Jakhm

by Amit Janglan on July 25, 2004, 09:54:10 AM
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #75 on: August 29, 2004, 03:22:44 PM »
waheed ji thanks.
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rajkumar dhiman
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«Reply #76 on: August 29, 2004, 10:14:00 PM »
Hi everyone
i'm new to hear.all of u r really nice.keep it up.


Yeh Gazal nahin haale dil kaha hai,
Kyonki ek Gazal to banti hai lakh Zakhm khane ke baad;
are gazlon ko sazana chod diya hai barson se hamne,
jagi hai chahat tumhari ek jhalak pane ke baad.
kin-kin toofano ne khamosh kar diya is qadar tujhko,
lagta hai tu samunder hai jaise toofan gujar jane ke baad.
Log to log khuda bhi mod gaya mujhse ,
hum to kahi ke na rah tumhen khuda banane ke baad.
accha hota yuhin rakhta pinzre main band mujhko,
zalim ne par kaate hain udna sikhane ke baad
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #77 on: August 30, 2004, 04:22:19 AM »
Quote from: "rajkumar dhiman"
Hi everyone
i'm new to hear.all of you r really nice.keep it up.


Yeh Gazal nahin haale dil kaha hai,
Kyonki ek Gazal to banti hai lakh Zakhm khane ke baad;
are gazlon ko sazana chod diya hai barson se hamne,
jagi hai chahat tumhari ek jhalak pane ke baad.
kin-kin toofano ne khamosh kar diya is qadar tujhko,
lagta hai tu samunder hai jaise toofan gujar jane ke baad.
Log to log khuda bhi mod gaya mujhse ,
hum to kahi ke na rah tumhen khuda banane ke baad.
accha hota yuhin rakhta pinzre main band mujhko,
zalim ne par kaate hain udna sikhane ke baad


rajkumar dhiman bhai bahut khob ........wah.
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #78 on: August 30, 2004, 04:29:10 AM »
Quote from: "rajkumar dhiman"
Hi everyone
i'm new to hear.all of you r really nice.keep it up.


Yeh Gazal nahin haale dil kaha hai,
Kyonki ek Gazal to banti hai lakh Zakhm khane ke baad;
are gazlon ko sazana chod diya hai barson se hamne,
jagi hai chahat tumhari ek jhalak pane ke baad.
kin-kin toofano ne khamosh kar diya is qadar tujhko,
lagta hai tu samunder hai jaise toofan gujar jane ke baad.
Log to log khuda bhi mod gaya mujhse ,
hum to kahi ke na rah tumhen khuda banane ke baad.
accha hota yuhin rakhta pinzre main band mujhko,
zalim ne par kaate hain udna sikhane ke baad



  raj kumar u r  :o





Sadal se mahekti hui, purcaffe hawa ka zhoka
koi lehraiye toh, lagta hai ke tum ho.
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Pooja
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«Reply #79 on: August 30, 2004, 07:23:14 PM »
bahoot khoob Rajkumar ji >> nice wordings>>>
kin-kin toofano ne khamosh kar diya is qadar tujhko,
lagta hai tu samunder hai jaise toofan gujar jane ke baad.
Log to log khuda bhi naraj hai mujse mujhse ,
hum to kahi ke na rah tumhen khuda banane ke baad.


ek wo khuda hai, ek yah khuda hai
kayun mere dono khuda pathar dil hai
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mateen govindvi
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«Reply #80 on: August 31, 2004, 05:03:43 AM »
good one all
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Tosha
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«Reply #81 on: August 31, 2004, 08:30:06 AM »
wow..!!!
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #82 on: August 31, 2004, 12:07:46 PM »
nice buddy dil nikal ke rakh diyaa.
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #83 on: September 05, 2004, 12:15:38 PM »
mein udasian na saja sakoon kabhi
jism-o-ja'n k mazar per

na diye jalein meri ankh mein
mujhey itni sakht saza na dey



mein ghazal ki shabnami ankh se
ye dukhon k phool chuna karoon

meri sultanat mera fun rahey mujhey
taj-o-takht khuda na dey
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #84 on: September 05, 2004, 05:04:46 PM »
nice one pooja................
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #85 on: September 05, 2004, 05:08:18 PM »
Yeh daaney key siney pey sar rakh diya kis ney?
Yeh sang key pheloo mein sar rakh diya kis ney?
Yeh khatra-e-neesaan mein ghar rakh diya kis ney
Yeh Moujiza-E-Rab Aalaa hey key nahi hey!
Ab sonch merey dost! Khuda hey key nahi hey?
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yasir_sensitive
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«Reply #86 on: September 05, 2004, 10:53:51 PM »
Taluq torata hoon to , mukammal tor daita hoon
Jisay main chorta hoon, mukammal chor dayta hoon

Mohabbat ho k nufrat ho, bhara rahata hoon shidat say
Jidher say ayee yeh darya ,udher he mour dayta hoon


Yaqeen rakhata nahi main, kisi bhi kachay taluq per
Jo dahgha tootanay wala ho,main khud he tor dayat hoon

Meray daikhay howay sapnay ,kahin lahrain na lay jain
  Gharondy rait k tameer kar k, tor dayta hoon

ADEEM ab tak wohi bachapan, wohi tahreeb-kari hai
Qafas ko tor dayta hoon , parinday chor dayta hoon
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yasir_sensitive
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«Reply #87 on: September 05, 2004, 11:35:35 PM »
aur zakhm na de ke saraa badan hi chulni hain....
khud dard pareshaan hain ke kahan se utthuun?...
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Pooja
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«Reply #88 on: September 05, 2004, 11:38:40 PM »
WAH!!!


Dard -e- alam mai yah haal hamara hai
dard ayye to dard, jo yah na ayye to bhi dard
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yasir_sensitive
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«Reply #89 on: September 06, 2004, 01:01:34 AM »
Aadatan tum ne kar diye vaade ...
Aadatan ham ne aitabaar kiyaa ...
Terii raahoN mein baarahaa ruk kar ....
Ham ne Apnaa hii Intazaar kiiyaa ....
Ab naa maaNgeNge Zindagii yaa Rab...
Ye Gunaah ham ne Ek Baar kiyaa .....
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