- Jalta Pani -:Shayri-E-Dard

Meena

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kuch jazbaat....

Ankh se gira ek ashk, iski keemat kisi ne na mani,
Dard me dooba hai yeh woh jazbaat, jiski haqiqat kisi ne na jani,

Sukhi ankhon me gum ki lehre jab machalne lagti hai,
Tab har ek bond sunati hai apni hi ek kahani,

Is gum ki aag ko bujaye bhi to kaise “Meena”,
Ke ashkon ka samundar to khud hai jalta pani!!!


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Tosha

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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2005, 04:36:55 PM »

woh..!!!
...

raaz hai ajab ke aakhon main hai jalta pahi
dil main hai kasak zuban pe ajab kahani


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Meena

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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2005, 04:42:43 PM »

wah wah toshuu!!

lafzo ke roop hai labon pe hai kushiyon ki dastak,
aur ankhon me jalte hai udasi ke deepak!!!


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isha_verma7

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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2005, 04:42:50 PM »

wah wah wah kya baat hai meena ji...........bahut achaa as usual!!!!!!...........dil ko chuu gaya


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Meena

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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2005, 04:44:11 PM »

shukriya ishu shukriya...aab tak meri poems tume pasand ati hai :D


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Tosha

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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2005, 04:51:12 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

wah wah toshuu!!

lafzo ke roop hai labon pe hai kushiyon ki dastak,
aur ankhon me jalte hai udasi ke deepak!!!

nazro se chupa na koi raaz hai
chare ho hazar par aakhon main chalakta pyaar hai


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2005, 05:05:49 PM »

very nice work Tosha..................Meena............. tongue3


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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2005, 05:07:52 PM »

wah meena sis..........bohat hi khoob.......nice Tosha.


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Meena

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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2005, 05:17:32 PM »

oh shukriya waheed and nidhi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2005, 05:35:33 PM »

ur welcome Meena.................................:oops:,,,,,,


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Meena

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«Reply #10 on: August 26, 2005, 01:12:02 PM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

ur welcome Meena.................................:oops:,,,,,,

dont sharmao mundeya!! :D


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nikki

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«Reply #11 on: August 26, 2005, 07:35:49 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

wow Meena sis beautifull ...........................


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Meena

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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2005, 04:06:49 PM »

shukriya ji shukriya ...nikki kuddiye!!!!!!!!!!!

:D


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2005, 06:40:21 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

ur welcome Meena.................................:oops:,,,,,,

dont sharmao mundeya!! :D

HOR kya

?? :oops:


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HumTum

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«Reply #14 on: September 05, 2005, 11:46:45 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Meena-JII

Ankh se gira ek ashk, iski keemat kisi ne na mani,
Dard me dooba hai yeh woh jazbaat, jiski haqiqat kisi ne na jani

iss sher ko thoda sa modify ler rha hoon ... Gustakii muaf ho jhaanpnaah !!! yeh kuch yun hota to ...... jiada katil lagta ....

Jo gira ankh se ashq uski keemat kissi ne na jani
Keh rha tha woh mere dard e jazbaat ki khaani !!!

ab jawab ....

nazroon mein chupaye huye hai hum "Jalta pani"
milli hai mujhey dilbhar se yeh ishq ki nishaani

kyun mere halaat pe ashq bhaa rhey ho goya
aap bhi sanam insaan bano batien kro insaani

kehte they 'Sachii muhoobat kabhi mar nhi sakti'
ajii chodiye HumTum ji, yeh dastaan hui purani !!!


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