Jakhmon ka samandar

by Rajiv'sshayri on August 30, 2007, 07:46:57 PM

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Na chedh mujh ko, mera dard behak jayega
Nigahe naj ka, bimar tadap jayega
Risega phir se lahu jakhmon ke samandar se
SholaE atishe-tar hai ki sulag jayega.


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Talat

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Jakhmon ka samandar

«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2007, 12:51:22 PM »

Very Nice.

Isi baat ko doosre alfaazon main kehne ki koshish ki hai :

Chupa rakha hai dard, na ukhedo yaadain meri
Tadpa dengi, jo yaad aa jeeyen wo baatain teri
Meherbaan waqt ne sukha diya, rista tha zakham
Qayamat hain, ae zindagi, wo puraani raahain teri !!


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Pooja

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Jakhmon ka samandar

«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2007, 01:34:23 PM »

wah wah wah kaya baat hai... Rajni and TAlat.. dono ne kaya khoob likha hai... Good job !@!!


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sanya310

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Jakhmon ka samandar

«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2007, 02:02:56 PM »

bohot khoob!


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angel4u

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Jakhmon ka samandar

«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2007, 06:32:07 PM »

wonderful rajshri and talat ji. . . .

Teri yaadon ke samundar mein se har moti chun rakha hia,
tujhe yaad aaye na aaye meri, tera har zakhm seene mein bun rakha hai,
tere liye hum har ek ashq se lade, jhagde, ke jhalke na,
har aansu ki bagawat ko humne dhadkano se sun rakha hai...