- Jalta Pani -

by Meena on August 24, 2005, 04:13:02 PM

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Meena

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«Reply #15 on: September 07, 2005, 03:20:40 PM »

wah wah very nice humtum ji...aur apne jo modify kiya woh bhi acha alga menu!! :D


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«Reply #16 on: September 07, 2005, 03:31:46 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

wah wah very nice humtum ji...aur apne jo modify kiya woh bhi acha alga menu!! :D

aap ne aagey kya kiya ?

main bikhar jaaunga,aansuo ki tarah
is qadar pyar se badduaayen na de
yeh thread aage bad jayega zalim
ik sher tu bhi yha chipka de !!


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«Reply #17 on: September 07, 2005, 03:35:59 PM »

lol acha ji

dil me to gum hai, ao thodi guftgu kar le,
is ronka-e-mehefil ko thoda gum me bhar de!


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«Reply #18 on: September 07, 2005, 03:42:19 PM »

acha ji ...

khuda ki itni badi qaynaat me maine,
bas ek shakhs ko maanga, mujhe wahi na mila


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«Reply #19 on: September 07, 2005, 03:49:12 PM »

sach hai duayen sab ki hoti nahin yaha puri,
shayad zindagi me kafir banna hi tha zaroori!


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«Reply #20 on: September 07, 2005, 03:53:00 PM »

kafir ..... kis ka qatal ker ke aaye hai jhaanpnaah ?

shiddat ki dhoop tez havan ke bavzood,
main shaakh se gira hoon..nazar se gira nhi !!


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«Reply #21 on: September 07, 2005, 03:56:33 PM »

apne wajood ka :wink:
gud one janab iska jawab nahin mere pas!! :D


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«Reply #22 on: September 07, 2005, 03:58:57 PM »

chaliye iska de dijiye ....

log toot jate hain,ek ghar banane mein
tum taras nahi khaate bastiyan jalane mein !!!


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«Reply #23 on: September 07, 2005, 04:05:27 PM »

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats a gud one!! really meaing ful!! mai koi super duper shayar nahin jo ke itne ache sher ka jawab bana sakhon sad5


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«Reply #24 on: September 07, 2005, 04:09:02 PM »

Meena -JII sare yoindia mein aap ki shayri ke charche hai .. kahir ..... chaliye iss pe gour farmaiye !!!

koi rut pyar ki koi rut intizar ki
aaj bhi wahi milti hai saza pyaar ki
shayron ne tod di riwayet ikhrar ki
ab bhi aati hai huzur rut takraar ki !!!


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«Reply #25 on: September 07, 2005, 04:17:43 PM »

hmmmm

shayari nahi nyeh, yeh mere gum ki kahani hai,
hal e dil baya karne ki yeh ruth purani hai,
kahi ro na de duniya wale mere gum me bhi,
nazm likhnme ki yeh adat humne chudani hai!


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HumTum

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«Reply #26 on: September 08, 2005, 01:09:29 PM »

dekh lijiye hamari halaat chehre se janab
mat puhiye ke dil mein gauv hai kitne !!!!

kuch arz hai ...

dard guzrta hai jab haad se apni
to utha ke qalam, nazm likhte hai
mere har ik alfaaz mein mujhey
aap hi ke zulm o sitam dhikte hai !!!


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«Reply #27 on: September 08, 2005, 05:14:22 PM »

very nice humtum ji

humare kyie hue sitam unko yaad hai,
humara dil jo tooda hai woh kuch bhi nahin,
humara hasna unko gawara na tha,
ristha ansowon se humara joda woh kuch bhi nahiN!!


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«Reply #28 on: September 08, 2005, 05:51:22 PM »

Quote from: "HumTum"

chaliye iska de dijiye ....

log toot jate hain,ek ghar banane mein
tum taras nahi khaate bastiyan jalane mein !!!

wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob HumTum ji....

Good shayari Meena ji!!


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«Reply #29 on: September 09, 2005, 12:32:23 PM »

Pooja ji[/u]

App ka bhut bhut Shukriyan !!!

Meena -JII [/u]

hum pe woh dhaa ke sitam khush hote hai
chaliye aap ke zulm o sitam sir ankhoon par
bevffai ka jo hum pe lgata hai ilzaam "Meena"
aap ka woh bhi karam sir ankhoon par !!!