Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish" -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: January 06, 2012, 05:25:49 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2012, 10:42:31 AM

" Eid Ke Din Udaas Se Ghar Mei'n, Ek Bewa Ghareeb Ro Rahi Thi...
Uss Ka Bachcha Jo Yeh Puch Baitha Ke
"Maa, Eid BungLoun Mei'n Hi Kyu'n Hoti Hai..?"

yeh Ghazal Ek Maa Aur Ek Bete Ki Aapsi Baatcheet Hai
jisme Beta Apni Maa Ko Dilaase De Raha Hai Ke
Rone se Kuch haasil Nahi Hota Isliye Rona Chodd Bhi de..
Muflisi Mein Log Kin Kin MajbooriyoN Ka Saamna Karte Hai
Yeh Ghazal uss Soch par Adhaarit Hai..Dil Ki Nazron se Padhiyega...

Chal Maa Yeh Bazaar Mujhe Lagta Mehanga Bahut Hai
Paas Jo yeh 20 Rupaye Hai yeh Yahan Sasta Bahut hai

kahin jaakar Do Roti Se Apni Bhook Mita Lenge Hum Dono
Gareeb Ke liye Bas jeene Ke Liye Yahan Itna Bahut Hai

Khwaishon Ko Be-Maut Marne Diya Kar Naa Eh Maaa!!!!
Paani Ka Dariya Aankhon Me Bewajah Rukhta Bahut hai

Mere Kapdo Ki Koi Parwaah Naa Kar,yeh Thik Thaak se Hai
Sharir Ko Dhakne Ke Liye Yeh Kapda Bhi Itna Bahut Hai

Taqdeer se Yuh Haar kar Roti Kyon Hai Maaa.....!!!!
jo Bhi hai jaisa Bhi hai,Yaad Rakh Mera Khuda Acha bahut hai

Sirf Paisa Paas Ho To Hi sab Kuch Nahi Hai Naa Maa..!!!!
Par Woh Baat Aur Hai ke Paiso Se,Apna Pet Bharta Bahut hai

Suuna Hai Ke iss Duniya mein Gham Ka Koi Khareedar nahi
Kya Kare Maa...Yahan Insaan Ka Imaan Bikhta Bahut Hai

Tujhe Andaaza Bhi Nahi Yahan Log Kaise Jeete Hai...!!!!!!
Woh Andhero Mein Rota Hai Jo Ujaalo Me Hasta Bahut Hai

"Khwaish" Kuch Yuh Likh Ke Teri kalam Bhi Ro Pade...!!!!!
Ashq Aankhon Se Girte Hai Tab , Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut hai

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bohot Khoob Applause


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #16 on: January 07, 2012, 08:47:06 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on January 05, 2012, 10:48:14 AM

i am speachless.............!! thats it

tere lafzo.n ne aakhon ko rula diya,
tere kalaam ne dil ko hilaa diya.

mere kyaal se YOINDIA ne jis award se aap ko nawaaza hai iss kalaam ke baad se main yehi kahoon gi woh bhi kam hai

Sheba Ji...Aapka Tahe Dil Se Bahut Bahut Shukriya

Ke Aapne Yeh Ghazal Ko Dil Se padha...Aur Yakeen maniye Mere Liye Sabse Bada Inaam Aapke Aur Sabke Comments Hai..Koi Agar Apna Waqt Kisi Ko Deta Hai To Wahi sabse badi Baat Hai Mere Liye..Aur Aapne Huemsha meri Kalaamo Ko Apna Waqt Diya Hai...Guzarish Hai Aage Bhi Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega..


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #17 on: January 07, 2012, 09:08:34 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on January 05, 2012, 10:57:48 AM

khwaish ji thode men itnaa hee kahoongaa ki aapkee is peshkash par hazaaron salute

Sainiji, Aapka Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Shukriya Janaab Jo Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..Yuhi Humesha Saath Dete Rahieyga


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #18 on: January 07, 2012, 09:12:10 AM »

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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #19 on: January 07, 2012, 09:31:07 AM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on January 05, 2012, 11:22:31 AM

khwaish ji bahut achhe se aapne ek gareeb ke zazbaat likhe hain.
daad hazir hai.

kya karen yahan doonia mein ameer kam aur gareeb bahut hain.
sabke hisse ka ye ameer liye baithe hain.
gareeb ka zameer yahan sasta bahut hai.

Aapka Bahut Bahut Dhanyawaad Sureshji


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #20 on: January 07, 2012, 09:43:19 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2012, 10:42:31 AM

Bahut hee achchhaa likhaa hai , Kittu ji aapney! Badhaayee! Bahut hee pyaaraa dil paayaa hai aapney! Kaash ham-aap aas-paas hotey!


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #21 on: January 07, 2012, 10:51:48 AM »

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on January 05, 2012, 12:31:20 PM

Khwaish bhai...

kya kehne ish ghazal ke.. wah bhai wah..

har ek lafz sachai bayan kar rahi hai...

aankhe bhar aayi.. aur aakhiri ke chaar line to kya baat hai...

beshumar daad kabul kare...

Touhid Ji, Aapke Beshumaar Taaliyon Ke Liye Aapki Diili Daad Aur Aapke Waqt Ke Liye Bahut bahut Aur Bahut shukriya Bhai..

Yuhi Saath Nibhaate Rahiyega Dost!!!


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #22 on: January 07, 2012, 11:48:22 AM »

Quote from: mann.mann on January 05, 2012, 12:41:39 PM

laajabab... kuchh kahne ko nahin hai is rachna par.... bahut hi dard hai ismain.. uuffffffff

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Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mann Ji

Yuhi Waqt Dete rahiyega


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #23 on: January 07, 2012, 03:04:14 PM »

Quote from: sarfira on January 05, 2012, 02:07:12 PM

no words for copmliment

S.f Ji Kuch To Keh Jaate...

Chaliye Aapne waqt diya aapka bahut bahut shukriya


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #24 on: January 07, 2012, 03:06:30 PM »

Quote from: Nysha on January 05, 2012, 02:21:33 PM

Fabulous creation . Made me cry .. Bahoot Bahoot sach likha hai.. Aur iss ghazal ka ak ak sher behad umda aur lajawaab hai.. sachai ka darpan hai yea ghazal,... Bahoot bahoot Umda .. bahoot Khoob !

Nysha

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooo Much Sophi Ji..

Aapne Inn Ehsaaso Ko mehsoos Kiya, Yeh jaankar Bahut Acha laga..Aapko Rulaane Ke liye Muaafi Chaahta hoon..

Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #25 on: January 07, 2012, 03:25:09 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on January 05, 2012, 02:34:08 PM

भावनाओं से ओत-प्रोत इस बेशकीमती रचना की, जितनी तारीफ़ की जाए कम होगी.........बहूत बहूत खूब भाई.

Sanjeev bro Aapka Bahut bahut Dhanyawaad..

Yuhi saath dete rahiyega bhai


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #26 on: January 07, 2012, 04:07:52 PM »

dard me dobkar sach ko itni sachai se likhna taarif hai aapki Applause


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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #27 on: January 08, 2012, 06:22:51 AM »

NICE

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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #28 on: January 08, 2012, 10:43:02 AM »

itni behtareen peshkash ke liye khwaish bhai aapko mubarakbaad..!!ghazal se ghareeb bharat ki tasveer ayaan hoti hai..Aapka tazurba aur bayaan ka tareeka dono lajabab hain..! Azadi ke aadhi se jyada shatabdi gujar gai magar amiri aur ghareebi ki ye dooriyan abtak kam na hoo sakin..!

Behad umda peshkash aapka jore kalam aise hi badhta rahe..yahi meri ishwar se prarthna hai..

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Re: Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

«Reply #29 on: January 08, 2012, 03:11:21 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 05, 2012, 03:26:08 PM

Khuda kay ghum pe likhne wale haazar milenge tujhe yahan mere dost,
Jo dusron kay ehsaason ko mehsoos kar likhe, aisa koi dhund kay bata..
Zada nahin kahunga, mager ap, unn main se ho, jo dusron ko mehsoos kar, likh sakta hai.. :)Wah Wah Wah..
Yeh quoted ashaar toh dil main ghar kar gaya..
Ankh se ansoo toh ek nahin baha mager, dil nam zaroor hua..
Dost mere, jazbaaton se bhari iss kalam ko, Rahim ka salaam..
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Khush rahiye..!

Apna Waqt Dene Ke Liye Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mere Dost...Sach Kahoon To Auron Ka Dard Kabhi Kabhi Apne Dard Se zyaada Dard Deta Hai..Aapne Inn Ehsaaso Ko Padha..Aapka Bahut bahut shukriya Mere Bhai


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