jab se kahin

by kaushikbhawna008 on March 26, 2008, 09:05:55 AM
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jabse kahi dur nigaho se wo hamse  rehne lage
tabse ham kuch tanha kuch udaas rehne lage

jabse wo masroom ho gaye hai din raat ki kamaai me
tabse unki yaadon k saaye se hi ham jee behlane lage

koi to samjhaye unhe ki ye waqt ye rut fir na aayegi
ham tanha raato me andhiyaro se baatein karne lage

jabse wo laut aane ka wada hamse karke gaye
tabse ham unki raah me apni palko ko bichane lage

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baadal102
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2008, 11:17:41 AM »
bhaoot khoob bhawana ji  Applause



Baadal
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2008, 02:33:48 PM »
nice work bhawna!!
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jempawan
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«Reply #3 on: March 27, 2008, 11:13:16 AM »
Bahut khoob Bhawna Usual Smile

ye intzar ka aalam bhi azeeb lagta hai
dur hue jo unse kabhi to mahsus hota hai
"Gar hum na mile kabhi unse to"
ye baat intzar karne ki ek wajah de jata hai.
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