jam gaye saare aanshu .....:Shayri-E-Dard

punam

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zindagi ki safar me khud ko tanha payi
yun toh sab hai pass yeh dard kaisa samjh na payi....

toot jaate hain her riste jodne se pehle hi
aisa kyun hota hai iss sawal ka jawaab dhoond na payi...

jamm gaye sab aansoo mere yun hi apne aap
koi nahi apne dil ko samjha na payi...


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honeyrose

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2008, 08:28:25 AM »

bohat acha likha hai punam dear.. Usual Smile


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baadal102

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2008, 09:15:52 AM »

bahoot aache punam

Kuch lines likhe hai
galat ho to plz maaf ker dena

Samjhaya bahut dil ko lakin,
Ranho se un ke gujar hi jaata hai,
Phoolo ke tamanna hai lakin,
Kaanto ka taaz hamesha pahnaaya jaata hai.....

Baadal


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Roja

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2008, 09:51:51 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 07, 2008, 07:48:55 AM

Punam bahut accha likha hai tumne.


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punam

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2008, 06:42:52 PM »

Thanx Honey di...

Thanx shihab ji..chalo aap ko acha laga..

Baadal ji thanx ...bahot acha likhe aap ne...

Roja di..thanx ...bas kuch sikh rahi hun...


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2008, 06:50:52 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 07, 2008, 07:48:55 AM

kya khoob likha hai aapne punam ji
kuch chand lines likh rahi hoon umeed hai ki aapko pasand aayegi

dard jab hadd se badne laga to socha unhe bhula dein
par aayei na wo yaad aisa kuch kar na paayi

uthi kalam aur kuch kagaz par likhna chaha
par haale dil bayaan mei unhe kar na paayi


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syednaami

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2008, 07:45:38 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 07, 2008, 07:48:55 AM

zindagi ki safar me khud ko tanha payi
yun toh sab hai pass yeh dard kaisa samjh na payi....
.............
jamm gaye sab aansoo mere yun hi apne aap
koi nahi apne dil ko samjha na payi...

Jeevan men ab kyunkar rusvai, -
Jab apne dil ko banaaya tune harjai, -

Sanvar jaate hain jo bolen sachai, -
Darr men rah kissine kab muhabbat pai, -

Jab haal-e-dil kehne se tu katrai, -
To koi kaise kahe tum ne di hai duhai, -

Tune har waqt man men bhari tanhai, -
issliye har gham men khudko jalai. -

(Syed Naami)

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MashaAllah, sab dosto ne acha saath nibhaya hai jawab dene main.
Khaas tor par Shihab aur Kaushik ne kamaal ka sur bhara hai apne apne
ashaar main. wah bhai wah...


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syednaami

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2008, 08:08:18 AM »

Arey chhodo Shihab baba, aap bhi mazaaq karte ho.
Thanks a lot so nice of you baba,. Winking


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syednaami

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2008, 03:07:00 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on May 14, 2008, 12:36:39 PM

Jam Gaye Hain Seene Main Aanshu Kahin
Ik Mudat Si Ho Gayi Ye Aankhein Royi Nahi.

Yun Hi Chalte Rehte Hai Tanha Tanha Yahan
Fir Bhi Mujhe.e.Kismat Tujhse Gila Koi Nahi

Rote rahe iss aas par ki yaad woh na aaye, -
Aansun to hai sahara dard ko chupaane ka, -

Tanhaiyon ne bhi saath chhod diya hai ab, -
Qismat men jab likha hai yaad men tadapne ka. -

(Syed Naami)


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syednaami

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2008, 06:00:44 PM »

Jashan hota nahin saraabon men, -
Dhanak ka rang khilta nahin tahkhanon men, -
Qaid rahti nahin par dafan hoti hain, -
Khwahishen apni doob jaati hain sailabon men. -

(Syed Naami)


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honeyrose

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2008, 07:19:15 AM »

Shihab aur Syed bohat khoob likha hai.. Usual Smile


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syednaami

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2008, 07:34:31 AM »

Shukriya Shihab baba aur Honeyrose aunti...


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mushiprince

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #12 on: September 20, 2010, 02:51:37 PM »

Quote from: punam on May 07, 2008, 07:48:55 AM

Hanste hue, aankhon main kyun aa jaate hain ye aansoo

Yun khushi ko adhoora sa bana jaate hain ye aansoo

Dard itna hai saha, khaali ho gaya samandar ashkon ka

Jaane kahan se aankhon main bhar jaate hain ye aansoo

Khush hoon main, koi shikwa zamane se na taqdeer se

Meri iss baat ko jhoota kyun bana jaate hain ye aansoo

Shayad khabar hai in ko bhi kis qadar tanha hoon main

Tanhaayi main mera saath nibha jaate hain ye AAnsoo!!!


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KOYAL46

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Re: jam gaye saare aanshu .....

«Reply #13 on: September 20, 2010, 05:30:56 PM »

Punamjee achhi lines hain aap ki..... Applause

Zindagi k safar me aksar aysa hota hai
Tu he nahi sab kay saath aysa hota hai

Jamm gaye hain aansoo mere bhee sakhee....
Jamaane ho gaye palkon se gire nahi ye aansoo

Koi bahut oodaas si baat kaho k baras jaayen
Dil ki gehraayi me dabe-jamme ye mere aansoo

Quote from: punam on May 07, 2008, 07:48:55 AM


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