Jab ujadta hai nasheman mera, kyon nadeemon ke ghar sawarte hain.

by Ram Saraswat on September 20, 2013, 02:14:55 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 21, 2013, 01:49:56 AM »
Cheekhtiin   maazi  ki  hain  perchhaiin,
ujade  kooche   se   jab  guzarte   hain.

Toote    sheeshe  si   hai  hasti   apni,
sirf  chhoone  se   hi   bikharte   hain.


bahut bahut khoob Ram Saraswat ji. bahut mubarakbaad.
Bahut bahut shukriya Siddiqui Saheb
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«Reply #16 on: September 21, 2013, 04:52:08 AM »

Saraswat Jee Aadaab...!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoob jee bade umdaa khayaaloN ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne...

Kafi khoob ashaar huye haiN sabhi... puri kalaam hi umdaa huyi haiN sahaaB... Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

HaaN aik baat hume thik nahi lagi ke aapne matle meiN jo kafiye liye haiN unhe baaqi ke ashaaroN ke kafiye se alag hi rakh diyaa...
Humari baat durust lage toH matla badal dijiye... Puri kalaam shaandaar ho jayeNgi...
Gar koi gustaqui huyi toH muafi ke talabgaar haiN...

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...


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«Reply #17 on: September 21, 2013, 07:48:55 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah ram ji.. behad umda peshkash.. sabhi ashaar dil ko choo gaye.. is umda kalaam par meri hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega...
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«Reply #18 on: September 22, 2013, 12:12:57 AM »

Saraswat Jee Aadaab...!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoob jee bade umdaa khayaaloN ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne...

Kafi khoob ashaar huye haiN sabhi... puri kalaam hi umdaa huyi haiN sahaaB... Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

HaaN aik baat hume thik nahi lagi ke aapne matle meiN jo kafiye liye haiN unhe baaqi ke ashaaroN ke kafiye se alag hi rakh diyaa...
Humari baat durust lage toH matla badal dijiye... Puri kalaam shaandaar ho jayeNgi...
Gar koi gustaqui huyi toH muafi ke talabgaar haiN...

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...



Bahut bahut shukriya Parwaazji.

Mashware ke liye bhi shukriya, Haan, yeh baat mere jehn mein bhi aai thi.Lekin matle ke baad jo kuchh kahana chaah raha tha wo matle se mail nahi kar pa raha tha. Is liye, maine karte , sawarte, darte ko   Qafiya aur Hain ko radeef lekar chalna hi durust samjha.  Ummed hai aap mujh se muttafiq honge. Waise main koshish karoonga kisi aur matle ki .
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«Reply #19 on: September 22, 2013, 12:15:49 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah ram ji.. behad umda peshkash.. sabhi ashaar dil ko choo gaye.. is umda kalaam par meri hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega...
Bahut bahut shukriya Aqshji
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«Reply #20 on: September 22, 2013, 04:03:52 PM »
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«Reply #21 on: September 22, 2013, 04:32:24 PM »
Bade hi gehre aur dil ko chhoone waale ehsaasaat bayaan kiye apne Ram ji .. Apko dheron daad !!!
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«Reply #22 on: September 22, 2013, 11:27:11 PM »
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«Reply #23 on: September 22, 2013, 11:29:15 PM »
Bade hi gehre aur dil ko chhoone waale ehsaasaat bayaan kiye apne Ram ji .. Apko dheron daad !!!
Bahut bahut shukriya Zarraaji
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