Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}:Shayri-E-Dard

angel4u

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Bahut time baad kuch likh rahi hoon, pata nahi kaisa likha hai.........

Aankhon Ki Nami Mein,
Jalta Hua Ek Ashq,
Doob Jaaye Dard Ke Samundar Mein,
Ya Pahuch Jaaye Tamannao Ke Kinaare,
Sulga Lein Dhadkano Ka Ek Ek Taar,
Ya Kare Safar In Saanson Ke Sang Sang,
Rooh Ka Har Kona Bhigo Jaaye Ya Phir,
Lipat Jaaye Andheri Kaali Chaadar Mein,

Faisla Iska Kaise Kare Palkon Ke Bhanwar,
Veeran Khaak Ke Aashiyaane Mein Simat Kar,
Kisike Pairon Ki Dhool mein Mil Bhi Jaaye,
Iski Lakeero Mein Likha Hai Fanaa Hona,
Kucch Pal Ki Jalan Ke Baad,
Na Ke Kisike Haathon Mein
Sajna Motiyon Ki Muskurahaton Ke Maanind...


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madhuwesh

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2009, 08:12:32 AM »

Wah wah bahut khoob Angel ji mindblowing creation.excellent Clapping Smiley

:thumbup:really touching.


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angel4u

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2009, 08:14:07 AM »

Thank you so much Madhu...


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superspawn10

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2009, 11:58:44 AM »

bohot khub angel ji... Clapping Smiley


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angel4u

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2009, 12:00:38 PM »

Thank you so much Superspawn10 Usual Smile


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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2009, 12:06:43 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!!!


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angel4u

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2009, 12:09:51 PM »

Bahut shukriya Khwaish Ji.. Aapke comment ka intezaar tha Usual Smile


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salil2002

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2009, 01:14:51 PM »

bahut achche huzena dear
mujhe aapki poems aur shayaris bahut pasand hai magar sirf aapki
aap jo share karte ho humse wahan par reply dena mujhe achcha nahin lagta....aap aise hi likhte rahiye bahut khoob koshish hai jo sar chad k bol rahi hai

ashq mere dil k. teri aankhon main nazar aaye
ret main toota koi makaan jab nazar aaye
tab samajh jaana kii janaza ooth chuka hai mera
sochna do ashq aankhon main bhar k mil aaye


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_Vicky_

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2009, 01:53:30 PM »

Wah Kya Baat Hai Angel.. Waqai Bahut dino Baad Tumhari Qalam se Kuch Padhne Ko Mila.. Behad Hi Lajawab aur Behtreen Alfaaz Pesh Kiye Hain aapne.. Jazzbaatn Ko Lafzon Me Behad Khubsoorati se Dhaala hai aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob..

**~** Mann **~**


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angel4u

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2009, 02:39:55 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on August 30, 2009, 01:14:51 PM

Thank you so much, Well likhna to abhi itna nahi ho paa raha hia, par koshish zaroor karenge. Usual Smile

Nice lines by you..

ret mein samaye hue ye ashq ke qatre mere,
dhundte hai ab bhi qadmon ke nishaan tere,
ho sake to mohabbaton ke naam ye aakhri ehsaan karna,
mitti mere qabr ki apne ashq ki siyahi se rangna...


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angel4u

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2009, 02:41:18 PM »

Quote from: Mann on August 30, 2009, 01:53:30 PM

thank you so much Mann JEE... Aapne apna keemti wakt hamein diya iske liye hum aapke aabhari rahenge

Thanks a lot


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Pooja

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2009, 02:56:05 AM »

Good work Angel


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angel4u

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Re: Jalta Hua Ashq________ {Angel}

«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2009, 03:02:47 AM »

Thanks Di


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