Jal Utha Shayad

by Rajigujral on April 27, 2015, 01:17:34 PM
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Yaklakhat dhuan utha hai dil se,
Ik pulinda tha yaadon ka, jal utha shayad.

Lagi thi aag kal, kuchh dur mere ghar se,
Aaj mera ghar bhi us se, ghir gaya shayad.

Charon taraf hai mayusi, har su hai khamoshi,
Meri yaadon ka sahara bhi, ab mar gaya shayad.
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2015, 06:37:03 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2015, 08:36:32 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2015, 05:57:53 AM »
Lagi thi aag kal, kuchh dur mere ghar se,
Aaj mera ghar bhi us se, ghir gaya shayad.
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गुजराल साहब कमाल कर दिया आपने। दिल को छुं क्या रुला गई ये पंक्तिया
आपके इस कलाम की तारिफ़ करने इस गरीब के पास शब्द नही। इस राउ में बिल्कुल यकीन नही करता पर अगर सरहाने का यही तरिका है तो जनाब दिली दाद के साथ एक राउ भी
जाते जाते आपकी इजाजत लेते हुए यही कहुंगा
लिखा जो कुछ आपने युं दिल से
रुला गया बज्म को शायद
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2015, 02:42:31 PM »
Quote from: Rajigujral on April 27, 2015, 01:17:34 PM
Yaklakhat dhuan utha hai dil se,
Ik pulinda tha yaadon ka, jal utha shayad.

Lagi thi aag kal, kuchh dur mere ghar se,
Aaj mera ghar bhi us se, ghir gaya shayad.

Charon taraf hai mayusi, har su hai khamoshi,
Meri yaadon ka sahara bhi, ab mar gaya shayad.


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«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2015, 05:15:46 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 27, 2015, 06:37:03 PM
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«Reply #6 on: April 29, 2015, 05:16:31 AM »
Quote from: surindarn on April 27, 2015, 08:36:32 PM
bahut sudar Gujral Sahib.
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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2015, 05:17:32 AM »
Quote from: alfaaz on April 28, 2015, 05:57:53 AM
Lagi thi aag kal, kuchh dur mere ghar se,
Aaj mera ghar bhi us se, ghir gaya shayad.
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गुजराल साहब कमाल कर दिया आपने। दिल को छुं क्या रुला गई ये पंक्तिया
आपके इस कलाम की तारिफ़ करने इस गरीब के पास शब्द नही। इस राउ में बिल्कुल यकीन नही करता पर अगर सरहाने का यही तरिका है तो जनाब दिली दाद के साथ एक राउ भी
जाते जाते आपकी इजाजत लेते हुए यही कहुंगा
लिखा जो कुछ आपने युं दिल से
रुला गया बज्म को शायद

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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2015, 05:05:28 PM »
Quote from: Rajigujral on April 27, 2015, 01:17:34 PM
Yaklakhat dhuan utha hai dil se,
Ik pulinda tha yaadon ka, jal utha shayad.

Lagi thi aag kal, kuchh dur mere ghar se,
Aaj mera ghar bhi us se, ghir gaya shayad.

Charon taraf hai mayusi, har su hai khamoshi,
Meri yaadon ka sahara bhi, ab mar gaya shayad.
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