Jalayi gayi hu...

by brokenbyluv on March 04, 2010, 12:59:54 PM
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Apno ne tou kab ka bedakhal kar diya tha,
per aaj gairo se bhi thukarayi gayi hu,

muskura k dilo se khelna nhi aata mujhe,
per har baar issi khel mein azmayi gayi hu,

aksar falak pe bitha dete hai log mujhe,
aur har baar badi hi behrehmi se girayi gayi hu,

reh gyi hu kitni hi baar akeli main chalte chalte,
aur har baar bina kafan k hi dafnayi gayi hu,

chhod jate hai mujhe rota aksar merre hi chahnewale..
jane kitni baar main apnepan ki iss aag mein jalayi gayi hu......

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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2010, 01:06:38 PM »
Bahut achhi creation hai BBL JI. Gham ki inteha ko lafzo mein dhalne mein kamaal kiya hai aapne. Nice creation. Lekin itna dard, itna dukh, not understood.
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2010, 01:36:17 PM »
thnx alot kaash  ji n riyaz ji..

riyaz ji har pal muskurate muskurate bore ho jati hu isliye time to time dard ko bhi yad kar leti hu...dono hi humsafar hai merre ek ko bhi bhulungi tou zindgi kaise chalegi...
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2010, 01:51:36 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob geetji..

Bahut Hi Dard Se Bhari Rachna Likhi Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2010, 07:17:08 PM »
shukriya khwaish ji...
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2010, 07:22:59 PM »
shukriya shihab ji...
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«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2010, 08:03:51 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
I am left with absolutely NO words!!! Bahaut acha likha hai...Bahaut dard...Aisa laga ke meri dastaan kisi ne lavson main bayan kar di...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 04, 2010, 08:10:24 PM »
shukriya rahiim ji....
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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2010, 08:40:00 PM »
Aankh bhar aayi Geet ji aapke dard bhari kavita padke.very touching creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2010, 08:48:27 PM »
thnx alot madhu ji...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2010, 04:21:35 AM »
Bahut dard hai aap ki lekhni mein Geet Ji
Achchhi rachna hai
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #11 on: March 05, 2010, 09:45:50 AM »
excellent creation bbl ji Applause Applause

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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2010, 11:02:19 AM »
Bahut bahut shukriya rajesh ji n bhawna ji..
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cara
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«Reply #13 on: March 05, 2010, 11:43:54 AM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI     BROKENBYLUV JI.....

APNO NE GAIRON NE KABHI JEENE NAHI DIYA
JAB BHI JEENA CHAHA  MEINE
HAR TARAH SE MAARI GAYI HUN

KABHI BHI KHUSHI NAHI DEKHI
HAR CHEEZ KI CHAHAT KARNE PAR
HAR TARAH SE TARDFAI GAYI HUN

JAB BHI KISI KO APNANA CHAHA
SABI NE AZMAYA HAI
SABHI SE THUKRAYI GAYI HUN

JEENE KI TAMANAA HI NAHI HAI
MEH BARBAD HOGAYI HUN
HAR TARAH SE JALAYI GAYI HUN



DEKHYEJI AB KAISA HAI.....
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2010, 12:09:10 PM »
thnx alot cara ji..n nice try per kuch aur bhi add kar sakte the apni shayri mein...sorry but mujhe laga tou maine keh diya...
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