekin usko sahi jagah aapne rakha hai ...
Anyways you are most welcome ...


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nikki

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jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

«Reply #26 on: July 03, 2005, 12:31:11 PM »

Thanx a lot JHL.............................................. ......


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Just_Hate_Love

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jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

«Reply #27 on: July 03, 2005, 12:35:21 PM »

I said you are welcome ...

"Pata hai tum nahi aaogi,
Phir bhi maine apne ghar ki har deewar saja rakkhi hai;
Pata hai tum meri nahi,
Phir bhi maine yeh baat apne dil se chhupa rakkhi hai!" (nm)