jal raha hai

by pritam tripathi on November 26, 2012, 05:39:19 AM
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mujhe jalane ki baat tu karta hai aaftab
aakhir meri hi khusi se tu jal raha hai
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«Reply #1 on: November 26, 2012, 05:52:39 AM »
Quote from: pritam tripathi on November 26, 2012, 05:39:19 AM
mujhe jalane ki baat tu karta hai aaftab
aakhir meri hi khusi se tu jal raha hai

are you a god...,sir
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«Reply #2 on: November 26, 2012, 06:10:59 AM »
waah waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2012, 06:16:20 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on November 26, 2012, 06:10:59 AM
waah waah waah

saini ji shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2012, 06:18:11 AM »
Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on November 26, 2012, 05:52:39 AM
are you a god...,sir
no i'm not. why ?
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2012, 12:39:42 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2012, 12:59:14 AM »
kya bat kya bat
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2012, 02:36:49 AM »
Quote from: pritam tripathi on November 26, 2012, 05:39:19 AM
mujhe jalane ki baat tu karta hai aaftab
aakhir meri hi khusi se tu jal raha hai

waah  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: December 01, 2012, 09:44:57 PM »
Quote from: prashad on November 27, 2012, 12:39:42 AM
very nice
prashad ji thanks
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«Reply #9 on: December 01, 2012, 09:47:07 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on November 27, 2012, 12:59:14 AM
kya bat kya bat
nandbandhu ji shukriya
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«Reply #10 on: December 01, 2012, 09:49:27 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on November 27, 2012, 02:36:49 AM
waah  Thumbs UP
suman ji thanks
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