Jal gaya nasheman mera.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on February 23, 2009, 08:26:11 AM
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Jal gaya nashe_man mera, na mera nam raha baki
Tere diye zakhmo ke siwa, kuch bhi na raha baki

Path_thar hain ab yeh, inhe aakhe kaise keh du
Na koi khwab dekhti hain, na koi aasoo raha baki

Tanhaiee ki hain mehfil, nahi koi sunne_wala
Ghazal kabse hain mukammal, sunana tujhe hain baki

Q mujhko chedti hain, q chain se marne bhi nahi deti
Waqt-e-kaza bhi zalim, teri yaad rahi baki

Abhi na padao kalma, na karao humse tauba
Thodi jaan reh gayee, paimano me sharaab hain baki

Mere marne pe gamzada huye woh, aur aakh se aasoo bhi na tapka
Guroor toota unka yakinan, bas ada reh gayee bakee

Mera wajood mit gaya hain, woh yeh soch kar khush the
Jab cheedh gaya zikr dard ka, bas ek nam GHAYEL ka raha baki....

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2009, 08:30:12 AM »
Bohat Achche Sajid Bhai,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2009, 01:26:59 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 23, 2009, 08:26:11 AM
Jal gaya nashe_man mera, na mera nam raha baki
Tere diye zakhmo ke siwa, kuch bhi na raha baki

Path_thar hain ab yeh, inhe aakhe kaise keh du
Na koi khwab dekhti hain, na koi aasoo raha baki

Tanhaiee ki hain mehfil, nahi koi sunne_wala
Ghazal kabse hain mukammal, sunana tujhe hain baki

Q mujhko chedti hain, q chain se marne bhi nahi deti
Waqt-e-kaza bhi zalim, teri yaad rahi baki

Abhi na padao kalma, na karao humse tauba
Thodi jaan reh gayee, paimano me sharaab hain baki

Mere marne pe gamzada huye woh, aur aakh se aasoo bhi na tapka
Guroor toota unka yakinan, bas ada reh gayee bakee

Mera wajood mit gaya hain, woh yeh soch kar khush the
Jab cheedh gaya zikr dard ka, bas ek nam GHAYEL ka raha baki....

-Sajid Ghayel-
BAUT KHOOB GAYEL BHAI.ASGHR
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2009, 02:34:21 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 23, 2009, 08:26:11 AM


Mere marne pe gamzada huye woh, aur aakh se aasoo bhi na tapka
Guroor toota unka yakinan, bas ada reh gayee bakee

-Sajid Ghayel-
Wah! Kyaa andaaz-e-bayaan hai? Sajid ji!
                      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2009, 02:24:10 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 23, 2009, 08:30:12 AM
Bohat Achche Sajid Bhai,.
Nice One,.

Shukriyaan Chote...

Quote from: Asghr on February 23, 2009, 01:26:59 PM
BAUT KHOOB GAYEL BHAI.ASGHR

Nawazish Karam dost....

Quote from: abdbundeli on February 23, 2009, 02:34:21 PM
Wah! Kyaa andaaz-e-bayaan hai? Sajid ji!
                      - abd bundeli

Bohat shukriyaan bhai yeh sher mera bhi pasandida hain...
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2009, 02:26:31 PM »
Wah wah wahaaa Bahut acche  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2009, 02:38:57 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 26, 2009, 02:24:10 PM
Bohat shukriyaan bhai yeh sher mera bhi pasandida hain...
You're welcome!
         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2009, 09:00:45 AM »
Quote from: Roja on February 26, 2009, 02:26:31 PM
Wah wah wahaaa Bahut acche  Applause

Thank You for your time and comments Roja.....
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