Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on January 05, 2012, 10:42:31 AM
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«Reply #45 on: February 21, 2012, 12:20:29 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2012, 10:42:31 AM
" Eid Ke Din Udaas Se Ghar Mei'n, Ek Bewa Ghareeb Ro Rahi Thi...
Uss Ka Bachcha Jo Yeh Puch Baitha Ke
"Maa, Eid BungLoun Mei'n Hi Kyu'n Hoti Hai..?"



yeh Ghazal Ek Maa Aur Ek Bete Ki Aapsi Baatcheet Hai
jisme Beta Apni Maa Ko Dilaase De Raha Hai Ke
Rone se Kuch haasil Nahi Hota Isliye Rona Chodd Bhi de..
Muflisi Mein Log Kin Kin MajbooriyoN Ka Saamna Karte Hai
Yeh Ghazal uss Soch par Adhaarit Hai..Dil Ki Nazron se Padhiyega...



Chal Maa Yeh Bazaar  Mujhe Lagta Mehanga Bahut Hai
Paas Jo yeh 20 Rupaye Hai yeh Yahan Sasta Bahut hai

kahin jaakar Do Roti Se Apni Bhook Mita Lenge Hum Dono
Gareeb Ke liye  Bas jeene Ke Liye Yahan Itna Bahut Hai

Khwaishon Ko Be-Maut Marne Diya Kar Naa  Eh Maaa!!!!
Paani Ka Dariya Aankhon Me Bewajah Rukhta Bahut hai

Mere Kapdo Ki Koi Parwaah Naa Kar,yeh Thik Thaak se Hai
Sharir Ko Dhakne Ke Liye Yeh Kapda Bhi Itna Bahut Hai

Taqdeer se Yuh Haar kar Roti Kyon Hai Maaa.....!!!!
jo Bhi hai jaisa Bhi hai,Yaad Rakh Mera Khuda Acha bahut hai

Sirf Paisa Paas Ho To Hi sab Kuch Nahi Hai Naa Maa..!!!!
Par Woh Baat Aur Hai ke Paiso Se,Apna Pet Bharta Bahut hai

Suuna Hai Ke iss Duniya mein Gham Ka Koi Khareedar nahi
Kya Kare Maa...Yahan  Insaan Ka Imaan Bikhta Bahut Hai

Tujhe Andaaza Bhi Nahi Yahan Log Kaise Jeete Hai...!!!!!!
Woh Andhero Mein Rota Hai Jo Ujaalo Me Hasta Bahut Hai

"Khwaish" Kuch Yuh Likh Ke Teri kalam Bhi Ro Pade...!!!!!
Ashq Aankhon Se Girte Hai Tab , Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut hai

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #46 on: April 03, 2012, 11:30:35 AM »
Quote from: kamal aggarwal on January 07, 2012, 04:07:52 PM
dard me dobkar sach ko itni sachai se likhna taarif hai aapki Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #47 on: April 03, 2012, 12:50:40 PM »
bohat khoob khwaish ji and baaki sabne b behad umda likha.
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«Reply #48 on: April 06, 2012, 09:54:33 AM »
Quote from: drpandey on January 08, 2012, 10:43:02 AM
itni behtareen peshkash ke liye khwaish bhai aapko mubarakbaad..!!ghazal se ghareeb bharat ki tasveer ayaan hoti hai..Aapka tazurba aur bayaan ka tareeka dono lajabab hain..! Azadi ke aadhi se jyada shatabdi gujar gai magar amiri aur ghareebi ki ye dooriyan abtak kam na hoo sakin..!

Behad umda peshkash aapka jore kalam aise hi badhta rahe..yahi meri ishwar se prarthna hai..



Dr pandey ji..Aapne Apna Waqt Diya,yeh Jaankar behad Khushi Hui hai..Aapka Pyaar Aur Duayen Yuhi bani Rahi..yeh Aasha Karta Hoon

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«Reply #49 on: May 10, 2012, 07:58:07 AM »
Quote from: usha rajesh on January 09, 2012, 04:59:13 PM
Wonderful creation Khwaish ji.Haqeeqat bayan ki hai apne. Behad khubsurat alfaz hain.

No doubt you deserved this Prestigious "Member of the year award".

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Ek baar phir apke achievement ke liye CONGRATULATIONS.  
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YoIndia ke aakash mein yun hi chamakte rahiye.
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Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooo Much Ushaji..

Thanks A Lotttttttt For Soooooooo Kind Words..

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«Reply #50 on: August 16, 2012, 04:42:26 PM »
Quote from: adil bechain on January 10, 2012, 11:08:26 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah aur sirf waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah maine ek nazar dekha to thaa. phir na jaane kyon puraa padh nahin payaa..... SUBHAN ALLAH kya khaqaa khincha hai. ghareebi ka.   waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah aur phir waaaaaaaaaaah. aap aise hi khubsoorat ghazal aur nazam likhte rahein. ALLAH AAP KO KHUSH RAKHE AUR AALAATAREEN LIKHNE KI SALAAHIYAT BAKHSE.    MAIN ADIR SE PADHNE KE LIYE MAAFI CHAHTA HOON


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«Reply #51 on: August 24, 2012, 07:09:02 AM »
Bohat hi umda!!! Tareef ke liye lafz kam pad rahe hai Khwaish Jee!!!! Hats off to you!!! Aap ke khayalaat bohat hi nek hai!!! Aaise hi aache aache rahiye aur aache aache kalaam likhte rahiye!   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #52 on: August 24, 2012, 08:35:57 AM »
Khwahish ji yeh wo pehli rachna hai jise maine yoindia par pda aur uske baad aapki dher sari rachnayein maine kuch din tak lagatar padhi...... Aur bas tab se hi main aapka zabardast fan ho gya... Gazal poem shayri to bahut umda kalakr karte hain par jo rachna sidhi dil ke aarpar ho aur humein sachai se rubaru sadharan shabdo mein karvaye wo aap likhte hain.....gar sidhe shabdo mein kahun to maine bahut se lekhni padhi par jaisi aap likhte hai waise koi nahi........iske liye main aapke aage sar jhuka kar aapko lakhon bar salam karta hun.....aur dua karta hoon khusiyan aapke qadmo me hamesha bicchi rahe....aur mujhe bhi hamesha aapse ek bade bhai ka sneh mile
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«Reply #53 on: September 12, 2012, 06:47:32 AM »
Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on January 10, 2012, 12:50:56 PM
waah…. I really dnt hv words for appreciation khwaish ji….. Behad khoobsurat jajbaat piroye hai aapne…. Social subject par is se behtar rachna nahi padhi maine…  hats off to u….


Thanks a Million Priya...Thanks A Lot For This Appreciation..

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«Reply #54 on: September 12, 2012, 12:33:22 PM »
Quote from: Mann on January 12, 2012, 04:04:22 PM
Is Rachna Ki Taareef Ke Liye Mere Paas Lafz Nahi Hai Bhai.. Kya Kahun Main..? Great Creation Bhai.. Aapki Soch, aapke Lafz aur is Rachna Se Jude Pehloo apni Dard Bhari Kahaani Bayaan Kar Rahe Hain.. Behad Umda Peshkash.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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Mann Ji..Aapka Sache Dil Se bahut Bahut dhanyawaad...

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«Reply #55 on: October 27, 2012, 05:29:26 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2012, 10:42:31 AM
" Eid Ke Din Udaas Se Ghar Mei'n, Ek Bewa Ghareeb Ro Rahi Thi...
Uss Ka Bachcha Jo Yeh Puch Baitha Ke
"Maa, Eid BungLoun Mei'n Hi Kyu'n Hoti Hai..?"



yeh Ghazal Ek Maa Aur Ek Bete Ki Aapsi Baatcheet Hai
jisme Beta Apni Maa Ko Dilaase De Raha Hai Ke
Rone se Kuch haasil Nahi Hota Isliye Rona Chodd Bhi de..
Muflisi Mein Log Kin Kin MajbooriyoN Ka Saamna Karte Hai
Yeh Ghazal uss Soch par Adhaarit Hai..Dil Ki Nazron se Padhiyega...



Chal Maa Yeh Bazaar  Mujhe Lagta Mehanga Bahut Hai
Paas Jo yeh 20 Rupaye Hai yeh Yahan Sasta Bahut hai

kahin jaakar Do Roti Se Apni Bhook Mita Lenge Hum Dono
Gareeb Ke liye  Bas jeene Ke Liye Yahan Itna Bahut Hai

Khwaishon Ko Be-Maut Marne Diya Kar Naa  Eh Maaa!!!!
Paani Ka Dariya Aankhon Me Bewajah Rukhta Bahut hai

Mere Kapdo Ki Koi Parwaah Naa Kar,yeh Thik Thaak se Hai
Sharir Ko Dhakne Ke Liye Yeh Kapda Bhi Itna Bahut Hai

Taqdeer se Yuh Haar kar Roti Kyon Hai Maaa.....!!!!
jo Bhi hai jaisa Bhi hai,Yaad Rakh Mera Khuda Acha bahut hai

Sirf Paisa Paas Ho To Hi sab Kuch Nahi Hai Naa Maa..!!!!
Par Woh Baat Aur Hai ke Paiso Se,Apna Pet Bharta Bahut hai

Suuna Hai Ke iss Duniya mein Gham Ka Koi Khareedar nahi
Kya Kare Maa...Yahan  Insaan Ka Imaan Bikhta Bahut Hai

Tujhe Andaaza Bhi Nahi Yahan Log Kaise Jeete Hai...!!!!!!
Woh Andhero Mein Rota Hai Jo Ujaalo Me Hasta Bahut Hai

"Khwaish" Kuch Yuh Likh Ke Teri kalam Bhi Ro Pade...!!!!!
Ashq Aankhon Se Girte Hai Tab , Jab Koi Sach Likhta Bahut hai

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
NICE
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«Reply #56 on: October 27, 2012, 05:49:01 AM »
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«Reply #57 on: October 27, 2012, 09:31:33 AM »
 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

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mindblowing cant express i m speechless
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«Reply #59 on: June 14, 2014, 12:15:09 AM »
Bahut hi dard bhari panktiyan hai yh khawahish ji...ek baar to apki klm bhi jarur royi hogi jb aap likh rhe the...mere paas shabd km pad rhe h apki tarif me kya kahu...Sukriya
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