jajbaat:Shayri-E-Dard

NETRAPAL

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subah ke ujale me raat ko dekha
maine aaj kisee ko uddas dekha
sada hee khilta tha ek fool
aaj use uklaaye hooe dekha

bagiyaa kee ronak tha wo
khushooboo gulistaan ki wo
dil hee toot gaya tha mera
jab use toot kar bikharte dekha

na thaam payee ham bhee ansoo apne
the khamoosh bebas laachar se
chingaaree se jalate rahe apnee hee ham
jab ek tare ko aasmaa me dubte dekha...

netra..


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punam

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2008, 12:59:16 PM »

Netra ji bahot khoob...kisiki udaasi aap k kalam se shayari banke nikala..bahot acha laga...


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NETRAPAL

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2008, 01:55:13 AM »

Quote from: punam on June 10, 2008, 12:59:16 PM

Netra ji bahot khoob...kisiki udaasi aap k kalam se shayari banke nikala..bahot acha laga...

thanks poonam ji,

bahut udaas hai man
kyo preshaan hai man
ek muskaan ke saath jga tha mai
fir bhee kyo udaas hai man

jeetaa tha tanhaaiyo me
rahta hoo aaj mahfilo me
fir machee hai halchaal
ye duba hooa dil, bejaan tan
n jane kyo udaas hai man.

n jaane kab wo jhonka ayaa tha
apne shitalta se lubhaaya tha
aaj bhee nahi hai koi agan
fir bhee jalta hai kyo ye tan
n jane kyo uddas hai ye man..

netra.....


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Sonia01

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2008, 05:33:06 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on June 11, 2008, 01:55:13 AM

bahut accha likha hai aapne netra jee... dono sher lajawab..


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NETRAPAL

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2008, 06:02:30 AM »

Quote from: Sonia01 on June 11, 2008, 05:33:06 AM

bahut accha likha hai aapne netra jee... dono sher lajawab..

thanks sonia ji

netra...


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2008, 06:38:21 AM »

bohut khoob netrapal ji


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NETRAPAL

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2008, 12:51:30 PM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on June 11, 2008, 06:38:21 AM

bohut khoob netrapal ji

THANKS BHAWNAA JI

NETRA..


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Shikha12

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2008, 01:09:51 PM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on June 10, 2008, 12:48:01 PM

Bahut Khoob... Applause

Bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Netra Ji

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Lekin, "Shayari for Khumar-e-Ishq" ki jagah "Shayari-e-Dard" Section mein post hona chahiye tha..
So, I am Moving it to appropriate Section..

Moved From: Shayari for Khumar-e-Ishq
Reason: More Appropriate for Shayari-e-Dard
Moved By: Mahiya


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Shikha12

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2008, 01:14:18 PM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on June 11, 2008, 01:55:13 AM

bahut udaas hai man
kyo preshaan hai man
ek muskaan ke saath jga tha mai
fir bhee kyo udaas hai man

jeetaa tha tanhaaiyo me
rahta hoo aaj mahfilo me
fir machee hai halchaal
ye duba hooa dil, bejaan tan
n jane kyo udaas hai man.

n jaane kab wo jhonka ayaa tha
apne shitalta se lubhaaya tha
aaj bhee nahi hai koi agan
fir bhee jalta hai kyo ye tan
n jane kyo uddas hai ye man..

netra.....

Again... Very Very Nice... Applause


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honeyrose

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2008, 05:20:19 PM »

Netra ji bohat hi kamaal ka likha hai..


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techie_guy

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2008, 05:48:47 PM »

gud 1


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NETRAPAL

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2008, 12:29:52 PM »

Quote from: techie_guy on June 11, 2008, 05:48:47 PM

gud 1

thanks for reply

netra...


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NETRAPAL

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2008, 12:39:48 PM »

kya karoo dil nahi lagtaa tanhaaiyo me
karwato me gujar jaatee hai ratee meree
unko dekhtaa hoo par kewal khayalo me.........

hont kab khule the mere muskarane ke liye
kya mahaktaa tha gulistaa meraa kabhee
pee thee madeeraa gam bhoolane ko
payaa thaa shakoon main magar, kuch pal ke liye

netra..


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madhuwesh

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Re: jajbaat

«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2009, 06:57:58 PM »

Wah wah bahut khoob Netra ji really touching and mindblowing creation.


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