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" Eid Ke Din Udaas Se Ghar Mei'n, Ek Bewa Ghareeb Ro Rahi Thi...
Uss Ka Bachcha Jo Yeh Puch Baitha Ke
"Maa, Eid BungLoun Mei'n Hi Kyu'n Hoti Hai..?"

yeh Ghazal Ek Maa Aur Ek Bete Ki Aapsi Baatcheet Hai
jisme Beta Apni Maa Ko Dilaase De Raha Hai Ke
Rone se Kuch haasil Nahi Hota Isliye Rona Chodd Bhi de..
Muflisi Mein Log Kin Kin MajbooriyoN Ka Saamna Karte Hai
Yeh Ghazal uss Soch par Adhaarit Hai..Dil Ki Nazron se Padhiyega...

Chal Maa Yeh Bazaar Mujhe Lagta Mehanga Bahut Hai
Paas Jo yeh 20 Rupaye Hai yeh Yahan Sasta Bahut hai

kahin jaakar Do Roti Se Apni Bhook Mita Lenge Hum Dono
Gareeb Ke liye Bas jeene Ke Liye Yahan Itna Bahut Hai

Khwaishon Ko Be-Maut Marne Diya Kar Naa Eh Maaa!!!!
Paani Ka Dariya Aankhon Me Bewajah Rukhta Bahut hai

Mere Kapdo Ki Koi Parwaah Naa Kar,yeh Thik Thaak se Hai
Sharir Ko Dhakne Ke Liye Yeh Kapda Bhi Itna Bahut Hai

Taqdeer se Yuh Haar kar Roti Kyon Hai Maaa.....!!!!
jo Bhi hai jaisa Bhi hai,Yaad Rakh Mera Khuda Acha bahut hai

Sirf Paisa Paas Ho To Hi sab Kuch Nahi Hai Naa Maa..!!!!
Par Woh Baat Aur Hai ke Paiso Se,Apna Pet Bharta Bahut hai

Suuna Hai Ke iss Duniya mein Gham Ka Koi Khareedar nahi
Kya Kare Maa...Yahan Insaan Ka Imaan Bikhta Bahut Hai

Tujhe Andaaza Bhi Nahi Yahan Log Kaise Jeete Hai...!!!!!!
Woh Andhero Mein Rota Hai Jo Ujaalo Me Hasta Bahut Hai

"Khwaish" Kuch Yuh Likh Ke Teri kalam Bhi Ro Pade...!!!!!
Ashq Aankhon Se Girte Hai Tab , Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut hai

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2012, 10:48:14 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2012, 10:42:31 AM

" Eid Ke Din Udaas Se Ghar Mei'n, Ek Bewa Ghareeb Ro Rahi Thi...
Uss Ka Bachcha Jo Yeh Puch Bai tha Ke
"Maa, Eid BungLoun Mei'n Hi Kyu'n Hoti Hai..?"

yeh Ghazal Ek Maa Aur Ek Bete Ki Aapsi Baatcheet Hai
jisme Beta Apni Maa Ko Dilaase De Raha Hai Ke
Rone se Kuch haasil Nahi Hota Isliye Rona Chodd Bhi de..
Muflisi Mein Log Kin Kin MajbooriyoN Ka Saamna Karte Hai
Yeh Ghazal uss Soch par Adhaarit Hai..Dil Ki Nazron se Padhiyega...

Chal Maa Yeh Bazaar Mujhe Lagta Mehanga Bahut Hai
Paas Jo yeh 20 Rupaye Hai yeh Yahan Sasta Bahut hai

kahin jaakar Do Roti Se Apni Bhook Mita Lenge Hum Dono
Gareeb Ke liye Bas jeene Ke Liye Yahan Itna Bahut Hai

Khwaishon Ko Be-Maut Marne Diya Kar Naa Eh Maaa!!!!
Paani Ka Dariya Aankhon Me Bewajah Rukhta Bahut hai

Mere Kapdo Ki Koi Parwaah Naa Kar,yeh Thik Thaak se Hai
Sharir Ko Dhakne Ke Liye Yeh Kapda Bhi Itna Bahut Hai

Taqdeer se Yuh Haar kar Roti Kyon Hai Maaa.....!!!!
jo Bhi hai jaisa Bhi hai,Yaad Rakh Mera Khuda Acha bahut hai

Sirf Paisa Paas Ho To Hi sab Kuch Nahi Hai Naa Maa..!!!!
Par Woh Baat Aur Hai ke Paiso Se,Apna Pet Bharta Bahut hai

Suuna Hai Ke iss Duniya mein Gham Ka Koi Khareedar nahi
Kya Kare Maa...Yahan Insaan Ka Imaan Bikhta Bahut Hai

Tujhe Andaaza Bhi Nahi Yahan Log Kaise Jeete Hai...!!!!!!
Woh Andhero Mein Rota Hai Jo Ujaalo Me Hasta Bahut Hai

"Khwaish" Kuch Yuh Likh Ke Teri kalam Bhi Ro Pade...!!!!!
Ashq Aankhon Se Girte Hai Tab , Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut hai

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

i am speachless.............!! thats it

tere lafzo.n ne aakhon ko rula diya,
tere kalaam ne dil ko hilaa diya.

mere kyaal se YOINDIA ne jis award se aap ko nawaaza hai iss kalaam ke baad se main yehi kahoon gi woh bhi kam hai


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2012, 10:57:48 AM »

khwaish ji thode men itnaa hee kahoongaa ki aapkee is peshkash par hazaaron salute


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2012, 11:22:31 AM »

khwaish ji bahut achhe se aapne ek gareeb ke zazbaat likhe hain.
daad hazir hai.

kya karen yahan doonia mein ameer kam aur gareeb bahut hain.
sabke hisse ka ye ameer liye baithe hain.
gareeb ka zameer yahan sasta bahut hai.


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2012, 12:31:20 PM »

Khwaish bhai...

kya kehne ish ghazal ke.. wah bhai wah..

har ek lafz sachai bayan kar rahi hai...

aankhe bhar aayi.. aur aakhiri ke chaar line to kya baat hai...

beshumar daad kabul kare...


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2012, 12:41:39 PM »

laajabab... kuchh kahne ko nahin hai is rachna par.... bahut hi dard hai ismain.. uuffffffff

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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2012, 02:07:12 PM »

no words for copmliment


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2012, 02:21:33 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2012, 10:42:31 AM

Fabulous creation . Made me cry .. Bahoot Bahoot sach likha hai.. Aur iss ghazal ka ak ak sher behad umda aur lajawaab hai.. sachai ka darpan hai yea ghazal,... Bahoot bahoot Umda .. bahoot Khoob !

Nysha


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2012, 02:34:08 PM »

भावनाओं से ओत-प्रोत इस बेशकीमती रचना की, जितनी तारीफ़ की जाए कम होगी.........बहूत बहूत खूब भाई.


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #9 on: January 05, 2012, 03:26:08 PM »

Khuda kay ghum pe likhne wale haazar milenge tujhe yahan mere dost,
Jo dusron kay ehsaason ko mehsoos kar likhe, aisa koi dhund kay bata..
Zada nahin kahunga, mager ap, unn main se ho, jo dusron ko mehsoos kar, likh sakta hai.. Usual Smile

Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2012, 10:42:31 AM

Tujhe Andaaza Bhi Nahi Yahan Log Kaise Jeete Hai...!!!!!!
Woh Andhero Mein Rota Hai Jo Ujaalo Me Hasta Bahut Hai[/i][/b]

Wah Wah Wah..
Yeh quoted ashaar toh dil main ghar kar gaya..
Ankh se ansoo toh ek nahin baha mager, dil nam zaroor hua..
Dost mere, jazbaaton se bhari iss kalam ko, Rahim ka salaam..
Clapping Smiley

Khush rahiye..!


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #10 on: January 05, 2012, 04:48:14 PM »

Khwaish ji
Applause

Sheba ji ke comments ke saath jana chahta hu..sach me jo kuch apne yo ko diya hai uski bharpaai ek award se nahi ki ja sakti. you deserve more than that. Applause


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #11 on: January 05, 2012, 06:55:33 PM »

Bahut khoob,khwaish ji.Dil se daad.


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #12 on: January 05, 2012, 06:56:23 PM »

Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Janab itna kareebi se observation aur itne gehre khayaaloN
ko aapne kalam baND kiya behad khub janab..

Aur aise khayaaloN ko mehsus karne waala shaks waqai saaf dil
aur nek insaan hi ho sakta hai..
Achchi kalaam kahi hai janab.. hazaaroN daad har ahsaar par
har khayaal par..

Dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. likhate rahiye..
Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2012, 03:32:05 AM »

khawaish ji sach kahun aankhon mein aansun bhi aye aur hausla bhi aya . Salute to you for realty


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2012, 05:15:23 AM »

gajab yaar i have noooooo words. sukriyaaaaaaa khawaish jiiii hila diya....,

Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2012, 10:42:31 AM


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